Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
A Walk in the Sun
Neville said:
Blimey .. very lucky indeed .. a narrow escape and a bloomin good poem out of it to boot ..
Makes one both think and realise we don\'t know what\'s around the next corner .. Neville
May 31st, 2024 01:09
Neville said:
Blimey .. very lucky indeed .. a narrow escape and a bloomin good poem out of it to boot ..
Makes one both think and realise we don\'t know what\'s around the next corner .. Neville
May 31st, 2024 01:09
A Walk in the Sun
Goldfinch60 said:
Those walks in the cold can be very uplifting Phil, so glad you didn\'t go there later.
Andy
May 31st, 2024 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Those walks in the cold can be very uplifting Phil, so glad you didn\'t go there later.
Andy
May 31st, 2024 01:08
A Walk in the Sun
Doggerel Dave said:
You were potentially at the wrong place, but definitely at the right time, Phil.
BTW Never heard \"downright ransom-like\" as a description of the competitive qualities of crowds before. Sums them up perfectly.
May 31st, 2024 00:48
Doggerel Dave said:
You were potentially at the wrong place, but definitely at the right time, Phil.
BTW Never heard \"downright ransom-like\" as a description of the competitive qualities of crowds before. Sums them up perfectly.
May 31st, 2024 00:48
A Walk in the Sun
Teddy.15 said:
We must never underestimate mother nature that\'s for sure, your imagery glorious and I\'m so glad you were safe dear Phil, at least knowing now the dangers, unfortunately there are so many. A brilliant thought provoking piece. 🌹
May 31st, 2024 00:21
Teddy.15 said:
We must never underestimate mother nature that\'s for sure, your imagery glorious and I\'m so glad you were safe dear Phil, at least knowing now the dangers, unfortunately there are so many. A brilliant thought provoking piece. 🌹
May 31st, 2024 00:21
Time of Blindness
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful dream Phil and then the wife wakes you. LOL
Andy
May 28th, 2024 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful dream Phil and then the wife wakes you. LOL
Andy
May 28th, 2024 01:26
Time of Blindness
Teddy.15 said:
Well you certainly kept me on my toes from beginning to end, superb, and well done for the last lines 🤣 beautiful rejection and imagery. I seem to be forever at the doctor\'s these days and so I can certainly relate. My dear Phil, stay well and oh such a joy to see you home with us here at MPS where you should always be. 🌹
May 28th, 2024 01:04
Teddy.15 said:
Well you certainly kept me on my toes from beginning to end, superb, and well done for the last lines 🤣 beautiful rejection and imagery. I seem to be forever at the doctor\'s these days and so I can certainly relate. My dear Phil, stay well and oh such a joy to see you home with us here at MPS where you should always be. 🌹
May 28th, 2024 01:04
Time of Blindness
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh so ethereal but reality impinges.
Good to see you back, MF.
May 27th, 2024 23:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh so ethereal but reality impinges.
Good to see you back, MF.
May 27th, 2024 23:21
Time of Blindness
Neville said:
This is absolutely bloomin brilliant sir .. you had me going write from the off .. indeed any poetry that refers to a lazy git wins my vote hands down … stay well and write on brother Fences .. Neville
May 27th, 2024 14:53
Neville said:
This is absolutely bloomin brilliant sir .. you had me going write from the off .. indeed any poetry that refers to a lazy git wins my vote hands down … stay well and write on brother Fences .. Neville
May 27th, 2024 14:53
Over the Garden Wall
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent work. You paint the scene well.
March 16th, 2024 23:04
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent work. You paint the scene well.
March 16th, 2024 23:04
Over the Garden Wall
Accidental Poet said:
A wonderful write Phil. \"SHE\" is obviously someone you adore so much that you build your garden to please her. I know this because I do the same myself. 🌹
March 8th, 2024 08:58
Accidental Poet said:
A wonderful write Phil. \"SHE\" is obviously someone you adore so much that you build your garden to please her. I know this because I do the same myself. 🌹
March 8th, 2024 08:58
Over the Garden Wall
Neville said:
well, well, well it has finally sprung .. what a mischievous masterpiece Phil
March 8th, 2024 04:34
Neville said:
well, well, well it has finally sprung .. what a mischievous masterpiece Phil
March 8th, 2024 04:34
Over the Garden Wall
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write Phil, as the warden I will let you grow the roses by the clematis.
