Comments received on poems by MendedFences27



I Need To Be Near You
Neville said:



Been there, done that & you clearly have too sir .. well scribed ..

August 11th, 2024 02:36

I Need To Be Near You
Goldfinch60 said:

You will always be near her in your heart Phil.

Andy

August 11th, 2024 01:39

Deep Sixed
Dan Williams said:

\"rude dancing in the nightclub\" will buy you grief every time. Kind of skip this with the redhead. Good work.

August 11th, 2024 00:24

I Need To Be Near You
sorenbarrett said:

Nice write a n enjoyable read.

August 10th, 2024 19:52

Deep Sixed
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Phil, it can happen so 0ften.

Andy

August 10th, 2024 01:24

Brokenhearted Charities
Goldfinch60 said:

Such an important number Phil.

Andy

August 10th, 2024 01:10

Deep Sixed
Doggerel Dave said:

\"parting is such sweet sorrow\"

Holidays are so brief - but I found myself very entertained from my deckchair (well clear of trouble).

August 9th, 2024 19:15

Deep Sixed
sorenbarrett said:

This one brightened my afternoon and that is all I can ask of a poem Loved it.

August 9th, 2024 12:02

Deep Sixed
Teddy.15 said:

Something\'s just aren\'t meant to be, I do hope he had better times with the redhead. 🌹

August 9th, 2024 11:50

Deep Sixed
Neville said:


the full five & three quarters always raises a smile .. if nothing else ..

this is another brilliant snippet from what is rapidly becoming one of my favourite portfolios sir Fences27 :)

August 9th, 2024 11:09

Brokenhearted Charities
Doggerel Dave said:

Look at how technology and \'Love\' keep the economy stimulated.
Can you franchise that out? there\'s enough profit there for everyone to have a fair return.
Good laugh, Phil with just the merest smattering of cynicism I feel.

August 8th, 2024 17:28

Brokenhearted Charities
Neville said:


You are not only funny, you are amazing Phil ..

Hou have got this particular poetic genre sewn up my friend .. Neville

August 8th, 2024 13:38

Brokenhearted Charities
Teddy.15 said:

I would give you $ 19.99 for your wonderful ironic humour, what a jar you\'ve opened on love, inspiring to say the least, brilliant and I think I may chuckle all evening, Phil the agony uncle on the radio 📻 keeping the world honest, love it\'s not all sunshine and rainbows this is a kudos. 🌹

August 8th, 2024 09:58

Blue Song at Night
Goldfinch60 said:

Caught at last Phil. Well done.

Andy

August 8th, 2024 01:38

Blue Song at Night
rrodriguez said:

This is quite a tale that can be transformed into a micro-story. I liked the rhyme and the story it tells. Great job!

August 7th, 2024 20:16

Blue Song at Night
Doggerel Dave said:

Age old tradition - do it in chapters, Phil.
I always find it satisfying to have achieved the end. Fined up nicely. It is open enders I\'m not fond of.

August 7th, 2024 18:13

Blue Song at Night
Bella Shepard said:

Nicely done, a touch of Agatha Christie there, loved it.

August 7th, 2024 14:49

Blue Song at Night
Neville said:



There are some real nasty folk about aren\'t there Phil .. a torrid tale told tantalizingly well ..

August 7th, 2024 11:38

Blue Song at Night
Teddy.15 said:

Your dramatic imagery brings the reader to the forefront of this. A very serious subject, I love your title. It\'s an open book. 🌹

August 7th, 2024 11:18

Blue Song at Night
sorenbarrett said:

Quite the story, I just don\'t think I could stomach a chocolate martini

August 7th, 2024 10:04

Blue Song in Evening
Goldfinch60 said:

Swim away then Phil. Good words.

Andy

August 7th, 2024 01:57

Blue Song in Evening
Bella Shepard said:

I\'m engrossed, can\'t wait for the next episode. Good Write!

August 6th, 2024 12:52

Blue Song in Evening
sorenbarrett said:

Quite the story. nicely done.

August 6th, 2024 11:17

Blue Song at Noon
Teddy.15 said:

I love the blues, hey you have a few of these songs under your wings. Love this. 🌹

August 6th, 2024 01:28

Corona
Dan Williams said:

I\'m pretty sure I have done this dance. Nice work.

August 5th, 2024 23:00

Blue Song at Noon
sorenbarrett said:

I personally like the blues, well not all blues, but some. A most interesting story let\'s see how it ends.

August 5th, 2024 16:13

Corona
Teddy.15 said:

LOL let\'s hope it\'s the beer and not the virus 🤣🤣🤣 ice cold on tap. Loved your imagery a summer poem very nicely done. 🌹

August 5th, 2024 03:38

Corona
Neville said:



I could say maybe you had had your Phil .. but I wont .. and you were funny, so there .. 👍

August 5th, 2024 03:06

Corona
Goldfinch60 said:

Corona used to be delivered to the door when I was a youngster Phil. Good times.

Andy

August 5th, 2024 01:51

Corona
Doggerel Dave said:

Got a refund scheme on the bottles? Cash the empties in and you\'ve got enough for another full bottle....

August 4th, 2024 17:29



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