Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
Walking
sorenbarrett said:
A very different style and format to this poem. It fits well and reads nicely. Very nice
August 14th, 2024 11:29
sorenbarrett said:
A very different style and format to this poem. It fits well and reads nicely. Very nice
August 14th, 2024 11:29
Moving On
Neville said:
If its gonna go wrong, it\'s gonna go wrong big time .. there\'s no gradual shift or halfway point .. well penned Phil .. Neville
August 13th, 2024 12:54
Neville said:
If its gonna go wrong, it\'s gonna go wrong big time .. there\'s no gradual shift or halfway point .. well penned Phil .. Neville
August 13th, 2024 12:54
Moving On
Cassie58 said:
A really poignant poem about love gone wrong. Nice rhyme and a good flow to the lines. Happy Tuesday MendedFences.
August 13th, 2024 12:16
Cassie58 said:
A really poignant poem about love gone wrong. Nice rhyme and a good flow to the lines. Happy Tuesday MendedFences.
August 13th, 2024 12:16
Moving On
Teddy.15 said:
Fab rhyme, awe, so maybe just maybe in the end love came to an end, but your poetry is truly wonderful. š¹
August 13th, 2024 10:29
Teddy.15 said:
Fab rhyme, awe, so maybe just maybe in the end love came to an end, but your poetry is truly wonderful. š¹
August 13th, 2024 10:29
Moving On
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write. Laments about how things would be if we were different are not very helpful. A nice write in rhyme.
August 13th, 2024 10:11
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write. Laments about how things would be if we were different are not very helpful. A nice write in rhyme.
August 13th, 2024 10:11
Lo and Behold!
Dan Williams said:
Lord, how this resonates with me. Writing about lost love has been , for me at least, cathartic. Hope the same for you.
August 13th, 2024 00:37
Dan Williams said:
Lord, how this resonates with me. Writing about lost love has been , for me at least, cathartic. Hope the same for you.
August 13th, 2024 00:37
Lo and Behold!
Doggerel Dave said:
A thousand ways indeed....š„I did feel for him, of course...
Can\'t say enjoyed.....
Reality faced, I suppose.......
August 12th, 2024 17:57
Doggerel Dave said:
A thousand ways indeed....š„I did feel for him, of course...
Can\'t say enjoyed.....
Reality faced, I suppose.......
August 12th, 2024 17:57
Lo and Behold!
Teddy.15 said:
This made me chuckle, it was the title. A scenario I know well from my 20\'s , your ending is so funny but maybe it is because I see it from a ladies point of view, I do feel the pain though, brilliant, I\'m loving your amusing love poetry š¹
August 12th, 2024 16:32
Teddy.15 said:
This made me chuckle, it was the title. A scenario I know well from my 20\'s , your ending is so funny but maybe it is because I see it from a ladies point of view, I do feel the pain though, brilliant, I\'m loving your amusing love poetry š¹
August 12th, 2024 16:32
Lo and Behold!
sorenbarrett said:
A sad but all to true story for many. Nicely done
August 12th, 2024 14:43
sorenbarrett said:
A sad but all to true story for many. Nicely done
August 12th, 2024 14:43
How Many, Before?
Teddy.15 said:
Usually opposites do attract, love is such a beautiful emotion can also bring one into the gutters of hell, still and all we keep going, we keep searching, we keep hoping. A wonderful inspiring piece dear Phil. š¹
August 12th, 2024 07:37
Teddy.15 said:
Usually opposites do attract, love is such a beautiful emotion can also bring one into the gutters of hell, still and all we keep going, we keep searching, we keep hoping. A wonderful inspiring piece dear Phil. š¹
August 12th, 2024 07:37
How Many, Before?
Neville said:
It always amazes me yet I am rarely surprised .. (that by the way applies equally to your authors note as it does more generally to your poetry) .. since I have come to anticipate either subtle twists and killer punchlines which is the hallmark of your writing and the highest of compliments I am able to pay while getting ready for work this morning .. Neville
August 12th, 2024 01:51
Neville said:
It always amazes me yet I am rarely surprised .. (that by the way applies equally to your authors note as it does more generally to your poetry) .. since I have come to anticipate either subtle twists and killer punchlines which is the hallmark of your writing and the highest of compliments I am able to pay while getting ready for work this morning .. Neville
August 12th, 2024 01:51
I Need To Be Near You
Dan Williams said:
So sad and regretful, insinuating tears, I sympathize. Good work.
