Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
The Valley of Ten Thousand Smokes - A series of poetic puzzles
MendedFences27 said:
I will soon be posting the answers. On July 28 to be exact.
July 17th, 2025 11:38
MendedFences27 said:
I will soon be posting the answers. On July 28 to be exact.
July 17th, 2025 11:38
The Valley of Ten Thousand Smokes - 3
Teddy.15 said:
The third is it Erle Stanley Gardner?
July 17th, 2025 01:34
Teddy.15 said:
The third is it Erle Stanley Gardner?
July 17th, 2025 01:34
The Valley of Ten Thousand Smokes - 3
Teddy.15 said:
The first one is George Orwell?
Second perhaps Caroline Curteis?
July 17th, 2025 00:56
Teddy.15 said:
The first one is George Orwell?
Second perhaps Caroline Curteis?
July 17th, 2025 00:56
The Valley of Ten Thousand Smokes - 3
Poetic Licence said:
I am loving the concept but this is above my station, I have no doubt someone will have the answers, enjoyed the read and the work put into this
July 16th, 2025 18:15
Poetic Licence said:
I am loving the concept but this is above my station, I have no doubt someone will have the answers, enjoyed the read and the work put into this
July 16th, 2025 18:15
The Valley of Ten Thousand Smokes - 3
sorenbarrett said:
These are great poetic puzzles that are beyond my reach at the moment but loved the form and intricacy involved in this work a fave
July 16th, 2025 15:14
sorenbarrett said:
These are great poetic puzzles that are beyond my reach at the moment but loved the form and intricacy involved in this work a fave
July 16th, 2025 15:14
Following Thoughts
NafisaSB said:
your reflection shows deep empathy and is so wise..God bless and may these thoughts multiply, and fly out to reach and embrace mankind
July 16th, 2025 00:27
NafisaSB said:
your reflection shows deep empathy and is so wise..God bless and may these thoughts multiply, and fly out to reach and embrace mankind
July 16th, 2025 00:27
Following Thoughts
Tony Grannell said:
A delightful and endearing collection of thoughts as love is left blank on paper but never in life - that inexplicable feeling.
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 11th, 2025 13:21
Tony Grannell said:
A delightful and endearing collection of thoughts as love is left blank on paper but never in life - that inexplicable feeling.
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 11th, 2025 13:21
What\'s in a Name?
Neville said:
this may well be a made-up tale of a misunderstanding, but and it\'s a BIG BUT mind, there can be no mistaking that this is a remarkable undertaking .. a tale told to poetic perfection .. and then some .. Neville
July 10th, 2025 16:25
Neville said:
this may well be a made-up tale of a misunderstanding, but and it\'s a BIG BUT mind, there can be no mistaking that this is a remarkable undertaking .. a tale told to poetic perfection .. and then some .. Neville
July 10th, 2025 16:25
Following Thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Phil, love being the most important.
Andy
July 10th, 2025 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Phil, love being the most important.
Andy
July 10th, 2025 01:25
Following Thoughts
Neville said:
I am willing to bet that not a single reader of these fine words left this page without feeling a warm glow and wearing a very broad smile on their face .. Top notch & then some .. Neville
July 10th, 2025 01:18
Neville said:
I am willing to bet that not a single reader of these fine words left this page without feeling a warm glow and wearing a very broad smile on their face .. Top notch & then some .. Neville
July 10th, 2025 01:18
Following Thoughts
Doggerel Dave said:
Cannot help but enjoy and admire the bravery when around here, you leave Love as a blank. 👍👍
July 10th, 2025 00:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Cannot help but enjoy and admire the bravery when around here, you leave Love as a blank. 👍👍
July 10th, 2025 00:29
Following Thoughts
Poetic Licence said:
That may be short, but it is beautiful and true, lovely write
July 9th, 2025 11:57
Poetic Licence said:
That may be short, but it is beautiful and true, lovely write
July 9th, 2025 11:57
Following Thoughts
arqios said:
Good one, Phil! Elementally encompassing.... love is their sum and more 🕊️🙏🏻
July 9th, 2025 09:52
arqios said:
Good one, Phil! Elementally encompassing.... love is their sum and more 🕊️🙏🏻
July 9th, 2025 09:52
Following Thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and all true the ring out like a bell. Lovely
July 9th, 2025 09:48
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and all true the ring out like a bell. Lovely
July 9th, 2025 09:48
What\'s in a Name?
