Comments received on poems by gelyn



IF WISHES WERE HORSES
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written poem

December 16th, 2016 12:53

Love and Sweet
Faith_01 said:

This defines love omg 😭Perfect thank you for sharing this 👌🏽

December 14th, 2016 17:38

Everything Change
Faith_01 said:

This is 100% true and meaningful huns~

December 14th, 2016 17:36

Everything Change
gelyn said:

Amen to that. ... Thanks Brian for this comment

December 14th, 2016 16:21

Everything Change
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

VERY TRUE GEL ~ Thanks for caring and sharing. In a dynamic World ~ everything changes ~ we have to make sure we always change for the better ! Only one person never changes and that is JESUS ! He is always the same ~ Yesterday & Today & Forever ~ AMEN ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN

December 14th, 2016 09:55

Love and Sweet
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing GEL and nearly 20 years ago ~ also a mature poem so i guess you were not FIVE ! You made my Springs flow ~ You made my Wings glow ~ love those metaphors for LOVE. You are lovely ~ HUGS BRIAN

December 12th, 2016 11:22

Love and Sweet
WriteBeLight said:

Very nice feeling to this!

December 12th, 2016 09:51

Love and Sweet
Tony36 said:

Very well written and expressed

December 12th, 2016 08:05

More Than Everything
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully Awesome write

December 11th, 2016 10:26

More Than Everything
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GRACIAS GEL POR UNA POEMS D\'AMOR ESPECIAL ! STANZA 1. ~ speaks of LOVING DEEPLY ~ S2. speaks of TALKING SWEETLY and S3. of A BIG CRUUUUUUUUSH ! ~ Thai is TRUE LOVE ~ Hugs BRIAN.

December 11th, 2016 07:58

Thank you
Tony36 said:

Thank you for writing this excellent write

December 10th, 2016 18:41

Thank you
Christina8 said:

Very nice poem, gelyn! I loved the part about the crayon . Great job!

December 10th, 2016 10:13

Thank you
WriteBeLight said:

Thank you for writing this. Nice work!

December 10th, 2016 07:17

Thank you
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANK YOU GEL For another lovely and gentle poem ! Love all your poems ~ love you too ~ BRIAN

December 10th, 2016 05:59

Cupid Stupid
Tony36 said:

Awesome write, love it

December 9th, 2016 09:32

Cupid Stupid
WriteBeLight said:

I love that description of the arrow, the potion and the rest! Excellent.

December 9th, 2016 06:41

Cupid Stupid
gelyn said:

Thanks Kathy

December 9th, 2016 05:37

I Hate The Thought Of Losing You
WriteBeLight said:

Very touching and beautiful.

December 8th, 2016 06:34

I Hate The Thought Of Losing You
HappyMarii said:

I loved reading this! It felt like reading the lyrics on a song! Thank you for sharing ♡

December 8th, 2016 01:38

How Could I
Jeff said:

Great write

December 4th, 2016 12:11

How Could I
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

It happens GEL ~ to Men as well a Women ~ I call it OBSESSION and it is very very hard to break off ~ even long after it has all finished. Thinking of you Hugs ~ BRIAN

December 4th, 2016 11:26

Because I want you To Be Happy
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

November 30th, 2016 14:17

Because I want you To Be Happy
WriteBeLight said:

Very real situation for people and different approach to a relationship poem. Excellent.

November 30th, 2016 12:12

Because I want you To Be Happy
willyweed said:

Oh what a lucky man he was.
I think one has to be happy with self before they try and make someone else happy. your poem is good nice rhyme and meter. ww

November 30th, 2016 09:42

My Light
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WOW GEL ~ This is so so beautiful and a true prayer of repentance to Our Father in Heaven who hears and answers all our prayers. Whatever you have done (or had done to you in the past) God understands and God forgives you ! If we confess our sins (however terrible) each night we start the next day ~ PURE CLEAN & HOLY and free from all our sin and GOD even enables us to forget. God is light and God is love. The responses you are getting are lovely ~ We all \"Love you in the Spirit\" and are praying for you every day that God will transform you into the Lovely pure and holy Girl you want to be and God wants you to be ~ AMEN Spiritual HUGS ~ BRIAN

November 27th, 2016 10:50

My Light
Tony36 said:

Awesome prayer

November 27th, 2016 09:51

My Light
WriteBeLight said:

So beautiful. Lovely prayer☺️😇

November 27th, 2016 09:30

I\'m your Barbie Doll
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 24th, 2016 09:26

I\'m your Barbie Doll
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GRACIAS GELYN ~ For sharing and caring. I try never to treat my Ladies like Barbies. Locked up in a box and only taken out for my pleasure. I have always been very proud of my Amigas and want them to be with me in public sharing my life ! In my book ~ My Amigas are sensitive human beings to be loved 24/7 and not wrapped in plastic to be used \"as and when\". Thinking of you caring for you ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN

November 24th, 2016 05:01

In Love With
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written poem

November 23rd, 2016 08:54

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