Comments received on poems by gelyn
Between I Love You and Goodbye
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
February 27th, 2017 09:43
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
February 27th, 2017 09:43
Between I Love You and Goodbye
WriteBeLight said:
Love the line about the pebble in a shoe. I can relate. Good job.
February 27th, 2017 08:40
WriteBeLight said:
Love the line about the pebble in a shoe. I can relate. Good job.
February 27th, 2017 08:40
Between I Love You and Goodbye
willyweed said:
I love this work But I to must say good bye....so good bye for now write on WW
February 27th, 2017 08:00
willyweed said:
I love this work But I to must say good bye....so good bye for now write on WW
February 27th, 2017 08:00
Between I Love You and Goodbye
P.H.Rose said:
The hardest word to
Speak or hear....goodbye!!
Great poem ....well done
February 27th, 2017 07:44
P.H.Rose said:
The hardest word to
Speak or hear....goodbye!!
Great poem ....well done
February 27th, 2017 07:44
Gas came from nowhere ( Senryu Form)
gelyn said:
Thank you guys for the comments. .. it\'s simply a fart .. lol. .. but thanks it can be that way
February 27th, 2017 07:16
gelyn said:
Thank you guys for the comments. .. it\'s simply a fart .. lol. .. but thanks it can be that way
February 27th, 2017 07:16
Gas came from nowhere ( Senryu Form)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks GEL for a very elegant SENRYU with a very ODIOUS message. Necessary operations like \"muck spreading\" and \"Chemical Industries\" do release odious gasses BUT if we know the origin we can control the smell and make the environment habitable again ! Yours BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
February 26th, 2017 02:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks GEL for a very elegant SENRYU with a very ODIOUS message. Necessary operations like \"muck spreading\" and \"Chemical Industries\" do release odious gasses BUT if we know the origin we can control the smell and make the environment habitable again ! Yours BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
February 26th, 2017 02:27
If You (Diacope + Anaphora Form)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS GEL ~ For sharing another personal heart jerk poem in a CLASSICAL FORM ! MPS needs a little more culture ! Love the form and function of the poem and repetition is the key to the sensuousness of this ode. DIACOPE ~ repetition as in ~ DIE ~ DIE ~ DIE and ANAPHORA ~ repetition of IF YOU WILL at the beginning of each line. Your poetic erudition kick started my brain into action for my day at work ~ Thank you ~ Poetic Hugs ~ BRIAN. Please check my poem today ~ which is a humble ACROSTIC with lots of internal rhyme Thanks B
February 23rd, 2017 05:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS GEL ~ For sharing another personal heart jerk poem in a CLASSICAL FORM ! MPS needs a little more culture ! Love the form and function of the poem and repetition is the key to the sensuousness of this ode. DIACOPE ~ repetition as in ~ DIE ~ DIE ~ DIE and ANAPHORA ~ repetition of IF YOU WILL at the beginning of each line. Your poetic erudition kick started my brain into action for my day at work ~ Thank you ~ Poetic Hugs ~ BRIAN. Please check my poem today ~ which is a humble ACROSTIC with lots of internal rhyme Thanks B
February 23rd, 2017 05:32
You Are My Academic
P.H.Rose said:
Back with another
Cracker...
Very well done
My dear.!!!!!
February 21st, 2017 19:19
P.H.Rose said:
Back with another
Cracker...
Very well done
My dear.!!!!!
February 21st, 2017 19:19
You Are My Academic
Stephanie Showers said:
OMG - I LOVE THIS! WONDERFUL WRITE!
February 21st, 2017 11:20
Stephanie Showers said:
OMG - I LOVE THIS! WONDERFUL WRITE!
February 21st, 2017 11:20
Fly With Me
John-Paul M said:
Hi Gelyn. I enjoyed this poem. Simple yet very powerful. Well done. Look forward to more.
February 20th, 2017 19:35
John-Paul M said:
Hi Gelyn. I enjoyed this poem. Simple yet very powerful. Well done. Look forward to more.
February 20th, 2017 19:35
Fly With Me
Elbeanzio said:
Inspirational to read. Lovely to see pure hearted energy pushing through regardless. The sort of strength we need if we ever find peace. Like a dove breaking through a black cloud and letting the sunlight through. Thank you
February 20th, 2017 19:09
Elbeanzio said:
Inspirational to read. Lovely to see pure hearted energy pushing through regardless. The sort of strength we need if we ever find peace. Like a dove breaking through a black cloud and letting the sunlight through. Thank you
February 20th, 2017 19:09
Fly With Me
P.H.Rose said:
Hi Gelyn, haven\'t
Seen any of your
Poems in a while..
This is so very good.
Worth the wait...
Well done !!!!!
February 20th, 2017 18:40
P.H.Rose said:
Hi Gelyn, haven\'t
Seen any of your
Poems in a while..
This is so very good.
Worth the wait...
Well done !!!!!
February 20th, 2017 18:40
Dancing With Fireflies
gelyn said:
Thank you... your feedbacks really made me smile coz you guys remembered your childhood
February 13th, 2017 21:18
gelyn said:
Thank you... your feedbacks really made me smile coz you guys remembered your childhood
February 13th, 2017 21:18
Dancing With Fireflies
Tony36 said:
Wonderful write. Growing up on a farm I chased many of those in my childhood
February 13th, 2017 12:20
Tony36 said:
Wonderful write. Growing up on a farm I chased many of those in my childhood
February 13th, 2017 12:20
If I Got A Power
Augustus said:
Lovely way to express your love for another.
February 11th, 2017 12:04
Augustus said:
Lovely way to express your love for another.
February 11th, 2017 12:04
The First Time We Kissed
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful GEL ~ I felt it too ! The first kiss wit a new lover is always electric and immediately you know the level to which your new will take you. The thrill of it is you are both helpless to stop it ! CON AMOR ~ QUE SERA ~ SERA Thanks BRIAN.
February 10th, 2017 09:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Beautiful GEL ~ I felt it too ! The first kiss wit a new lover is always electric and immediately you know the level to which your new will take you. The thrill of it is you are both helpless to stop it ! CON AMOR ~ QUE SERA ~ SERA Thanks BRIAN.
February 10th, 2017 09:45
Be Positive
Aals said:
My dad tells me this everyday, one of the most truthful and important life lessons. Hard for some but not impossible. I love this, and your word scheme towards the end
February 7th, 2017 21:59
Aals said:
My dad tells me this everyday, one of the most truthful and important life lessons. Hard for some but not impossible. I love this, and your word scheme towards the end
February 7th, 2017 21:59
I Can
Shona Loya said:
Well constructed and courageous. A brid sitting on a tree branch is never afraid of the branch breaking becuase it\'s trust is not on the branch but on i\'ts own wings .BELIEVE IN YOURSELF. I
February 6th, 2017 08:59
Shona Loya said:
Well constructed and courageous. A brid sitting on a tree branch is never afraid of the branch breaking becuase it\'s trust is not on the branch but on i\'ts own wings .BELIEVE IN YOURSELF. I
February 6th, 2017 08:59
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