Comments received on poems by MendedFences27



A Smile
Teddy.15 said:

As romantic poetry is one of my favourite types I\'m smiling away. Beautifully done dearest Phil. 🌹

July 29th, 2024 03:18

To Be Loved
Teddy.15 said:

Incredibly sad, love can make people like this, sad yet beautifully written in imagery and emotion. 🌹

July 29th, 2024 02:46

To Be Loved
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive words Phil, true love can have this effect on people.

Andy

July 29th, 2024 01:45

To Be Loved
Neville said:


I see a lot of this .. but often you just dont see it coming .. sadly enjoyed & muchly Phil .. Neville

July 28th, 2024 12:02

A Smile
Neville said:


this is a super little poem that does exactly as it says on the label & makes the reader do it too .. :)

July 28th, 2024 02:22

A Smile
Goldfinch60 said:

A smile is such a wonderful thing to give to others.

Andy

July 28th, 2024 01:57

A Smile
sorenbarrett said:

A smile is always welcome and can change one\'s attitude from gray to bright. Nicely done

July 27th, 2024 20:09

A Smile
Caring dove said:

A lovely and gentle writing

July 27th, 2024 15:42

A Smile
Cassie58 said:

A smile can be such a gift. A lovely uplifting poem. All the best.

July 27th, 2024 13:42

Meadows
Neville said:



I quite understand your fondness for these fine words .. I enjoyed them too & then some .. well done my friend ..


July 27th, 2024 03:26

Meadows
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words about our seasons Phil.

Andy

July 27th, 2024 01:40

Meadows
Dan Williams said:

\"Recall smoky memories of things left undone\" You reading my mail? Good work.

July 27th, 2024 01:22

Shadows
Dan Williams said:

Boy, and I thought I was grim. \"Am I truly insane or is my imagination\" = the age old question.

July 27th, 2024 01:18

Meadows
Tony36 said:

Love it

July 26th, 2024 18:01

Meadows
Doggerel Dave said:

I see you smoothly transitioning through time with past memories trailing in your wake.
Smooth and complete, Phil.


July 26th, 2024 16:22

Meadows
sorenbarrett said:

This poem brought on feelings of the past and the cycle of life as it goes by. The rhyme was subtle and hypnotic leaving me by those meadows of the past and present. I could feel them and see this as a work of art. Very nice

July 26th, 2024 12:55

Shadows
sorenbarrett said:

A questioning of one\'s mental state is always a good sign. Those that don\'t question remain locked in. Nicely done

July 26th, 2024 06:06

Shadows
Teddy.15 said:

What a magnificent thought it is dear Phil, very relatable too my friend. 🌹

July 26th, 2024 02:48

Shadows
Goldfinch60 said:

Being alone can bring many thoughts into the mind Phil. Good write.

Andy

July 26th, 2024 01:21

Shadows
Doggerel Dave said:

That piece has more substance than those shadows, Phil. And I hope they will be easy enough to blow away once I move on.....

July 25th, 2024 18:44

Shadows
Neville said:



You are a dark horse aint ya .. this is far more than just a thought .. this is another cracker .. Neville

July 25th, 2024 16:59

The Lutenist
sorenbarrett said:

Magnificent, set in a classical form it carries on with the last lines like the finale in a symphony give it closure.

July 25th, 2024 06:19

The Lutenist
Neville said:



Brilliant .. brings pure joy to an old fella\'s imagination .. Neville

July 25th, 2024 03:38

The Lutenist
Teddy.15 said:

lol brilliant. 🌹

July 25th, 2024 03:14

Thoughts 11
Dan Williams said:

All good, last line really nails it.

July 25th, 2024 00:10

Thoughts 11
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good intriguing words Phil.

Andy

July 24th, 2024 01:57

The Last Day
Dan Williams said:

I know this song way too well. Sympathies. Nice work.

July 24th, 2024 00:34

Thoughts 11
Doggerel Dave said:

Champagne is well covered here, and yes I\'d agree. but I continue to be drawn back to your opening stanza, Phil.
I found it hard initially to get past that one.


July 23rd, 2024 19:56

Thoughts 11
sorenbarrett said:

\"Equality’s flaw
is, we desire it only
with those above us.\"
Great stanza. A lot of truth in this piece.

July 23rd, 2024 17:57

Thoughts 11
Neville said:


It is clear to me that much creative thought, insight and a sapiential awareness all came together at precisely the write moment in order for this little beauty to be conceived in the first instance and delivered perfectly formed .. a real belter if you don\'t mind me saying so .. and that champagne reference is to die for my friend .. Neville


July 23rd, 2024 16:32



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