Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
Love
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the duality woven into this poem and as it intertwines how it resolves. Nicely done
December 23rd, 2024 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the duality woven into this poem and as it intertwines how it resolves. Nicely done
December 23rd, 2024 03:53
Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is what I have with my darling Mary and it will last for eternity Phil.
Andy
December 23rd, 2024 03:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is what I have with my darling Mary and it will last for eternity Phil.
Andy
December 23rd, 2024 03:17
Love
TobaniNataiella said:
The contrasting feelings of being in love, very well written, enjoyed the read
December 23rd, 2024 02:47
TobaniNataiella said:
The contrasting feelings of being in love, very well written, enjoyed the read
December 23rd, 2024 02:47
Love
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem Phil. Love, love, love. Where would we be without it? That moment when you know, itβs love and it will always be love. Merry Christmas to you and all you hold dear. πππ
December 22nd, 2024 23:27
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem Phil. Love, love, love. Where would we be without it? That moment when you know, itβs love and it will always be love. Merry Christmas to you and all you hold dear. πππ
December 22nd, 2024 23:27
Love
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Phil, touching on my favourite subject of all, it can leave us sitting on candy floss clouds or in the gutting scraping up what\'s left of our heart, that\'s the beauty of love. Wonderful work dear friend. πΉ
December 22nd, 2024 23:03
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Phil, touching on my favourite subject of all, it can leave us sitting on candy floss clouds or in the gutting scraping up what\'s left of our heart, that\'s the beauty of love. Wonderful work dear friend. πΉ
December 22nd, 2024 23:03
What\'s My Heart For?
arqios said:
Feeling that bereft-ness and it does seep into anything and everything. Much enjoyed!
December 15th, 2024 20:24
arqios said:
Feeling that bereft-ness and it does seep into anything and everything. Much enjoyed!
December 15th, 2024 20:24
What\'s My Heart For?
Teddy.15 said:
I wanted to highlight a stanza but I cannot, this is real poetry from the heart, my friend lost his wife to cancer, she was a beauty from Naples, I can tell you it is what I imagine he writes every day, I write for him when I write about love. π
December 5th, 2024 14:42
Teddy.15 said:
I wanted to highlight a stanza but I cannot, this is real poetry from the heart, my friend lost his wife to cancer, she was a beauty from Naples, I can tell you it is what I imagine he writes every day, I write for him when I write about love. π
December 5th, 2024 14:42
What\'s My Heart For?
TobaniNataiella said:
sad and difficult situation beautifully written about, I enjoyed reading
December 5th, 2024 14:17
TobaniNataiella said:
sad and difficult situation beautifully written about, I enjoyed reading
December 5th, 2024 14:17
What\'s My Heart For?
Neville said:
it\'s dreadful isn\'t it .. I mean that bloomin feeling you poetically allude to .. your poem tho\' is the exact polar opposite .. nice one brother Phil .. Neville
December 5th, 2024 13:58
Neville said:
it\'s dreadful isn\'t it .. I mean that bloomin feeling you poetically allude to .. your poem tho\' is the exact polar opposite .. nice one brother Phil .. Neville
December 5th, 2024 13:58
T & P
Neville said:
The old ones are often the best one\'s and in this case, they couldn\'t come any truer .. This needed to be said again and in my opinion, the message should be on a loop .. Neville
November 26th, 2024 01:41
Neville said:
The old ones are often the best one\'s and in this case, they couldn\'t come any truer .. This needed to be said again and in my opinion, the message should be on a loop .. Neville
November 26th, 2024 01:41
The Road
Teddy.15 said:
This could be about many things but I\'d put money on it being about route 66 π€£ dearest Phil atmosphere created. πΉ
November 26th, 2024 01:07
Teddy.15 said:
This could be about many things but I\'d put money on it being about route 66 π€£ dearest Phil atmosphere created. πΉ
November 26th, 2024 01:07
T & P
sorenbarrett said:
Well, written poem on a heavily divided issue. Nicely written.
November 23rd, 2024 08:20
sorenbarrett said:
Well, written poem on a heavily divided issue. Nicely written.
November 23rd, 2024 08:20
T & P
Cassie58 said:
I will never understand the mentality of allowing people to carry guns. We donβt have that here, they just carry knives instead. Our sick world is so violent. You tell it as it is Phil.