Andy
March 8th, 2024 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write Phil, as the warden I will let you grow the roses by the clematis.
Andy
March 8th, 2024 02:53
Over the Garden Wall
Teddy.15 said:
I\'d say spring is definitely up! lol 🤣 last lines suggest living in very comfy accommodation. Your imagery superb as ever. 🌹 Happy spring dear phil. Daffodil\'s and all.
March 7th, 2024 17:24
Teddy.15 said:
I\'d say spring is definitely up! lol 🤣 last lines suggest living in very comfy accommodation. Your imagery superb as ever. 🌹 Happy spring dear phil. Daffodil\'s and all.
March 7th, 2024 17:24
Winter Dreams On The Horizon
Teddy.15 said:
Such emotion and then to the last lines, love is everything and is written in each of our souls. I cannot help but think I have read this one before. It\'s beautiful showing a gentleman has a heart. 🌹
March 7th, 2024 17:21
Teddy.15 said:
Such emotion and then to the last lines, love is everything and is written in each of our souls. I cannot help but think I have read this one before. It\'s beautiful showing a gentleman has a heart. 🌹
March 7th, 2024 17:21
Over the Garden Wall
Doggerel Dave said:
😅Love commeth in many stripes, Phil. I really enjoyed the garden....... the Love..... well....
March 7th, 2024 16:12
Doggerel Dave said:
😅Love commeth in many stripes, Phil. I really enjoyed the garden....... the Love..... well....
March 7th, 2024 16:12
Winter Dreams On The Horizon
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Phil.
Andy
March 6th, 2024 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Phil.
Andy
March 6th, 2024 02:16
Winter Dreams On The Horizon
Neville said:
this may be another love poem, but who on earth is gonna complain about that ..
I sure aint and I doubt anyone who passes by this way will either .. I was hooked from the start and that unexpected summative line at the end not only landed me, it left me feeling gutted .. I am so glad you are back Phil .. Neville
March 6th, 2024 00:41
Neville said:
this may be another love poem, but who on earth is gonna complain about that ..
I sure aint and I doubt anyone who passes by this way will either .. I was hooked from the start and that unexpected summative line at the end not only landed me, it left me feeling gutted .. I am so glad you are back Phil .. Neville
March 6th, 2024 00:41
Winter Dreams On The Horizon
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh – another love poem; a form I can have a certain antipathy towards because of this allergy of mine. But yours are the cream on top and provided I taste them carefully, the reaction is not too profound and by the end quite satisfying.
I felt that to be a good ‘un, Phil.
March 5th, 2024 18:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh – another love poem; a form I can have a certain antipathy towards because of this allergy of mine. But yours are the cream on top and provided I taste them carefully, the reaction is not too profound and by the end quite satisfying.
I felt that to be a good ‘un, Phil.
March 5th, 2024 18:16
War
Accidental Poet said:
War can serve no purpose among living species of heartbeat. Hatred and killing of life is not what humans were put on this Earth for. Your poem (as Neville said) hits the nail squarely on the head. Defending ourselves is a natural reaction, but no one should have to in the first place. Excellent write Phil. 👍
January 17th, 2024 05:47
Accidental Poet said:
War can serve no purpose among living species of heartbeat. Hatred and killing of life is not what humans were put on this Earth for. Your poem (as Neville said) hits the nail squarely on the head. Defending ourselves is a natural reaction, but no one should have to in the first place. Excellent write Phil. 👍
January 17th, 2024 05:47
War
Neville said:
War is good for nothing .. You just hit the nail on its head and hammered it home sir Phil .. Peace, Love & All Good Things, Neville
January 17th, 2024 02:03
Neville said:
War is good for nothing .. You just hit the nail on its head and hammered it home sir Phil .. Peace, Love & All Good Things, Neville
January 17th, 2024 02:03
War
Cassie58 said:
War is futile. No one wins, but do you allow the aggressor to stamp all over you without putting up any resistance? It was before my time, but I’m bloomin glad Churchill protected the borders of the UK from invasion. You write a good poem and cover much ground.
