Comments received on poems by Gelyn
Infidelity Sucks
Augustus said:
I remember the awful anger and sadness of a woman who had just found out her dad had been unfaithful. That was once removed. So your hurt must be even more profound. Nicely done.
March 1st, 2017 18:51
Augustus said:
I remember the awful anger and sadness of a woman who had just found out her dad had been unfaithful. That was once removed. So your hurt must be even more profound. Nicely done.
March 1st, 2017 18:51
Infidelity Sucks
WriteBeLight said:
Pulls a one\'s heartstrings. Excellent work, expressing the pain.
March 1st, 2017 05:59
WriteBeLight said:
Pulls a one\'s heartstrings. Excellent work, expressing the pain.
March 1st, 2017 05:59
I love you more than love
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful love filled emotive write.
March 1st, 2017 03:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful love filled emotive write.
March 1st, 2017 03:05
Between I Love You and Goodbye
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
February 27th, 2017 09:43
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
February 27th, 2017 09:43
Between I Love You and Goodbye
WriteBeLight said:
Love the line about the pebble in a shoe. I can relate. Good job.
February 27th, 2017 08:40
WriteBeLight said:
Love the line about the pebble in a shoe. I can relate. Good job.
February 27th, 2017 08:40
Between I Love You and Goodbye
willyweed said:
I love this work But I to must say good bye....so good bye for now write on WW
February 27th, 2017 08:00
willyweed said:
I love this work But I to must say good bye....so good bye for now write on WW
February 27th, 2017 08:00
Between I Love You and Goodbye
P.H.Rose said:
The hardest word to
Speak or hear....goodbye!!
Great poem ....well done
February 27th, 2017 07:44
P.H.Rose said:
The hardest word to
Speak or hear....goodbye!!
Great poem ....well done
February 27th, 2017 07:44
Gas came from nowhere ( Senryu Form)
Gelyn said:
Thank you guys for the comments. .. it\'s simply a fart .. lol. .. but thanks it can be that way
February 27th, 2017 07:16
Gelyn said:
Thank you guys for the comments. .. it\'s simply a fart .. lol. .. but thanks it can be that way
February 27th, 2017 07:16
Gas came from nowhere ( Senryu Form)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks GEL for a very elegant SENRYU with a very ODIOUS message. Necessary operations like \"muck spreading\" and \"Chemical Industries\" do release odious gasses BUT if we know the origin we can control the smell and make the environment habitable again ! Yours BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
February 26th, 2017 02:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks GEL for a very elegant SENRYU with a very ODIOUS message. Necessary operations like \"muck spreading\" and \"Chemical Industries\" do release odious gasses BUT if we know the origin we can control the smell and make the environment habitable again ! Yours BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
February 26th, 2017 02:27
If You (Diacope + Anaphora Form)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS GEL ~ For sharing another personal heart jerk poem in a CLASSICAL FORM ! MPS needs a little more culture ! Love the form and function of the poem and repetition is the key to the sensuousness of this ode. DIACOPE ~ repetition as in ~ DIE ~ DIE ~ DIE and ANAPHORA ~ repetition of IF YOU WILL at the beginning of each line. Your poetic erudition kick started my brain into action for my day at work ~ Thank you ~ Poetic Hugs ~ BRIAN. Please check my poem today ~ which is a humble ACROSTIC with lots of internal rhyme Thanks B
February 23rd, 2017 05:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS GEL ~ For sharing another personal heart jerk poem in a CLASSICAL FORM ! MPS needs a little more culture ! Love the form and function of the poem and repetition is the key to the sensuousness of this ode. DIACOPE ~ repetition as in ~ DIE ~ DIE ~ DIE and ANAPHORA ~ repetition of IF YOU WILL at the beginning of each line. Your poetic erudition kick started my brain into action for my day at work ~ Thank you ~ Poetic Hugs ~ BRIAN. Please check my poem today ~ which is a humble ACROSTIC with lots of internal rhyme Thanks B
February 23rd, 2017 05:32
You Are My Academic
P.H.Rose said:
Back with another
Cracker...
Very well done
My dear.!!!!!
February 21st, 2017 19:19
P.H.Rose said:
Back with another
Cracker...
Very well done
My dear.!!!!!
February 21st, 2017 19:19
You Are My Academic
Stephanie Showers said:
OMG - I LOVE THIS! WONDERFUL WRITE!
February 21st, 2017 11:20
Stephanie Showers said:
OMG - I LOVE THIS! WONDERFUL WRITE!
February 21st, 2017 11:20
Fly With Me
John-Paul M said:
Hi Gelyn. I enjoyed this poem. Simple yet very powerful. Well done. Look forward to more.
February 20th, 2017 19:35
John-Paul M said:
Hi Gelyn. I enjoyed this poem. Simple yet very powerful. Well done. Look forward to more.
February 20th, 2017 19:35
Fly With Me
Elbeanzio said:
Inspirational to read. Lovely to see pure hearted energy pushing through regardless. The sort of strength we need if we ever find peace. Like a dove breaking through a black cloud and letting the sunlight through. Thank you
February 20th, 2017 19:09
Elbeanzio said:
Inspirational to read. Lovely to see pure hearted energy pushing through regardless. The sort of strength we need if we ever find peace. Like a dove breaking through a black cloud and letting the sunlight through. Thank you
February 20th, 2017 19:09
Fly With Me
P.H.Rose said:
Hi Gelyn, haven\'t
Seen any of your
Poems in a while..
This is so very good.
Worth the wait...
Well done !!!!!
February 20th, 2017 18:40
P.H.Rose said:
Hi Gelyn, haven\'t
Seen any of your
Poems in a while..
This is so very good.
Worth the wait...
Well done !!!!!
February 20th, 2017 18:40
Dancing With Fireflies
Gelyn said:
Thank you... your feedbacks really made me smile coz you guys remembered your childhood
February 13th, 2017 21:18
Gelyn said:
Thank you... your feedbacks really made me smile coz you guys remembered your childhood
February 13th, 2017 21:18
Dancing With Fireflies
Tony36 said:
Wonderful write. Growing up on a farm I chased many of those in my childhood
February 13th, 2017 12:20
Tony36 said:
Wonderful write. Growing up on a farm I chased many of those in my childhood
February 13th, 2017 12:20
If I Got A Power
Augustus said:
Lovely way to express your love for another.
February 11th, 2017 12:04
Augustus said:
Lovely way to express your love for another.
February 11th, 2017 12:04
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