Comments received on poems by justbereal
feelings
L. B. Mek said:
\'I wish I was a fairy
bring her all the joy she desires
ignite her with a fire, that she once did carry\'
wonderful tone and flow throughout, what is an intriguing and yet instinctively relatable write, a somewhat analytical and removed depiction of seemingly aching turmoil within relationship\'s and some commentary on what effect they have over our sense of self,
touching on that aspect of disassociation with ourselves at different milestones and our tendency to romanticise \'the who\' we used to be prior to living through traumatic experiences,
a really well executed write, in my humble opinion another worth rereading to try and unravel its mysteries, I\'m not sure how much of your nuanced meaning I grasped, still it was a joy to try
thanks for sharing dear poet
February 26th, 2021 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'I wish I was a fairy
bring her all the joy she desires
ignite her with a fire, that she once did carry\'
wonderful tone and flow throughout, what is an intriguing and yet instinctively relatable write, a somewhat analytical and removed depiction of seemingly aching turmoil within relationship\'s and some commentary on what effect they have over our sense of self,
touching on that aspect of disassociation with ourselves at different milestones and our tendency to romanticise \'the who\' we used to be prior to living through traumatic experiences,
a really well executed write, in my humble opinion another worth rereading to try and unravel its mysteries, I\'m not sure how much of your nuanced meaning I grasped, still it was a joy to try
thanks for sharing dear poet
February 26th, 2021 05:15
feelings
WriteRaw said:
The poem touches the reader strongly. I thought the poem was full of despair and a yearning to be seen and felt. There was a loneliness in the words. Great job.
February 25th, 2021 15:59
WriteRaw said:
The poem touches the reader strongly. I thought the poem was full of despair and a yearning to be seen and felt. There was a loneliness in the words. Great job.
February 25th, 2021 15:59
Free
Crystal Hope said:
wow such a beautiful poem. full of emotion and greatness
March 24th, 2020 15:47
Crystal Hope said:
wow such a beautiful poem. full of emotion and greatness
March 24th, 2020 15:47
doomed love
justbereal said:
Thank you so much for your support ! I know what you mean we all walk on those earth broken some more broken than others but the desire of love and companionship can merely be achieved my self love that we seem to lack, but we will get there some day .
January 25th, 2020 14:24
justbereal said:
Thank you so much for your support ! I know what you mean we all walk on those earth broken some more broken than others but the desire of love and companionship can merely be achieved my self love that we seem to lack, but we will get there some day .
January 25th, 2020 14:24
doomed love
dusk arising said:
The funny thing is that none of us are really able to love until we can love ourselves first. That isn\'t always easy to achieve. Our parents can make it a difficult process if they damage us.
January 25th, 2020 11:37
dusk arising said:
The funny thing is that none of us are really able to love until we can love ourselves first. That isn\'t always easy to achieve. Our parents can make it a difficult process if they damage us.
January 25th, 2020 11:37
