Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
The Road
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Phil, I hope all is better soon.
Andy
November 22nd, 2024 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Phil, I hope all is better soon.
Andy
November 22nd, 2024 02:43
The Road
Neville said:
It can seem endlessly long, lonely and bleak can\'t it Phil .. I mean of course, the road and the route being travelled along .. My guess is, the she in question just turned most, if not all of the street lights off .. Well listen to someone who has travelled the same route before .. there\'s an on switch located just a way ahead a bit and though not exactly hidden, you have to make your way there and locate it .. I hope you can cheer up soon my friend and see the light .. Neville
November 22nd, 2024 01:37
Neville said:
It can seem endlessly long, lonely and bleak can\'t it Phil .. I mean of course, the road and the route being travelled along .. My guess is, the she in question just turned most, if not all of the street lights off .. Well listen to someone who has travelled the same route before .. there\'s an on switch located just a way ahead a bit and though not exactly hidden, you have to make your way there and locate it .. I hope you can cheer up soon my friend and see the light .. Neville
November 22nd, 2024 01:37
The Road
Doggerel Dave said:
Thought you had gone beyond that and given up completely. Phil - no acknowledgements to responses on your previous piece.... I hope all is well, despite the downbeat nature of this current post.
November 22nd, 2024 00:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Thought you had gone beyond that and given up completely. Phil - no acknowledgements to responses on your previous piece.... I hope all is well, despite the downbeat nature of this current post.
November 22nd, 2024 00:16
Our Universe
Dan Williams said:
I read where if the timeline of this world was ten miles long, humans would be about 1/16 inch. You nailed that here.
November 18th, 2024 01:12
Dan Williams said:
I read where if the timeline of this world was ten miles long, humans would be about 1/16 inch. You nailed that here.
November 18th, 2024 01:12
Our Universe
NafisaSB said:
made me sit up and think whether man is really master of the universe or just a very tiny molecule
great write
November 18th, 2024 00:47
NafisaSB said:
made me sit up and think whether man is really master of the universe or just a very tiny molecule
great write
November 18th, 2024 00:47
Our Universe
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write Phil and that final stanza is so true.
Andy
November 17th, 2024 03:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write Phil and that final stanza is so true.
Andy
November 17th, 2024 03:10
Our Universe
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, Phil; adolescence – infinity – dissociative state: been there.
True: all we have is our little patch (Earth) and fellow human beings.
Not sure if ‘and all we seek is our own happiness.’ Is observation or condemnation.
You took on the largest of subjects and made sense of it – so well said!
November 16th, 2024 17:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, Phil; adolescence – infinity – dissociative state: been there.
True: all we have is our little patch (Earth) and fellow human beings.
Not sure if ‘and all we seek is our own happiness.’ Is observation or condemnation.
You took on the largest of subjects and made sense of it – so well said!
November 16th, 2024 17:45
Our Universe
sorenbarrett said:
Size is such an interesting aspect of our universe both small and large it goes on forever. We live in our scale and are aware of others but in this there are many worlds and why do we think ours is unique? A most thought provoking write.
November 16th, 2024 13:34
sorenbarrett said:
Size is such an interesting aspect of our universe both small and large it goes on forever. We live in our scale and are aware of others but in this there are many worlds and why do we think ours is unique? A most thought provoking write.
November 16th, 2024 13:34
Our Universe
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This, my friend, is a wonderfully reflective write. You had me from “a universe of universes.”
🤯 Bravo! 🌹👏
November 16th, 2024 11:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This, my friend, is a wonderfully reflective write. You had me from “a universe of universes.”
🤯 Bravo! 🌹👏
November 16th, 2024 11:20
Our Universe
Teddy.15 said:
Some seriously beautiful reflection in here, love love love the end. 🌹
November 16th, 2024 11:13
Teddy.15 said:
Some seriously beautiful reflection in here, love love love the end. 🌹
November 16th, 2024 11:13
No One / The Law
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully true words Phil but I wish the leaders of the countries would see this as the way forwards.
Andy
November 16th, 2024 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully true words Phil but I wish the leaders of the countries would see this as the way forwards.
Andy
November 16th, 2024 02:25
No One / The Law
Doggerel Dave said:
I admire your powerful commitment, Phil.
I have to ask, however, who\'s law? and in how many western world nations do your implied criticisms not apply? My own view is that your identified faults are pretty much universal in varying degrees.
November 15th, 2024 19:10
Doggerel Dave said:
I admire your powerful commitment, Phil.
I have to ask, however, who\'s law? and in how many western world nations do your implied criticisms not apply? My own view is that your identified faults are pretty much universal in varying degrees.