January 16th, 2024 04:00
Cassie58 said:
War is futile. No one wins, but do you allow the aggressor to stamp all over you without putting up any resistance? It was before my time, but I’m bloomin glad Churchill protected the borders of the UK from invasion. You write a good poem and cover much ground.
January 16th, 2024 04:00
War
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a superb poem Phil and so very true.
I don\'t do this very often but this is going into my favourites.
Andy
January 16th, 2024 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a superb poem Phil and so very true.
I don\'t do this very often but this is going into my favourites.
Andy
January 16th, 2024 02:23
War
Doggerel Dave said:
I.......... (You know what I would write, with respect to war, don\'t you Phil?)
A bloody good argument I cannot fault.
January 16th, 2024 00:32
Doggerel Dave said:
I.......... (You know what I would write, with respect to war, don\'t you Phil?)
A bloody good argument I cannot fault.
January 16th, 2024 00:32
The Long Goodbye
Teddy.15 said:
So very sadly beautiful, how you have touched the stings of my heart with this Phil, your imagery and emotion is superb. You bring the word good ye such powerful meaning.
January 10th, 2024 14:08
Teddy.15 said:
So very sadly beautiful, how you have touched the stings of my heart with this Phil, your imagery and emotion is superb. You bring the word good ye such powerful meaning.
January 10th, 2024 14:08
The Long Goodbye
Neville said:
while the streets held citizenry a broken & empty heart was clearly left behind .. this is no ordinary poem that bangs on about love and loss .. this carries with it both a forewarning of enforced separation and an aftertaste of bereavement in its broadest sense .. a true mourning song .. with much respect sir I am delighted to be able to leave my mark here now ... Neville
December 18th, 2023 02:02
Neville said:
while the streets held citizenry a broken & empty heart was clearly left behind .. this is no ordinary poem that bangs on about love and loss .. this carries with it both a forewarning of enforced separation and an aftertaste of bereavement in its broadest sense .. a true mourning song .. with much respect sir I am delighted to be able to leave my mark here now ... Neville
December 18th, 2023 02:02
Closing Time
Neville said:
Phew Phil .. for a moment you had me in palpitation mode .. glad to learn you are okay .. Seasonal greetings to you and yours sir .. Neville
December 15th, 2023 16:01
Neville said:
Phew Phil .. for a moment you had me in palpitation mode .. glad to learn you are okay .. Seasonal greetings to you and yours sir .. Neville
December 15th, 2023 16:01
The Long Goodbye
Accidental Poet said:
In your very well written poem you didn\'t mention why she was leaving. I\'d like to think she wasn\'t leaving to move away from you. My Sharon moved away at 14 with her family to Los Angeles. Sometimes it\'s not good-bye, but until we meet again. Smile Phil, for the time you had with each other however brief it may have been, I hope for both of you it was worth it. 🙂
December 5th, 2023 09:10
Accidental Poet said:
In your very well written poem you didn\'t mention why she was leaving. I\'d like to think she wasn\'t leaving to move away from you. My Sharon moved away at 14 with her family to Los Angeles. Sometimes it\'s not good-bye, but until we meet again. Smile Phil, for the time you had with each other however brief it may have been, I hope for both of you it was worth it. 🙂
December 5th, 2023 09:10
The Long Goodbye
Doggerel Dave said:
I relate to the time distortion which can occur with the occurrence of traumatic events, Phil.
You are one of the very few poets I can tolerate love poetry from.
December 5th, 2023 06:41
Doggerel Dave said:
I relate to the time distortion which can occur with the occurrence of traumatic events, Phil.
You are one of the very few poets I can tolerate love poetry from.
December 5th, 2023 06:41
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