Comments received on poems by Gelyn
The First Time We Kissed
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful GEL ~ I felt it too ! The first kiss wit a new lover is always electric and immediately you know the level to which your new will take you. The thrill of it is you are both helpless to stop it ! CON AMOR ~ QUE SERA ~ SERA Thanks BRIAN.
February 10th, 2017 09:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful GEL ~ I felt it too ! The first kiss wit a new lover is always electric and immediately you know the level to which your new will take you. The thrill of it is you are both helpless to stop it ! CON AMOR ~ QUE SERA ~ SERA Thanks BRIAN.
February 10th, 2017 09:45
Be Positive
Aals said:
My dad tells me this everyday, one of the most truthful and important life lessons. Hard for some but not impossible. I love this, and your word scheme towards the end
February 7th, 2017 21:59
Aals said:
My dad tells me this everyday, one of the most truthful and important life lessons. Hard for some but not impossible. I love this, and your word scheme towards the end
February 7th, 2017 21:59
I Can
Shona Loya said:
Well constructed and courageous. A brid sitting on a tree branch is never afraid of the branch breaking becuase it\'s trust is not on the branch but on i\'ts own wings .BELIEVE IN YOURSELF. I
February 6th, 2017 08:59
Shona Loya said:
Well constructed and courageous. A brid sitting on a tree branch is never afraid of the branch breaking becuase it\'s trust is not on the branch but on i\'ts own wings .BELIEVE IN YOURSELF. I
February 6th, 2017 08:59
Inside the storm
WriteBeLight said:
A lot of great work went into this, I can tell :)
January 25th, 2017 12:30
WriteBeLight said:
A lot of great work went into this, I can tell :)
January 25th, 2017 12:30
Is That A Sign?
Terry dailey said:
Written in loves despair shows a poets heart.. Good job at invokeing feelings and questiomable doubt. If you feel your words readers will too. The added roman numerals did take from the read but overall it was a great read.
January 17th, 2017 00:30
Terry dailey said:
Written in loves despair shows a poets heart.. Good job at invokeing feelings and questiomable doubt. If you feel your words readers will too. The added roman numerals did take from the read but overall it was a great read.
January 17th, 2017 00:30
DRAW D&E ACROSTIC
Gelyn said:
Hahaha. ..Brian You got it right. .. He\'s my puppy love. ... but I already moved on. .I\'m just sharing this coz this...my first attempt of ACROSTIC. .Thanks also to Mr. Tony and Miss Kathy for the comment
January 13th, 2017 19:04
Gelyn said:
Hahaha. ..Brian You got it right. .. He\'s my puppy love. ... but I already moved on. .I\'m just sharing this coz this...my first attempt of ACROSTIC. .Thanks also to Mr. Tony and Miss Kathy for the comment
January 13th, 2017 19:04
DRAW D&E ACROSTIC
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks GELYN for an excellent poem in Structure and Sentiment ! Acrostics are difficult ~ Rhyming Acrostics impossible ! Well done ! EDWARD FERMIN seems a real nice Guy ~ pit you let him slip so so far away. Thinking of you ~ HUGS BRIAN
January 13th, 2017 08:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks GELYN for an excellent poem in Structure and Sentiment ! Acrostics are difficult ~ Rhyming Acrostics impossible ! Well done ! EDWARD FERMIN seems a real nice Guy ~ pit you let him slip so so far away. Thinking of you ~ HUGS BRIAN
January 13th, 2017 08:43
jocelyn
WriteBeLight said:
So sweet of your and such a pretty name she has. It is wonderful you and your sister have such a great relationship.
December 26th, 2016 07:27
WriteBeLight said:
So sweet of your and such a pretty name she has. It is wonderful you and your sister have such a great relationship.
December 26th, 2016 07:27
My Best Friend
Gelyn said:
Happy holidays to all and thanks for the comments that really made my day
December 25th, 2016 12:51
Gelyn said:
Happy holidays to all and thanks for the comments that really made my day
December 25th, 2016 12:51
My Best Friend
Augustus said:
Mamá will be happy to,receive this. Hugs. Merry Christmas.
December 24th, 2016 22:55
Augustus said:
Mamá will be happy to,receive this. Hugs. Merry Christmas.
December 24th, 2016 22:55
My Best Friend
WriteBeLight said:
You are very lucky to have such a loving Mom. Very well done😊
December 24th, 2016 10:49
WriteBeLight said:
You are very lucky to have such a loving Mom. Very well done😊
December 24th, 2016 10:49
My Best Friend
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WONDERFUL GEL ~ Thanks for caring and sharing ! A GIR\'S (and a BOY\'S) beast friend will always be his MOTHER ~ or STEP-MOTHER ~ a person who lovingly takes on another\'s birth child and rears them as her own ! You can\'t have the BEST MOM in the WORLD Gel because she\'s mine ! (JOKE !). Love and Hugs for CHRISTMAS ~ Your Friend BRIAN
December 24th, 2016 06:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WONDERFUL GEL ~ Thanks for caring and sharing ! A GIR\'S (and a BOY\'S) beast friend will always be his MOTHER ~ or STEP-MOTHER ~ a person who lovingly takes on another\'s birth child and rears them as her own ! You can\'t have the BEST MOM in the WORLD Gel because she\'s mine ! (JOKE !). Love and Hugs for CHRISTMAS ~ Your Friend BRIAN
December 24th, 2016 06:49
Mama
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS GELYN ~ In my experience GOD created all FILIPINAS very beautiful in looks and nature. Beautiful DAUGHTERS and beautiful MAMAS ! Just as well I have adegree in GREEK ! Like your experience ~ My Mom ~ gave me comforting words to strengthen me ~ She made my dreams come true and encouraged me to pursue the best things in life ~ AMEN ! Please check my latest poem and my FUSION (12 Days of Christmas)
Hugs for Christmas ~ BRIAN
December 22nd, 2016 06:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS GELYN ~ In my experience GOD created all FILIPINAS very beautiful in looks and nature. Beautiful DAUGHTERS and beautiful MAMAS ! Just as well I have adegree in GREEK ! Like your experience ~ My Mom ~ gave me comforting words to strengthen me ~ She made my dreams come true and encouraged me to pursue the best things in life ~ AMEN ! Please check my latest poem and my FUSION (12 Days of Christmas)
Hugs for Christmas ~ BRIAN
December 22nd, 2016 06:43
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