Poetic Licence said:
A nice crafted story with my more meaning than first meets the eye, enjoyed the read
July 8th, 2025 23:54
Poetic Licence said:
A nice crafted story with my more meaning than first meets the eye, enjoyed the read
July 8th, 2025 23:54
What\'s in a Name?
sorenbarrett said:
A great story and double meanings in words make it all the better.
July 8th, 2025 20:01
sorenbarrett said:
A great story and double meanings in words make it all the better.
July 8th, 2025 20:01
Myths of Madness
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m proud to say, I\'m 50 years old and I got this completely, wonderful poetry rhyme and theme 🌹
July 6th, 2025 10:23
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m proud to say, I\'m 50 years old and I got this completely, wonderful poetry rhyme and theme 🌹
July 6th, 2025 10:23
Myths of Madness
arqios said:
Phil, this poem charges through history, myth, and media with the force of disillusionment sharpened into vision. It dismantles old illusions: gods, idols, cinema stars; and names the rot behind their marble with clarity and fire. My response joins that current, reflecting your reckoning with both reverence and resistance, recognising A.I. as the new mythmaker, scripting its own Olympus in real time. What you’ve created is not a breakdown but a decoding, and you hold the lens with unflinching grace 🕊️🙏🏻
July 6th, 2025 06:26
arqios said:
Phil, this poem charges through history, myth, and media with the force of disillusionment sharpened into vision. It dismantles old illusions: gods, idols, cinema stars; and names the rot behind their marble with clarity and fire. My response joins that current, reflecting your reckoning with both reverence and resistance, recognising A.I. as the new mythmaker, scripting its own Olympus in real time. What you’ve created is not a breakdown but a decoding, and you hold the lens with unflinching grace 🕊️🙏🏻
July 6th, 2025 06:26
Myths of Madness
Poetic Licence said:
Very creative and entertaining read, nicely crafted
July 6th, 2025 06:12
Poetic Licence said:
Very creative and entertaining read, nicely crafted
July 6th, 2025 06:12
Myths of Madness
sorenbarrett said:
The clever insertion of Famous past stars of the silver screen was ingenious and sparks a fave. A most fun read
July 6th, 2025 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
The clever insertion of Famous past stars of the silver screen was ingenious and sparks a fave. A most fun read
July 6th, 2025 03:51
Knight Has Fallen
Goldfinch60 said:
That relationship will fall into pure love Phil once his armour is removed.
Andy
July 2nd, 2025 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
That relationship will fall into pure love Phil once his armour is removed.
Andy
July 2nd, 2025 02:00
Knight Has Fallen
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write with a valid message, we have all fallen for the allure of passion only to find it\'s poison, once sucked in saying good bye is hard, but you have to, nicely expressed and written
July 1st, 2025 19:12
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write with a valid message, we have all fallen for the allure of passion only to find it\'s poison, once sucked in saying good bye is hard, but you have to, nicely expressed and written
July 1st, 2025 19:12
Knight Has Fallen
Teddy.15 said:
A deep regret to losing love, you have written this with every bit of reality that comes with broken love, pain torture emptiness and nothingness, skies simply void. Kudos on your imagery 🌹
July 1st, 2025 18:16
Teddy.15 said:
A deep regret to losing love, you have written this with every bit of reality that comes with broken love, pain torture emptiness and nothingness, skies simply void. Kudos on your imagery 🌹
July 1st, 2025 18:16
Knight Has Fallen
sorenbarrett said:
We all see ourselves as knights or damsels and in this metaphor many relationships are such allure with ulterior motives, passion driven and latter used. Such need to be said good bye to. A most poetic write with a great message.
July 1st, 2025 16:17
sorenbarrett said:
We all see ourselves as knights or damsels and in this metaphor many relationships are such allure with ulterior motives, passion driven and latter used. Such need to be said good bye to. A most poetic write with a great message.
July 1st, 2025 16:17
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