Comments received on poems by BattleChrist
Ode to Lucifer!!
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent ode, and yet, perishing is no laughing matter, the Lord speaks about a place prepared for the devil and his angels as if it is no desirable place to be, seems to me.
August 3rd, 2011 21:14
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent ode, and yet, perishing is no laughing matter, the Lord speaks about a place prepared for the devil and his angels as if it is no desirable place to be, seems to me.
August 3rd, 2011 21:14
Spirit Fierce!
Cheeky Missy said:
Rather nasty, yet almost fittingly devilish? If we will stand by ourselves in our own strength, then guess you are right that we will be fierce....invoking the devil's aid to stand? In the Lord God alone will we truly stand strong....."even the youths shall faint and be weary, and the young men shall utterly fall: but they that wait upon the Lord shall renew their strength; they shall mount up with wings as eagles; they shall run and not be weary, they shall walk, and not faint." For He says He is able to make us stand. The image you paired with it is excellently fitting. And since I beg to differ, perhaps I should just not comment? Would you prefer that? May 'twould be wiser.
February 12th, 2011 15:22
Cheeky Missy said:
Rather nasty, yet almost fittingly devilish? If we will stand by ourselves in our own strength, then guess you are right that we will be fierce....invoking the devil's aid to stand? In the Lord God alone will we truly stand strong....."even the youths shall faint and be weary, and the young men shall utterly fall: but they that wait upon the Lord shall renew their strength; they shall mount up with wings as eagles; they shall run and not be weary, they shall walk, and not faint." For He says He is able to make us stand. The image you paired with it is excellently fitting. And since I beg to differ, perhaps I should just not comment? Would you prefer that? May 'twould be wiser.
February 12th, 2011 15:22
Inquisition
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmmm. If reminiscent of other experiences in life, which provoke such mental anguish it is excellent; but you intended the real inquisition, which the image you chose so aptly depicts....in that, I rather disagree....did they really torture to death the sinners? I thought the inquisition was for the true, who were condemned by the false and thus so devilishly treated/extinguished. Very fascinating description of the inquisition....evoking the horrors of that devilish practice.
February 12th, 2011 15:04
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmmm. If reminiscent of other experiences in life, which provoke such mental anguish it is excellent; but you intended the real inquisition, which the image you chose so aptly depicts....in that, I rather disagree....did they really torture to death the sinners? I thought the inquisition was for the true, who were condemned by the false and thus so devilishly treated/extinguished. Very fascinating description of the inquisition....evoking the horrors of that devilish practice.
February 12th, 2011 15:04
Spirit Fierce!
Dolphine29 said:
Hi! Well for me, I feel kind of longing and sadness in here. Like you are searching and admiring all features on strength, but … still looking and hoping to find and endure through time.
Good luck, I hope you find what you are looking for.
Best
Dolphine.
February 9th, 2011 12:09
Dolphine29 said:
Hi! Well for me, I feel kind of longing and sadness in here. Like you are searching and admiring all features on strength, but … still looking and hoping to find and endure through time.
Good luck, I hope you find what you are looking for.
Best
Dolphine.
February 9th, 2011 12:09
Surfacing Past
Cheeky Missy said:
I would love to hear it set to music....for even without lyrics, music is exceeding powerful, holding sway over us...with such powerful lyrics as you've given above, it undoubtedly a very moving song. The image is perfect. The lyrics poignant.....I love how you expressed the heartache....Excellent!!
February 8th, 2011 18:44
Cheeky Missy said:
I would love to hear it set to music....for even without lyrics, music is exceeding powerful, holding sway over us...with such powerful lyrics as you've given above, it undoubtedly a very moving song. The image is perfect. The lyrics poignant.....I love how you expressed the heartache....Excellent!!
February 8th, 2011 18:44
