Comments received on poems by Aaliyah Gisele
The Stars, The Sun, and The Moon
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LIYAH ~ Fortunatey my Technician is Greek so we enjoyed it ! We live in a very Pictorial Age so like you ~ I long to touch the real thing ~ especially the Stars and the Sun. We can now walk on the Moon if we have a spare $100 million ~ cheaper to go to Hawaii ! You are actually nearer to GOD on the Moon ~ Buzz Aldrin ~ Prayed on the Moon and celebrated Communion ~ but don\'t tell NASA ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
March 3rd, 2017 15:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LIYAH ~ Fortunatey my Technician is Greek so we enjoyed it ! We live in a very Pictorial Age so like you ~ I long to touch the real thing ~ especially the Stars and the Sun. We can now walk on the Moon if we have a spare $100 million ~ cheaper to go to Hawaii ! You are actually nearer to GOD on the Moon ~ Buzz Aldrin ~ Prayed on the Moon and celebrated Communion ~ but don\'t tell NASA ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
March 3rd, 2017 15:17
The Stars, The Sun, and The Moon
WG7 said:
Me to liyah and maybe if I do touch the stars I\'ll burn into a fiery ball of fire. God wouldn\'t hear me. the person who committed to many sins to count. Although he would for sure hear you. This is a beautiful poem. I love it.
March 3rd, 2017 12:18
WG7 said:
Me to liyah and maybe if I do touch the stars I\'ll burn into a fiery ball of fire. God wouldn\'t hear me. the person who committed to many sins to count. Although he would for sure hear you. This is a beautiful poem. I love it.
March 3rd, 2017 12:18
The Stars, The Sun, and The Moon
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
March 3rd, 2017 08:06
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed Great write
March 3rd, 2017 08:06
2016
willyweed said:
Oh you are weird nice poem with good rhyme your young you will be a very good poet tomorrow when your 20yrs old ; ww
March 3rd, 2017 07:56
willyweed said:
Oh you are weird nice poem with good rhyme your young you will be a very good poet tomorrow when your 20yrs old ; ww
March 3rd, 2017 07:56
Walking on a handful of roses
willyweed said:
you must have had an out of body experience, it can happen in a dream or just a weird dream, Jk nice poem WW
March 1st, 2017 17:42
willyweed said:
you must have had an out of body experience, it can happen in a dream or just a weird dream, Jk nice poem WW
March 1st, 2017 17:42
Walking on a handful of roses
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LIYAH ~ for a lovely poem ~ full of hope.I trust that your lovely dream will com true soon. Yours BRIAN
March 1st, 2017 17:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LIYAH ~ for a lovely poem ~ full of hope.I trust that your lovely dream will com true soon. Yours BRIAN
March 1st, 2017 17:25
He
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing LIYAH. One sided love always makes us sad ~ but you are not alone in this experience. Lots of men (and women) just come and go ~ but all without feeling or hearing or seeing or scenting ~ so SENSELESS ! Yours BRIAN
February 23rd, 2017 04:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing LIYAH. One sided love always makes us sad ~ but you are not alone in this experience. Lots of men (and women) just come and go ~ but all without feeling or hearing or seeing or scenting ~ so SENSELESS ! Yours BRIAN
February 23rd, 2017 04:40
Like
Hopey_xx said:
Life does go fast, so capture every moment of it, never waste a day!
Love the poem!
February 21st, 2017 14:47
Hopey_xx said:
Life does go fast, so capture every moment of it, never waste a day!
Love the poem!