November 15th, 2024 19:10
No One / The Law
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems applicable given the last election. Never the less we must think that all of the founding fathers were criminals being traitors punishable by death. One might say they were in the right so couldn\'t be guilty but it all depends on which side of the fence one is on. A wonderful write with power
November 15th, 2024 15:51
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems applicable given the last election. Never the less we must think that all of the founding fathers were criminals being traitors punishable by death. One might say they were in the right so couldn\'t be guilty but it all depends on which side of the fence one is on. A wonderful write with power
November 15th, 2024 15:51
If Only
Teddy.15 said:
Not just beautifully written but something myself reflects on every single day, can you imagine if the leaders of each country had to be on the frontline? Kudos powerful and something to think about for everyone. 🌹
November 15th, 2024 02:44
Teddy.15 said:
Not just beautifully written but something myself reflects on every single day, can you imagine if the leaders of each country had to be on the frontline? Kudos powerful and something to think about for everyone. 🌹
November 15th, 2024 02:44
If Only
Cassie58 said:
We live in dangerous times. There is so much here in your powerful lines to consider. Sadly there is money in warfare and there are leaders who are happy for it to continue. Most are terrified of it and the outcomes. Do I have much hope for the future ……..
November 14th, 2024 08:13
Cassie58 said:
We live in dangerous times. There is so much here in your powerful lines to consider. Sadly there is money in warfare and there are leaders who are happy for it to continue. Most are terrified of it and the outcomes. Do I have much hope for the future ……..
November 14th, 2024 08:13
If Only
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful message with great power, but grave consequences. Beautifully written.
November 14th, 2024 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful message with great power, but grave consequences. Beautifully written.
November 14th, 2024 04:48
If Only
Neville said:
and shamelessly so many sleep easy .. tis indeed shameful .. we clearly have a choice to make and soon .. wake up and smell the coffee or the cordite .. the choice is collectively yours .. my bunker was completed four or five days ago .. Neville
November 14th, 2024 02:15
Neville said:
and shamelessly so many sleep easy .. tis indeed shameful .. we clearly have a choice to make and soon .. wake up and smell the coffee or the cordite .. the choice is collectively yours .. my bunker was completed four or five days ago .. Neville
November 14th, 2024 02:15
If Only
Doggerel Dave said:
Much propaganda glorifying war brainwashes.
Shrieks of horror at wars in other places.
Which country in the western world does NOT manufacture and export armaments?
Rhetoric from the media on the increase…
Inclined to hope climate change gets us first….
November 14th, 2024 01:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Much propaganda glorifying war brainwashes.
Shrieks of horror at wars in other places.
Which country in the western world does NOT manufacture and export armaments?
Rhetoric from the media on the increase…
Inclined to hope climate change gets us first….
November 14th, 2024 01:10
Far Away
Teddy.15 said:
If that\'s an invite I am there, so very beautiful dear Phil, where there is no pain, surely a destination for all. 🌹
November 13th, 2024 14:06
Teddy.15 said:
If that\'s an invite I am there, so very beautiful dear Phil, where there is no pain, surely a destination for all. 🌹
November 13th, 2024 14:06
Hot Off the Press
sorenbarrett said:
Many valid concerns here some are very troubling. All put to rhyme and with an easy flow.
November 12th, 2024 17:02
sorenbarrett said:
Many valid concerns here some are very troubling. All put to rhyme and with an easy flow.
November 12th, 2024 17:02
Far Away
Neville said:
At times, when the going get\'s really tough, I couldn\'t agree with you, or the underlying principle more .. I could very easily and willingly lose myself there .. N
November 12th, 2024 12:23
Neville said:
At times, when the going get\'s really tough, I couldn\'t agree with you, or the underlying principle more .. I could very easily and willingly lose myself there .. N
November 12th, 2024 12:23
Far Away
Goldfinch60 said:
They certainly can be found and when I find my island love will be there for all.
Andy
November 12th, 2024 03:22
Goldfinch60 said:
They certainly can be found and when I find my island love will be there for all.
Andy
November 12th, 2024 03:22
All
Doggerel Dave said:
That\'s nailing your colours to the mast Phil, and I\'m sure.....
November 8th, 2024 04:05
Doggerel Dave said:
That\'s nailing your colours to the mast Phil, and I\'m sure.....
November 8th, 2024 04:05
All
Neville said:
But it aint just a love poem .. take my word for it .. it\'s one helluva love poem .. 💜
November 8th, 2024 02:33
Neville said:
But it aint just a love poem .. take my word for it .. it\'s one helluva love poem .. 💜
November 8th, 2024 02:33
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