Comments received on poems by Gelyn



Mama
WriteBeLight said:

I cut and pasted it to translate into English and discovered such a sweet message! Lovely child you are.

December 21st, 2016 14:43

Mama
Augustus said:

Very nice.

December 21st, 2016 14:39

Weak
WriteBeLight said:

I feel a message of a person who wants to improve the quality of their life knowing that for it to happen it can only come from inside.

December 19th, 2016 06:28

Cupid Stupid
myinnervoice said:

I think the relationships that end unresolved, as in no real closure outside of the relationship ending, stay with you for a long time. im only 26 but im starting to wonder if they stay with you forever. I loved it, thank you.

December 17th, 2016 05:57

IF WISHES WERE HORSES
Gelyn said:

Thank you all guys

December 17th, 2016 05:51

IF WISHES WERE HORSES
Elegant_Style said:

so cute and beautiful!! I love the last two lines

December 16th, 2016 17:23

IF WISHES WERE HORSES
WriteBeLight said:

Lot of interesting wishes put very well.

December 16th, 2016 13:07

IF WISHES WERE HORSES
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written poem

December 16th, 2016 12:53

Love and Sweet
Faith_01 said:

This defines love omg 😭Perfect thank you for sharing this 👌🏽

December 14th, 2016 17:38

Everything Change
Faith_01 said:

This is 100% true and meaningful huns~

December 14th, 2016 17:36

Everything Change
Gelyn said:

Amen to that. ... Thanks Brian for this comment

December 14th, 2016 16:21

Everything Change
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

VERY TRUE GEL ~ Thanks for caring and sharing. In a dynamic World ~ everything changes ~ we have to make sure we always change for the better ! Only one person never changes and that is JESUS ! He is always the same ~ Yesterday & Today & Forever ~ AMEN ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN

December 14th, 2016 09:55

Love and Sweet
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing GEL and nearly 20 years ago ~ also a mature poem so i guess you were not FIVE ! You made my Springs flow ~ You made my Wings glow ~ love those metaphors for LOVE. You are lovely ~ HUGS BRIAN

December 12th, 2016 11:22

Love and Sweet
WriteBeLight said:

Very nice feeling to this!

December 12th, 2016 09:51

Love and Sweet
Tony36 said:

Very well written and expressed

December 12th, 2016 08:05

More Than Everything
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully Awesome write

December 11th, 2016 10:26

More Than Everything
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GRACIAS GEL POR UNA POEMS D\'AMOR ESPECIAL ! STANZA 1. ~ speaks of LOVING DEEPLY ~ S2. speaks of TALKING SWEETLY and S3. of A BIG CRUUUUUUUUSH ! ~ Thai is TRUE LOVE ~ Hugs BRIAN.

December 11th, 2016 07:58

Thank you
Tony36 said:

Thank you for writing this excellent write

December 10th, 2016 18:41

Thank you
Christina8 said:

Very nice poem, gelyn! I loved the part about the crayon . Great job!

December 10th, 2016 10:13

Thank you
WriteBeLight said:

Thank you for writing this. Nice work!

December 10th, 2016 07:17

Thank you
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANK YOU GEL For another lovely and gentle poem ! Love all your poems ~ love you too ~ BRIAN

December 10th, 2016 05:59

Cupid Stupid
Tony36 said:

Awesome write, love it

December 9th, 2016 09:32

Cupid Stupid
WriteBeLight said:

I love that description of the arrow, the potion and the rest! Excellent.

December 9th, 2016 06:41

Cupid Stupid
Gelyn said:

Thanks Kathy

December 9th, 2016 05:37

I Hate The Thought Of Losing You
WriteBeLight said:

Very touching and beautiful.

December 8th, 2016 06:34

I Hate The Thought Of Losing You
HappyMarii said:

I loved reading this! It felt like reading the lyrics on a song! Thank you for sharing ♡

December 8th, 2016 01:38

How Could I
Jeff said:

Great write

December 4th, 2016 12:11

How Could I
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

It happens GEL ~ to Men as well a Women ~ I call it OBSESSION and it is very very hard to break off ~ even long after it has all finished. Thinking of you Hugs ~ BRIAN

December 4th, 2016 11:26

Because I want you To Be Happy
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

November 30th, 2016 14:17

Because I want you To Be Happy
WriteBeLight said:

Very real situation for people and different approach to a relationship poem. Excellent.

November 30th, 2016 12:12

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