Comments received on poems by SorrowfullyHappy
Shy
Goldfinch60 said:
You are not too shy to put your words on here. Good write.
July 18th, 2017 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
You are not too shy to put your words on here. Good write.
July 18th, 2017 00:43
Shy
burning-embers said:
Pretty deep really.. If u don\'t say hello, then no chance of doing the rest is there. Thankfully you\'re not too shy to post your work here. That was good work
July 17th, 2017 13:54
burning-embers said:
Pretty deep really.. If u don\'t say hello, then no chance of doing the rest is there. Thankfully you\'re not too shy to post your work here. That was good work
July 17th, 2017 13:54
Is it bad
burning-embers said:
Lovely expression of love and vunerabilty. An air of helplessness and innocence. To be honest its like reading a devoted puppy dogs mind. And we all love a puppy, but they have to be trained.
July 9th, 2017 07:49
burning-embers said:
Lovely expression of love and vunerabilty. An air of helplessness and innocence. To be honest its like reading a devoted puppy dogs mind. And we all love a puppy, but they have to be trained.
July 9th, 2017 07:49
Give up Give in
SorrowfullyHappy said:
i speak from my heart not my mind
i dont think about what i write i just let the words flow
July 6th, 2017 13:39
SorrowfullyHappy said:
i speak from my heart not my mind
i dont think about what i write i just let the words flow
July 6th, 2017 13:39
Give up Give in
kevin browne said:
I will second that devotion you have for poetry. it\'s like four persons speaking to me and I just the listener x
July 5th, 2017 23:01
kevin browne said:
I will second that devotion you have for poetry. it\'s like four persons speaking to me and I just the listener x
July 5th, 2017 23:01
Give up Give in
ezra.mendoza said:
Good stuff! A part two would be awesome... what comes after this feeling??
July 5th, 2017 22:10
ezra.mendoza said:
Good stuff! A part two would be awesome... what comes after this feeling??
July 5th, 2017 22:10
Petals & Pebbles
swingline said:
So this is the beautiful one you are so enchanted about .
June 10th, 2017 12:06
swingline said:
So this is the beautiful one you are so enchanted about .
June 10th, 2017 12:06
Wedding vows
swingline said:
What\'s the hurry , have a career yet ?
House ? Steady income ? Credit ?
June 3rd, 2017 02:42
swingline said:
What\'s the hurry , have a career yet ?
House ? Steady income ? Credit ?
June 3rd, 2017 02:42
what he said
swingline said:
Feel triangulated , your angles bent out of shape , three coins in a fountain . Leave her before it\'s too late . Remember Cleopatra said you could kiss her asp .
May 25th, 2017 21:24
swingline said:
Feel triangulated , your angles bent out of shape , three coins in a fountain . Leave her before it\'s too late . Remember Cleopatra said you could kiss her asp .
May 25th, 2017 21:24
Weather
swingline said:
Ha ha , where would be if not for the weather to talk about .
May 23rd, 2017 16:13
swingline said:
Ha ha , where would be if not for the weather to talk about .
May 23rd, 2017 16:13
Kneeling stitches
swingline said:
Everyone is a servant to someone or something . A master of the servant can be kind or cruel . It can be love or it can be drugs . A good master treats his servants well and in return his servants do well by his commands and bring praise upon the master . A cruel master does not care about his servants . He uses them for his delight or sadistic pleasure . In the end he destroys his servants . Those servants become dead inside first (no feeling) , then dead physically .
Please go read the poem wrItten by Grave yard girl on May 3 here at mypoeticside titled \"Goodbye\" and the poem/notice \"Thanks\" written by someone named Josie telling us Jasmine (graveyard girl) passed away on May 5 , from thoughts of suicide .
May 19th, 2017 14:54
swingline said:
Everyone is a servant to someone or something . A master of the servant can be kind or cruel . It can be love or it can be drugs . A good master treats his servants well and in return his servants do well by his commands and bring praise upon the master . A cruel master does not care about his servants . He uses them for his delight or sadistic pleasure . In the end he destroys his servants . Those servants become dead inside first (no feeling) , then dead physically .
Please go read the poem wrItten by Grave yard girl on May 3 here at mypoeticside titled \"Goodbye\" and the poem/notice \"Thanks\" written by someone named Josie telling us Jasmine (graveyard girl) passed away on May 5 , from thoughts of suicide .
May 19th, 2017 14:54
One more cigarette
SorrowfullyHappy said:
i\'ve been trying to quit but its hard i know the smoke is killing me and with my asma i won\'t live to 20 if i keep smoking
May 16th, 2017 12:14
SorrowfullyHappy said:
i\'ve been trying to quit but its hard i know the smoke is killing me and with my asma i won\'t live to 20 if i keep smoking
May 16th, 2017 12:14
One more cigarette
Goldfinch60 said:
Giving up smoking is not easy, I was a heavy smoker but even I manged to give up and that was 35 years ago. Giving up makes so much sense, you are only 15 and have your life in front of you, mine is behind me and I am so glad that I gave up smoking in my thirties.
May 16th, 2017 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Giving up smoking is not easy, I was a heavy smoker but even I manged to give up and that was 35 years ago. Giving up makes so much sense, you are only 15 and have your life in front of you, mine is behind me and I am so glad that I gave up smoking in my thirties.
May 16th, 2017 00:33
One more cigarette
orchidee said:
Have a really good try. You\'re only 15. There\'s all the rest of your life to live yet! :)
May 15th, 2017 13:24
orchidee said:
Have a really good try. You\'re only 15. There\'s all the rest of your life to live yet! :)
May 15th, 2017 13:24
One more cigarette
orchidee said:
Good write. it\'s easy to say \'if we put our hand in the fire, it will get burnt\'. Smoking is not exactly the same as that. No use me being a wag, and saying: \'I gave up smoking; I never started\'!
maybe if you can literally turn you hand to something else, when you (your hand!0 reaches for another ciggy?
May 15th, 2017 13:23
orchidee said:
Good write. it\'s easy to say \'if we put our hand in the fire, it will get burnt\'. Smoking is not exactly the same as that. No use me being a wag, and saying: \'I gave up smoking; I never started\'!
maybe if you can literally turn you hand to something else, when you (your hand!0 reaches for another ciggy?
May 15th, 2017 13:23
Different
Goldfinch60 said:
Different is good, the others just don\'t understand and that is not your problem, it is theirs.
May 13th, 2017 00:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Different is good, the others just don\'t understand and that is not your problem, it is theirs.
May 13th, 2017 00:17
Collar,Cuffs, and Chains
swingline said:
Anything worth having is worth fighting for .
May 10th, 2017 18:10
swingline said:
Anything worth having is worth fighting for .
May 10th, 2017 18:10
heart and brain
swingline said:
If only the heart had a brain and the brain had a heart . He that isn\'t busy being born is busy dying .
May 8th, 2017 12:13
swingline said:
If only the heart had a brain and the brain had a heart . He that isn\'t busy being born is busy dying .
May 8th, 2017 12:13
Honor
swingline said:
Well if you don\'t stop doing illegal things you will become a professional . A professional thief , robber , con artist , rapist , abuser , brute , murderer , and inmate . And no chance to be able to sleep at night . But all our sins has already been forgiven so you can start all over with a clean slate .
May 5th, 2017 14:23
swingline said:
Well if you don\'t stop doing illegal things you will become a professional . A professional thief , robber , con artist , rapist , abuser , brute , murderer , and inmate . And no chance to be able to sleep at night . But all our sins has already been forgiven so you can start all over with a clean slate .
May 5th, 2017 14:23
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