August 12th, 2024 00:32
Dan Williams said:
So sad and regretful, insinuating tears, I sympathize. Good work.
August 12th, 2024 00:32
How Many, Before?
sorenbarrett said:
A write of questions about dissolution of a relationship. Well written and nicely said.
August 11th, 2024 12:48
sorenbarrett said:
A write of questions about dissolution of a relationship. Well written and nicely said.
August 11th, 2024 12:48
I Need To Be Near You
Teddy.15 said:
Incredibly sad and if it is non fiction even sadder, as a woman I\'d like to say go out and get your girl, because we want to be saved, but not knowing each side of the coin is difficult to judge, a beautiful love note or song. I hope she comes back. š¹
August 11th, 2024 03:49
Teddy.15 said:
Incredibly sad and if it is non fiction even sadder, as a woman I\'d like to say go out and get your girl, because we want to be saved, but not knowing each side of the coin is difficult to judge, a beautiful love note or song. I hope she comes back. š¹
August 11th, 2024 03:49
I Need To Be Near You
Cassie58 said:
A sad poem. A love that was your sunlight, now obscured. Breakups do that. They cause such hurt. Your emotions come through well in this poem. Iām sure it will be relatable to many. Have a good Sunday.
August 11th, 2024 03:15
Cassie58 said:
A sad poem. A love that was your sunlight, now obscured. Breakups do that. They cause such hurt. Your emotions come through well in this poem. Iām sure it will be relatable to many. Have a good Sunday.
August 11th, 2024 03:15
I Need To Be Near You
Neville said:
Been there, done that & you clearly have too sir .. well scribed ..
August 11th, 2024 02:36
Neville said:
Been there, done that & you clearly have too sir .. well scribed ..
August 11th, 2024 02:36
I Need To Be Near You
Goldfinch60 said:
You will always be near her in your heart Phil.
Andy
August 11th, 2024 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
You will always be near her in your heart Phil.
Andy
August 11th, 2024 01:39
Deep Sixed
Dan Williams said:
\"rude dancing in the nightclub\" will buy you grief every time. Kind of skip this with the redhead. Good work.
August 11th, 2024 00:24
Dan Williams said:
\"rude dancing in the nightclub\" will buy you grief every time. Kind of skip this with the redhead. Good work.
August 11th, 2024 00:24
Brokenhearted Charities
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an important number Phil.
Andy
August 10th, 2024 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an important number Phil.
Andy
August 10th, 2024 01:10
Deep Sixed
Doggerel Dave said:
\"parting is such sweet sorrow\"
Holidays are so brief - but I found myself very entertained from my deckchair (well clear of trouble).
August 9th, 2024 19:15
Doggerel Dave said:
\"parting is such sweet sorrow\"
Holidays are so brief - but I found myself very entertained from my deckchair (well clear of trouble).
August 9th, 2024 19:15
Deep Sixed
sorenbarrett said:
This one brightened my afternoon and that is all I can ask of a poem Loved it.
August 9th, 2024 12:02
sorenbarrett said:
This one brightened my afternoon and that is all I can ask of a poem Loved it.
August 9th, 2024 12:02
Deep Sixed
Teddy.15 said:
Something\'s just aren\'t meant to be, I do hope he had better times with the redhead. š¹
August 9th, 2024 11:50
Teddy.15 said:
Something\'s just aren\'t meant to be, I do hope he had better times with the redhead. š¹
August 9th, 2024 11:50
Deep Sixed
Neville said:
the full five & three quarters always raises a smile .. if nothing else ..
this is another brilliant snippet from what is rapidly becoming one of my favourite portfolios sir Fences27 :)
August 9th, 2024 11:09
Neville said:
the full five & three quarters always raises a smile .. if nothing else ..
this is another brilliant snippet from what is rapidly becoming one of my favourite portfolios sir Fences27 :)
August 9th, 2024 11:09
Brokenhearted Charities
Doggerel Dave said:
Look at how technology and \'Love\' keep the economy stimulated.
Can you franchise that out? there\'s enough profit there for everyone to have a fair return.
Good laugh, Phil with just the merest smattering of cynicism I feel.
August 8th, 2024 17:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Look at how technology and \'Love\' keep the economy stimulated.
Can you franchise that out? there\'s enough profit there for everyone to have a fair return.
Good laugh, Phil with just the merest smattering of cynicism I feel.
August 8th, 2024 17:28
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