Comments received on poems by SorrowfullyHappy

FredPeyer said:

You are only listening to one side. Now listen to the other side: You are great, you are good, you can be whoever you want to be....Those voices are there too, we just have to listen carefully.

April 5th, 2020 12:04

orchidee said:

No - never listen to them. Easier said then one maybe.
Try this - find an old garment and a pen (not your best gear!). Write all those things on them. Then burn it, or cut it up in small pieces - to help you forget those things. It\'s therapeutic. I tried it once.

April 5th, 2020 02:10

The Life of One
Goldfinch60 said:

All we can do in our life is do our best, some people appear to be more important but they too may be struggling. Live your life in joy and love.

January 8th, 2020 01:03

The Life of One
Maxine Smith said:

I would love to know what it is also .....
A super read.

January 7th, 2020 15:22

Wasted my Life
Goldfinch60 said:

That time is so important to you, enjoy every moment.

November 12th, 2019 01:33

Wasted my Life
Poetic Dan said:

I hope you see that is in you too, heartfelt words. Thank you!

November 11th, 2019 14:42

I\'ve finally done it
Joker44 said:

This is the third poem of yours that I\'ve read so far...
...makes me wanna give you a big smile to cheer you up!

Love and Laughter,

April 20th, 2019 04:34

Crying out
Joker44 said:

Now that you published it here...we all hear ya!

Love and Laughter to you,

April 20th, 2019 04:32

Crying out
Poetic Dan said:

Wow.. Even when people are around I can feel like this.
Beautifully sad and well expressed, you sent out the ripples
There will be an effect

Thank you for sharing
Much appreciated
With peace and respect

April 12th, 2019 05:44

Crying out
Goldfinch60 said:

Somebody will hear you and all will be well.

April 11th, 2019 15:23

Help me
Poetic Dan said:

I know this one well, I hope in this writing you undo that spell. Stopping you from seeing the beauty inside and out!
If my words could get it done, then I\'ve already clicked my fingers for ya!

Thank you for sharing
Much peace and love

March 29th, 2019 06:53

Help me
sylviasearcher said:

A cathartic cry for help.
Are you okay?

March 29th, 2019 02:47

They don\'t know her like I do
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write.

March 22nd, 2019 16:01

They don\'t know her like I do
Sunshinefalling said:

Nice poem. Pain to beauty

March 22nd, 2019 11:09

They don\'t know her like I do
Nicholas Browning said:

If she really was a one night stand, and has no intention of giving to you what you gave to her, then to hell with it. Some women get off thinking that they can use you and do whatever they want. I\'ve been on the end of that a few times. I\'m going to give you a solid piece of advice: Stay away from her. She obviously doesn\'t care about you in a good way. That\'s only assuming that she totally disregards your feelings.
Have you talked to her? I\'m sure you have.
Best regards, Kaneki.

March 22nd, 2019 06:27

They don\'t know her like I do
SorrowfullyHappy said:

I feel so empty

March 22nd, 2019 04:55

Everyone I meet
Poetic Dan said:

Great writing although I must say I guarantee I\'m not one of those you see. But then again that\'s my view, you may see different, it\'s all up to you!

Much peace and respect thanks again for making my mind tick.

March 20th, 2019 21:25

lift your heart
Sad_is_my_emotion said:

I personally relate to this. it accurately describes how I’m feeling right now. Beautiful work.

March 18th, 2019 09:53

lift your heart
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive write but be assured your tears will stop your smile will broaden, love will lift you into the wonder of saying hello to a wonderful life.

March 18th, 2019 02:03

lift your heart
Nicholas Browning said:

The complexity of emotions often leaves me confused. We\'re all just human, I guess.
By the way, is that you Kaneki?

March 18th, 2019 01:12

Giving up on Valentines day
SorrowfullyHappy said:

not really one of my best just venting

February 16th, 2019 23:48

My life
Goldfinch60 said:

The time will come when all will be well again or that you will realise that you must move on, the person for you is out there.
Good emotive write though.

January 21st, 2019 01:41

My life
psychofemale said:

love it, but i want to

January 20th, 2019 18:45

My life
dusk arising said:

Try apologising to her man.

January 20th, 2019 15:03

My life

Thanks for your POEM ~ FRIEND ! It is always sad when we (unwittingly) hurt someone by our Words or Actions ~ especially someone Special ! Im 35 and Ive done it lots of times ~ but time does heal !
Thanks for your comments on todays Poem ~ pleased you understood ~ sometimes poems can be too enigmatic. I love my verbal exchanges with OUTBACK ! I think what was saying to you was ~ WHY should we be constrained by the rules of POETIC FORM (5 7 5 for Haiku & Seneryu ~ 14 lines for a Sonnet ~ Acrostics ~ Vilanelles etc ? Personally I think we should. Discipline in Poetry is essential otherwise it is just Poetic ANARCHY ~ OK ?
Your MPS Friend BRIAN !

January 20th, 2019 11:28

My life
Candlewitch said:


talk to might help. good luck!

*hugs, Cat

January 20th, 2019 11:02

Stain in the Snow
Simon Bromley said:

Loved this, full of emotion. I hope things are ok. Take care.

December 27th, 2018 11:52

Farther from the truth
whisperingquill said:

The truth lies in the fall
it\'s the rise that defines you.
Very emotive write poet

December 20th, 2018 00:50

HangingbyaHalo said:

Caught in the in-between. That is an uneasy feeling

May 30th, 2018 13:33

Give up Give in Part 2
Lorna said:

Nice optimism! Good for you!

May 11th, 2018 05:00

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