Comments received on poems by ettolrahc
Please may someone correct this for me?
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Charlotte, your friend should read these words and they will help Jo to go forward in joy as Jo has you for a very good friend.
There is nothing wrong with the grammar in your poem.
Andy
October 7th, 2020 04:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Charlotte, your friend should read these words and they will help Jo to go forward in joy as Jo has you for a very good friend.
There is nothing wrong with the grammar in your poem.
Andy
October 7th, 2020 04:41
Please may someone correct this for me?
peto said:
It\'s from the heart Charlotte
Couldn\'t ask for more than that
October 6th, 2020 08:25
peto said:
It\'s from the heart Charlotte
Couldn\'t ask for more than that
October 6th, 2020 08:25
Please may someone correct this for me?
orchidee said:
Well, nothing wrong with this. Should be a help to your friend. :)
If it was less serious, I would say \'All ya gotta feel suicidal about is me singing - everyone does!\' lol.
October 6th, 2020 06:23
orchidee said:
Well, nothing wrong with this. Should be a help to your friend. :)
If it was less serious, I would say \'All ya gotta feel suicidal about is me singing - everyone does!\' lol.
October 6th, 2020 06:23
Please may someone correct this for me?
Lorna said:
You\'ve done your friend proud and you should definitely share this with Jo..... this is heartfelt.... keep writing!
October 6th, 2020 05:37
Lorna said:
You\'ve done your friend proud and you should definitely share this with Jo..... this is heartfelt.... keep writing!
October 6th, 2020 05:37
Running Away From Your Pain
Goldfinch60 said:
That pain may well be with them but you need to get yourself into that better life and in that life you may be able to deal with their pain in a better way.
Andy
July 24th, 2020 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
That pain may well be with them but you need to get yourself into that better life and in that life you may be able to deal with their pain in a better way.
Andy
July 24th, 2020 00:08
We\'ll Meet Again
dusk arising said:
As a firm believer in continuance of the spirit into another existence i read your positive words of this passing pleased with your positive sentiment.
To write of such times with such clarity marks you out as a poet of worth, able to convey meaningful motives beyond grief.
March 26th, 2019 20:36
dusk arising said:
As a firm believer in continuance of the spirit into another existence i read your positive words of this passing pleased with your positive sentiment.
To write of such times with such clarity marks you out as a poet of worth, able to convey meaningful motives beyond grief.
March 26th, 2019 20:36
We\'ll Meet Again
Jo March said:
It\'s a beautiful poem. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for it.
March 26th, 2019 16:27
Jo March said:
It\'s a beautiful poem. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for it.
March 26th, 2019 16:27
We\'ll Meet Again
orchidee said:
A good \'happy birthday\' write, I see?! Best wishes!
March 26th, 2019 14:19
orchidee said:
A good \'happy birthday\' write, I see?! Best wishes!
March 26th, 2019 14:19
We\'ll Meet Again
Fay Slimm. said:
A charming verse of farewell to a loved one that must have brought joy to their heart.
March 26th, 2019 12:14
Fay Slimm. said:
A charming verse of farewell to a loved one that must have brought joy to their heart.
March 26th, 2019 12:14
A letter you can never see
psychofemale said:
the whole piece was awesome, but that last stanza really spoke. ty for sharing this
January 30th, 2019 18:02
psychofemale said:
the whole piece was awesome, but that last stanza really spoke. ty for sharing this
January 30th, 2019 18:02
A Letter You Can Never See
Arianna Smith said:
Amazing read!!! It rhymed perfectly!! Can’t wait to see more!
May 7th, 2018 08:17
Arianna Smith said:
Amazing read!!! It rhymed perfectly!! Can’t wait to see more!
May 7th, 2018 08:17
A Letter You Can Never See
FredPeyer said:
What you did C. is good, how you wrote about it is even better! Family IS important, and in my opinion, they should see this letter.
August 4th, 2017 21:10
FredPeyer said:
What you did C. is good, how you wrote about it is even better! Family IS important, and in my opinion, they should see this letter.
August 4th, 2017 21:10
A Letter You Can Never See
orchidee said:
A fine write C, and - yppaH yadhtriB!
August 4th, 2017 11:33
orchidee said:
A fine write C, and - yppaH yadhtriB!
August 4th, 2017 11:33
A Letter You Can Never See
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine poem of dedication to family! Well expressed ... thanks for sharing!
August 4th, 2017 09:34
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine poem of dedication to family! Well expressed ... thanks for sharing!
August 4th, 2017 09:34
The Real Me
Goldfinch60 said:
Most of hide behind masks in different situations, who actually knows \'The real me\'?
June 22nd, 2017 08:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Most of hide behind masks in different situations, who actually knows \'The real me\'?
June 22nd, 2017 08:06
Karma
WriteBeLight said:
Too bad we can un-ring the bell on our mistakes. Very good job.
January 23rd, 2017 14:24
WriteBeLight said:
Too bad we can un-ring the bell on our mistakes. Very good job.
January 23rd, 2017 14:24
No one can see...
Hopey_xx said:
Very well written! And as Clark said, stay strong whatever happens!
January 21st, 2017 07:31
Hopey_xx said:
Very well written! And as Clark said, stay strong whatever happens!
January 21st, 2017 07:31
No one can see...
WriteBeLight said:
Great work and a subject that I feel many can relate.
January 21st, 2017 07:08
WriteBeLight said:
Great work and a subject that I feel many can relate.
January 21st, 2017 07:08
No one can see...
Clark said:
Very deep and emotional. Felt every word, great poem! Stay strong.
January 21st, 2017 04:31
Clark said:
Very deep and emotional. Felt every word, great poem! Stay strong.
January 21st, 2017 04:31
Terror Deep Down
Projectbeing said:
Deep,probing. I ask the same questions. Have you ever asked yourself who am I. By the way lovely poem,love the flow
January 20th, 2017 17:21
Projectbeing said:
Deep,probing. I ask the same questions. Have you ever asked yourself who am I. By the way lovely poem,love the flow
January 20th, 2017 17:21