November 23rd, 2024 07:51
Cassie58 said:
I will never understand the mentality of allowing people to carry guns. We donβt have that here, they just carry knives instead. Our sick world is so violent. You tell it as it is Phil.
November 23rd, 2024 07:51
The Road
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Phil, I hope all is better soon.
Andy
November 22nd, 2024 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Phil, I hope all is better soon.
Andy
November 22nd, 2024 02:43
The Road
Neville said:
It can seem endlessly long, lonely and bleak can\'t it Phil .. I mean of course, the road and the route being travelled along .. My guess is, the she in question just turned most, if not all of the street lights off .. Well listen to someone who has travelled the same route before .. there\'s an on switch located just a way ahead a bit and though not exactly hidden, you have to make your way there and locate it .. I hope you can cheer up soon my friend and see the light .. Neville
November 22nd, 2024 01:37
Neville said:
It can seem endlessly long, lonely and bleak can\'t it Phil .. I mean of course, the road and the route being travelled along .. My guess is, the she in question just turned most, if not all of the street lights off .. Well listen to someone who has travelled the same route before .. there\'s an on switch located just a way ahead a bit and though not exactly hidden, you have to make your way there and locate it .. I hope you can cheer up soon my friend and see the light .. Neville
November 22nd, 2024 01:37
The Road
Doggerel Dave said:
Thought you had gone beyond that and given up completely. Phil - no acknowledgements to responses on your previous piece.... I hope all is well, despite the downbeat nature of this current post.
November 22nd, 2024 00:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Thought you had gone beyond that and given up completely. Phil - no acknowledgements to responses on your previous piece.... I hope all is well, despite the downbeat nature of this current post.
November 22nd, 2024 00:16
Our Universe
Dan Williams said:
I read where if the timeline of this world was ten miles long, humans would be about 1/16 inch. You nailed that here.
November 18th, 2024 01:12
Dan Williams said:
I read where if the timeline of this world was ten miles long, humans would be about 1/16 inch. You nailed that here.
November 18th, 2024 01:12
Our Universe
NafisaSB said:
made me sit up and think whether man is really master of the universe or just a very tiny molecule
great write
November 18th, 2024 00:47
NafisaSB said:
made me sit up and think whether man is really master of the universe or just a very tiny molecule
great write
November 18th, 2024 00:47
Our Universe
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write Phil and that final stanza is so true.
Andy
November 17th, 2024 03:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write Phil and that final stanza is so true.
Andy
November 17th, 2024 03:10
Our Universe
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, Phil; adolescence β infinity β dissociative state: been there.
True: all we have is our little patch (Earth) and fellow human beings.
Not sure if βand all we seek is our own happiness.β Is observation or condemnation.
You took on the largest of subjects and made sense of it β so well said!
November 16th, 2024 17:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, Phil; adolescence β infinity β dissociative state: been there.
True: all we have is our little patch (Earth) and fellow human beings.
Not sure if βand all we seek is our own happiness.β Is observation or condemnation.
You took on the largest of subjects and made sense of it β so well said!
November 16th, 2024 17:45
Our Universe
sorenbarrett said:
Size is such an interesting aspect of our universe both small and large it goes on forever. We live in our scale and are aware of others but in this there are many worlds and why do we think ours is unique? A most thought provoking write.
November 16th, 2024 13:34
sorenbarrett said:
Size is such an interesting aspect of our universe both small and large it goes on forever. We live in our scale and are aware of others but in this there are many worlds and why do we think ours is unique? A most thought provoking write.
November 16th, 2024 13:34
Our Universe
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This, my friend, is a wonderfully reflective write. You had me from βa universe of universes.β
π€― Bravo! πΉπ
November 16th, 2024 11:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This, my friend, is a wonderfully reflective write. You had me from βa universe of universes.β
π€― Bravo! πΉπ
November 16th, 2024 11:20
Our Universe
Teddy.15 said:
Some seriously beautiful reflection in here, love love love the end. πΉ
November 16th, 2024 11:13
Teddy.15 said:
Some seriously beautiful reflection in here, love love love the end. πΉ
November 16th, 2024 11:13
No One / The Law
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully true words Phil but I wish the leaders of the countries would see this as the way forwards.
Andy
November 16th, 2024 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully true words Phil but I wish the leaders of the countries would see this as the way forwards.
Andy
November 16th, 2024 02:25
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