Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
Meadows
sorenbarrett said:
This poem brought on feelings of the past and the cycle of life as it goes by. The rhyme was subtle and hypnotic leaving me by those meadows of the past and present. I could feel them and see this as a work of art. Very nice
July 26th, 2024 12:55
sorenbarrett said:
This poem brought on feelings of the past and the cycle of life as it goes by. The rhyme was subtle and hypnotic leaving me by those meadows of the past and present. I could feel them and see this as a work of art. Very nice
July 26th, 2024 12:55
Shadows
sorenbarrett said:
A questioning of one\'s mental state is always a good sign. Those that don\'t question remain locked in. Nicely done
July 26th, 2024 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
A questioning of one\'s mental state is always a good sign. Those that don\'t question remain locked in. Nicely done
July 26th, 2024 06:06
Shadows
Teddy.15 said:
What a magnificent thought it is dear Phil, very relatable too my friend. 🌹
July 26th, 2024 02:48
Teddy.15 said:
What a magnificent thought it is dear Phil, very relatable too my friend. 🌹
July 26th, 2024 02:48
Shadows
Goldfinch60 said:
Being alone can bring many thoughts into the mind Phil. Good write.
Andy
July 26th, 2024 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Being alone can bring many thoughts into the mind Phil. Good write.
Andy
July 26th, 2024 01:21
Shadows
Doggerel Dave said:
That piece has more substance than those shadows, Phil. And I hope they will be easy enough to blow away once I move on.....
July 25th, 2024 18:44
Doggerel Dave said:
That piece has more substance than those shadows, Phil. And I hope they will be easy enough to blow away once I move on.....
July 25th, 2024 18:44
Shadows
Neville said:
You are a dark horse aint ya .. this is far more than just a thought .. this is another cracker .. Neville
July 25th, 2024 16:59
Neville said:
You are a dark horse aint ya .. this is far more than just a thought .. this is another cracker .. Neville
July 25th, 2024 16:59
The Lutenist
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificent, set in a classical form it carries on with the last lines like the finale in a symphony give it closure.
July 25th, 2024 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificent, set in a classical form it carries on with the last lines like the finale in a symphony give it closure.
July 25th, 2024 06:19
The Lutenist
Neville said:
Brilliant .. brings pure joy to an old fella\'s imagination .. Neville
July 25th, 2024 03:38
Neville said:
Brilliant .. brings pure joy to an old fella\'s imagination .. Neville
July 25th, 2024 03:38
The Last Day
Dan Williams said:
I know this song way too well. Sympathies. Nice work.
July 24th, 2024 00:34
Dan Williams said:
I know this song way too well. Sympathies. Nice work.
July 24th, 2024 00:34
Thoughts 11
Doggerel Dave said:
Champagne is well covered here, and yes I\'d agree. but I continue to be drawn back to your opening stanza, Phil.
I found it hard initially to get past that one.
July 23rd, 2024 19:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Champagne is well covered here, and yes I\'d agree. but I continue to be drawn back to your opening stanza, Phil.
I found it hard initially to get past that one.
July 23rd, 2024 19:56
Thoughts 11
sorenbarrett said:
\"Equality’s flaw
is, we desire it only
with those above us.\"
Great stanza. A lot of truth in this piece.
July 23rd, 2024 17:57
sorenbarrett said:
\"Equality’s flaw
is, we desire it only
with those above us.\"
Great stanza. A lot of truth in this piece.
July 23rd, 2024 17:57
Thoughts 11
Neville said:
It is clear to me that much creative thought, insight and a sapiential awareness all came together at precisely the write moment in order for this little beauty to be conceived in the first instance and delivered perfectly formed .. a real belter if you don\'t mind me saying so .. and that champagne reference is to die for my friend .. Neville
July 23rd, 2024 16:32
Neville said:
It is clear to me that much creative thought, insight and a sapiential awareness all came together at precisely the write moment in order for this little beauty to be conceived in the first instance and delivered perfectly formed .. a real belter if you don\'t mind me saying so .. and that champagne reference is to die for my friend .. Neville
July 23rd, 2024 16:32
Thoughts 11
Teddy.15 said:
So damn wise true and powerful love the stanza of the champagne, it simply isn\'t the same when it\'s flat. 🌹
July 23rd, 2024 15:50
Teddy.15 said:
So damn wise true and powerful love the stanza of the champagne, it simply isn\'t the same when it\'s flat. 🌹
July 23rd, 2024 15:50
The Last Day
sorenbarrett said:
The power of dependency shines in this poem. Love a powerful element that makes and breaks.
July 23rd, 2024 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
The power of dependency shines in this poem. Love a powerful element that makes and breaks.
July 23rd, 2024 06:21
The Last Day
Teddy.15 said:
Extraordinary emotion, I felt every line, dearest Phil, your heart is most certainly on your sleeve for this one. Kudos. 🌹
July 23rd, 2024 02:33
Teddy.15 said:
Extraordinary emotion, I felt every line, dearest Phil, your heart is most certainly on your sleeve for this one. Kudos. 🌹
July 23rd, 2024 02:33
The Last Day
orchidee said:
Ok I won\'t go, I\'ll stay! lol.
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
Good write MF.
July 23rd, 2024 01:21
orchidee said:
Ok I won\'t go, I\'ll stay! lol.
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
Good write MF.
July 23rd, 2024 01:21
A Quiet Parting
Neville said:
Quiet partings tho\' invariably sad are also more mature, civilised and dignified than their noisier and more messy counterparts ..
the sadness here is really quite palpable Phil .. Neville
July 15th, 2024 16:46
Neville said:
Quiet partings tho\' invariably sad are also more mature, civilised and dignified than their noisier and more messy counterparts ..
the sadness here is really quite palpable Phil .. Neville
July 15th, 2024 16:46
A Quiet Parting
Teddy.15 said:
A very quiet painting indeed dear Phill, very sadly beautiful are your words 🌹
July 15th, 2024 00:24
Teddy.15 said:
A very quiet painting indeed dear Phill, very sadly beautiful are your words 🌹
July 15th, 2024 00:24
Summer Love
Doggerel Dave said:
Petty pulchritude? Hot holiday hedonism. Raw reality.
Enjoyed once I reached the end, Phil. 😊
July 12th, 2024 02:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Petty pulchritude? Hot holiday hedonism. Raw reality.
Enjoyed once I reached the end, Phil. 😊
July 12th, 2024 02:03
Summer Love
Neville said:
We don\'t have summer camps here in the UK, or if we do. I\'ve never heard of where they are held and was never sent to one .. (unfortunately) but I do know what you mean by them .. Having said that, my guess is that many Brits envy the concept and freedoms they afford .. and furthermore, I reckon you have poemed a little masterpiece here and very skilfully captured the temporary heat and fleeting passions of all too often experienced holiday romances .. Neville
July 12th, 2024 02:03
Neville said:
We don\'t have summer camps here in the UK, or if we do. I\'ve never heard of where they are held and was never sent to one .. (unfortunately) but I do know what you mean by them .. Having said that, my guess is that many Brits envy the concept and freedoms they afford .. and furthermore, I reckon you have poemed a little masterpiece here and very skilfully captured the temporary heat and fleeting passions of all too often experienced holiday romances .. Neville
July 12th, 2024 02:03
Summer Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Summer camp eh Phil, those meeting were so short.
Andy
July 12th, 2024 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Summer camp eh Phil, those meeting were so short.
Andy
July 12th, 2024 01:21
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