Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
Summer Love
Doggerel Dave said:
Petty pulchritude? Hot holiday hedonism. Raw reality.
Enjoyed once I reached the end, Phil. 😊
July 12th, 2024 02:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Petty pulchritude? Hot holiday hedonism. Raw reality.
Enjoyed once I reached the end, Phil. 😊
July 12th, 2024 02:03
Summer Love
Neville said:
We don\'t have summer camps here in the UK, or if we do. I\'ve never heard of where they are held and was never sent to one .. (unfortunately) but I do know what you mean by them .. Having said that, my guess is that many Brits envy the concept and freedoms they afford .. and furthermore, I reckon you have poemed a little masterpiece here and very skilfully captured the temporary heat and fleeting passions of all too often experienced holiday romances .. Neville
July 12th, 2024 02:03
Neville said:
We don\'t have summer camps here in the UK, or if we do. I\'ve never heard of where they are held and was never sent to one .. (unfortunately) but I do know what you mean by them .. Having said that, my guess is that many Brits envy the concept and freedoms they afford .. and furthermore, I reckon you have poemed a little masterpiece here and very skilfully captured the temporary heat and fleeting passions of all too often experienced holiday romances .. Neville
July 12th, 2024 02:03
Summer Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Summer camp eh Phil, those meeting were so short.
Andy
July 12th, 2024 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Summer camp eh Phil, those meeting were so short.
Andy
July 12th, 2024 01:21
Summer Love
Teddy.15 said:
Ah summer camp, this made me chuckle dear Phil, a.love story, in the UK we don\'t have Summer camp but I know it\'s a very special moment for teens in America, I think your poem brings great dignity to both sides and yes a passionate love story is what this is. I do believe most memorable too. 🌹
July 12th, 2024 00:41
Teddy.15 said:
Ah summer camp, this made me chuckle dear Phil, a.love story, in the UK we don\'t have Summer camp but I know it\'s a very special moment for teens in America, I think your poem brings great dignity to both sides and yes a passionate love story is what this is. I do believe most memorable too. 🌹
July 12th, 2024 00:41
Some Thoughts on Poetry
Neville said:
You need to think like this more often mate .. tis quite brilliant & true .. N
July 11th, 2024 15:18
Neville said:
You need to think like this more often mate .. tis quite brilliant & true .. N
July 11th, 2024 15:18
Some Thoughts on Poetry
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Phil, may we all continue writing our words.
Andy
July 11th, 2024 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Phil, may we all continue writing our words.
Andy
July 11th, 2024 01:24
The Future of Man
Dan Williams said:
I\'m sorry to have to say most times I believe it is too late. Everything is about money. The big companies are not going to stop making the plastic that is suffocating the world.
July 11th, 2024 00:28
Dan Williams said:
I\'m sorry to have to say most times I believe it is too late. Everything is about money. The big companies are not going to stop making the plastic that is suffocating the world.
July 11th, 2024 00:28
Some Thoughts on Poetry
Teddy.15 said:
Poetry is instinctive, but never finished
How true I guess life itself really is our editor. 🌹
July 10th, 2024 11:13
Teddy.15 said:
Poetry is instinctive, but never finished
How true I guess life itself really is our editor. 🌹
July 10th, 2024 11:13
The Future of Man
2781 said:
Remember Chernobyl?
How many years to recover?
We can\'t kill the earth, it abides forever.
We can kill ourselves though.
July 10th, 2024 06:45
2781 said:
Remember Chernobyl?
How many years to recover?
We can\'t kill the earth, it abides forever.
We can kill ourselves though.
July 10th, 2024 06:45
The Future of Man
Doggerel Dave said:
Steam well blown, Phil.
Trouble is, I feel Humanity reached the point of no return (tipping point?) some many years back. Results just coming through for all, rather than a limited audience, to see.
July 9th, 2024 18:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Steam well blown, Phil.
Trouble is, I feel Humanity reached the point of no return (tipping point?) some many years back. Results just coming through for all, rather than a limited audience, to see.
July 9th, 2024 18:19
The Future of Man
Teddy.15 said:
Like a train blowing it\'s magnificent funnel, and quite right too. Everything you have highlighted is a kudos, we truly are living on a time bomb, in so many ways dear Phil. A kudos from me. 🌹
July 9th, 2024 12:23
Teddy.15 said:
Like a train blowing it\'s magnificent funnel, and quite right too. Everything you have highlighted is a kudos, we truly are living on a time bomb, in so many ways dear Phil. A kudos from me. 🌹
July 9th, 2024 12:23
Four Apparitions O\'er the Rio Grande
Doggerel Dave said:
A rich colourful parade and yarn, Phil. Enjoyed.
