Afraid
WG7 said:

I understand liyah6220 just know I\'ll be here for you, and everyone. Everyone is special, and we\'ll be here for you. We won\'t leave.

February 14th, 2017 12:17

Love Poem
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing LIYAH ~ Short but very sweet ! Love the structure (rhyming couplets). In my experience LOVE is all those things ~ and more ! Yours BRIAN

February 14th, 2017 03:08

Love Poem
Aaliyah Gisele said:

Awwwwwwwwww ! Me too ! I hate writing poetry about another person that won\'t write one for me but it sounds good and thanks

February 13th, 2017 23:03

She felt ugly
WG7 said:

No one is ugly everyone is as beautiful as ever. We are all the same, and yes some might be cheerleaders, and have the perfect skin, and everything. Then there are others like me who just throw on comfortable clothes, and have scars...her battle scars. Although we are ALL beautiful. Every single one of us. Your poem is wonderful, and you have a talent. Never let others harmful words bring you down. Live life how you want it, and never let anyone try to control you.

February 12th, 2017 18:12

She felt ugly
Aaliyah Gisele said:

I\'m beautiful?

February 12th, 2017 17:00

She felt ugly
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ohhhhhhhh LIYAH ~Don\'t be so hard on yourself ! Your are a beautiful Angel with bright sparkly wings. There is much more to you besides how you think you look ! You are sassy for being up front on this site and you write good poetry ! You are just as GOD made you _ inside and out ~ we all have to accept ourselves in terms of appearance ~ skills ~ where and when we are born etc nd make the very best of ourselves ~ OK ! Thinking of you ~ BRIAN

February 12th, 2017 16:05

Almost escaped
Jmcg said:

Awesome

January 28th, 2017 21:01

I want a chance
Jmcg said:

Love this, great read

January 22nd, 2017 05:07

I\'m Tired Of.....I hate when.....
NB said:

I\'ve been thru it & I\'m not sure it\'s over yet.. Best advice I can give you is to just be yourself & accept what you are, that\'s the most important.. & also, keep writing ;)

January 16th, 2017 19:10

I\'m Tired Of.....I hate when.....
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for caring ~ I always hate it when I\'m treated the same way. I find the best thing to do (with such garbage) is to keep smiling and just ignore them ! Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my POEM ~ Thanks B

January 16th, 2017 17:01

Why...
Aaliyah Gisele said:

Thank you guys. I was told that I need to work on my rhyming.

January 15th, 2017 13:05

Why...
Anthony woodard said:

You captured the insucurety of a emotion
Very well we\'ve all been there and if you haven\'t you will

January 15th, 2017 12:13

Why...
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GOOD MORNING LIYAH ~ Thanks for your very enigmatic poem. There are 100 reasons why a GUY should like you ~ you know that ~ but Love is always an enigma ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN

January 15th, 2017 04:13

Almost escaped
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME LIYAH ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ short but it make a valuable point ! Things and remarks (especially within families) do upset us and sometimes we have to walk away ! But the morale of your poem is that we should be aware of all the blessings of home and return as soon as possible. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN.

January 15th, 2017 03:00

Almost escaped
Aaliyah Gisele said:

I want readers to understand that I love food.....Period. But when you put ALL of my faves on a plate, for ME, I be really thankful.

January 14th, 2017 22:06