February 21st, 2017 14:47
Like
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Birth ~ Life ~ Death LIYAH are a part of the natural cycle. But take heart ! Even though 150,000 people DIE every day ~ 360,000 new babies are BORN each day which is more than double. You know and I know we can\'t live for ever and Scientists have calculated that none of us can survive for more than about 125 years. Potentially you could live for more than 100 years ~ so never be afraid of going out ! Enjoy each day ~ dry your years and be HAPPY ! Your Friend BRIAN
February 21st, 2017 14:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Birth ~ Life ~ Death LIYAH are a part of the natural cycle. But take heart ! Even though 150,000 people DIE every day ~ 360,000 new babies are BORN each day which is more than double. You know and I know we can\'t live for ever and Scientists have calculated that none of us can survive for more than about 125 years. Potentially you could live for more than 100 years ~ so never be afraid of going out ! Enjoy each day ~ dry your years and be HAPPY ! Your Friend BRIAN
February 21st, 2017 14:23
2016
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ILYAH for another quirky poem full of rhyme ~ rhythm and meaning ! The older you get the faster time goes so if you think 2016 whizzed by take a grip on 2017 while you have a chance ! Glad you have a fave Football Team good place to make Friends with fellow supporters ! We live and learn all the time and we use the word \"queer\" in normal situations like a BLUE DAFFODIL which would be a QUEER (different) color because they are normally tellow ! It also (as you now know) has sexual connotations ~ people who are attracted to the same sex. It is not a nice word to use in this connection ~ we should use LGBT ~ OK. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
February 19th, 2017 17:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ILYAH for another quirky poem full of rhyme ~ rhythm and meaning ! The older you get the faster time goes so if you think 2016 whizzed by take a grip on 2017 while you have a chance ! Glad you have a fave Football Team good place to make Friends with fellow supporters ! We live and learn all the time and we use the word \"queer\" in normal situations like a BLUE DAFFODIL which would be a QUEER (different) color because they are normally tellow ! It also (as you now know) has sexual connotations ~ people who are attracted to the same sex. It is not a nice word to use in this connection ~ we should use LGBT ~ OK. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
February 19th, 2017 17:11
2016
WG7 said:
2016 went by fast, but 2017 is going even faster. Do things you always wanted to before it ends. This poem is wonderful. Keep on writing. You\'re an amazing poet.
February 19th, 2017 13:45
WG7 said:
2016 went by fast, but 2017 is going even faster. Do things you always wanted to before it ends. This poem is wonderful. Keep on writing. You\'re an amazing poet.
February 19th, 2017 13:45
These trees
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I think that i shall never see ~ A thing as lovely as a TREE ! Thanks for sharing LIYAH ~ not only is a tree living thing ~ some are 100\'s of year old but each Tree provides a habitat for microorganisms ~ insects ~ animals & birds ~ AWESOME ! I agree that through trees we can see ~ love ~ happiness God ~ faces ~ the future and our desires. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ You are a talented POET ! Yours BRIAN
February 17th, 2017 18:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I think that i shall never see ~ A thing as lovely as a TREE ! Thanks for sharing LIYAH ~ not only is a tree living thing ~ some are 100\'s of year old but each Tree provides a habitat for microorganisms ~ insects ~ animals & birds ~ AWESOME ! I agree that through trees we can see ~ love ~ happiness God ~ faces ~ the future and our desires. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ You are a talented POET ! Yours BRIAN
February 17th, 2017 18:20
These trees
Aaliyah Gisele said:
This is my poem and I just want to add that I\'m a photographer, a poet, a writer, I write quotes, and I know how to do hair. I have plenty of other hidden talents.
February 17th, 2017 14:27
Aaliyah Gisele said:
This is my poem and I just want to add that I\'m a photographer, a poet, a writer, I write quotes, and I know how to do hair. I have plenty of other hidden talents.
February 17th, 2017 14:27
These trees
Aaliyah Gisele said:
This is my poem and I just want to add that I\'m a photographer, a poet, a writer, I write quotes, and I know how to do hair. I have plenty of other hidden talents.
February 17th, 2017 13:26
Aaliyah Gisele said:
This is my poem and I just want to add that I\'m a photographer, a poet, a writer, I write quotes, and I know how to do hair. I have plenty of other hidden talents.
February 17th, 2017 13:26
Afraid
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LIYAH ~ for another interesting poem about LOVE. When we get too close to a person it can be a \"point of know return\" and we end up drowning in each other ! Once bitten twice shy ~ some people are actually afraid of \"falling in love\" which is a pity ~ when (as your poem suggests) you are in love with them and you know they are in love with you ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
February 14th, 2017 19:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LIYAH ~ for another interesting poem about LOVE. When we get too close to a person it can be a \"point of know return\" and we end up drowning in each other ! Once bitten twice shy ~ some people are actually afraid of \"falling in love\" which is a pity ~ when (as your poem suggests) you are in love with them and you know they are in love with you ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
February 14th, 2017 19:06
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