But a slight feeling of unfulfilled understanding....What is the significance of \'Laredo, Texas 1965\' (if any) Great read with or without.Thanks.
July 7th, 2024 02:39
Doggerel Dave said:
A rich colourful parade and yarn, Phil. Enjoyed.
But a slight feeling of unfulfilled understanding....What is the significance of \'Laredo, Texas 1965\' (if any) Great read with or without.Thanks.
July 7th, 2024 02:39
Four Apparitions O\'er the Rio Grande
Goldfinch60 said:
What wonderful words Phil.
Andy
July 7th, 2024 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
What wonderful words Phil.
Andy
July 7th, 2024 01:22
Four Apparitions O\'er the Rio Grande
Teddy.15 said:
What imagery, I met all your lovers and saw it all, superbly written with marvelous poetic lines, your last lines of course kudos. Loved this so much Phil. 🌹
July 6th, 2024 16:07
Teddy.15 said:
What imagery, I met all your lovers and saw it all, superbly written with marvelous poetic lines, your last lines of course kudos. Loved this so much Phil. 🌹
July 6th, 2024 16:07
A Walk in the Sun
Neville said:
Blimey .. very lucky indeed .. a narrow escape and a bloomin good poem out of it to boot ..
Makes one both think and realise we don\'t know what\'s around the next corner .. Neville
May 31st, 2024 01:09
Neville said:
Blimey .. very lucky indeed .. a narrow escape and a bloomin good poem out of it to boot ..
Makes one both think and realise we don\'t know what\'s around the next corner .. Neville
May 31st, 2024 01:09
A Walk in the Sun
Goldfinch60 said:
Those walks in the cold can be very uplifting Phil, so glad you didn\'t go there later.
Andy
May 31st, 2024 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Those walks in the cold can be very uplifting Phil, so glad you didn\'t go there later.
Andy
May 31st, 2024 01:08
A Walk in the Sun
Doggerel Dave said:
You were potentially at the wrong place, but definitely at the right time, Phil.
BTW Never heard \"downright ransom-like\" as a description of the competitive qualities of crowds before. Sums them up perfectly.
May 31st, 2024 00:48
Doggerel Dave said:
You were potentially at the wrong place, but definitely at the right time, Phil.
BTW Never heard \"downright ransom-like\" as a description of the competitive qualities of crowds before. Sums them up perfectly.
May 31st, 2024 00:48
A Walk in the Sun
Teddy.15 said:
We must never underestimate mother nature that\'s for sure, your imagery glorious and I\'m so glad you were safe dear Phil, at least knowing now the dangers, unfortunately there are so many. A brilliant thought provoking piece. 🌹
May 31st, 2024 00:21
Teddy.15 said:
We must never underestimate mother nature that\'s for sure, your imagery glorious and I\'m so glad you were safe dear Phil, at least knowing now the dangers, unfortunately there are so many. A brilliant thought provoking piece. 🌹
May 31st, 2024 00:21
Time of Blindness
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful dream Phil and then the wife wakes you. LOL
Andy
May 28th, 2024 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful dream Phil and then the wife wakes you. LOL
Andy
May 28th, 2024 01:26
Time of Blindness
Teddy.15 said:
Well you certainly kept me on my toes from beginning to end, superb, and well done for the last lines 🤣 beautiful rejection and imagery. I seem to be forever at the doctor\'s these days and so I can certainly relate. My dear Phil, stay well and oh such a joy to see you home with us here at MPS where you should always be. 🌹
May 28th, 2024 01:04
Teddy.15 said:
Well you certainly kept me on my toes from beginning to end, superb, and well done for the last lines 🤣 beautiful rejection and imagery. I seem to be forever at the doctor\'s these days and so I can certainly relate. My dear Phil, stay well and oh such a joy to see you home with us here at MPS where you should always be. 🌹
May 28th, 2024 01:04
Time of Blindness
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh so ethereal but reality impinges.
Good to see you back, MF.
May 27th, 2024 23:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh so ethereal but reality impinges.
Good to see you back, MF.
May 27th, 2024 23:21
Time of Blindness
Neville said:
This is absolutely bloomin brilliant sir .. you had me going write from the off .. indeed any poetry that refers to a lazy git wins my vote hands down … stay well and write on brother Fences .. Neville
May 27th, 2024 14:53
Neville said:
This is absolutely bloomin brilliant sir .. you had me going write from the off .. indeed any poetry that refers to a lazy git wins my vote hands down … stay well and write on brother Fences .. Neville
May 27th, 2024 14:53
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