Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
Conspiracy Theory
jarcher54 said:
Witty and subtly poignant. A whole love story in a few couplets. Not a hint of artifice, just a touching story told in a way that only poetry can, a stream of images and observations, scenes and exchanges. Bittersweet and reflects a man of deep observations and experience, of even deeper humanity. Thanks!
May 6th, 2023 22:30
jarcher54 said:
Witty and subtly poignant. A whole love story in a few couplets. Not a hint of artifice, just a touching story told in a way that only poetry can, a stream of images and observations, scenes and exchanges. Bittersweet and reflects a man of deep observations and experience, of even deeper humanity. Thanks!
May 6th, 2023 22:30
Our World Today
L. B. Mek said:
so pinpoint, acute
especially:
\'The gun dealer is a model citizen\'
(people seldom realise, just
how many guns are in circulation
in USA
and how such a small percentage
create all the issues
and yet, how the very existence
of all those decent citizens
that practice safe gun handling
and ownership, processes
keep the government, from getting
too ambitious...)
an important write, dear Poet
April 28th, 2023 03:42
L. B. Mek said:
so pinpoint, acute
especially:
\'The gun dealer is a model citizen\'
(people seldom realise, just
how many guns are in circulation
in USA
and how such a small percentage
create all the issues
and yet, how the very existence
of all those decent citizens
that practice safe gun handling
and ownership, processes
keep the government, from getting
too ambitious...)
an important write, dear Poet
April 28th, 2023 03:42
Fingers
Neville said:
two things immediately struck me about these fine words .. firstly how incredibly beautiful you have penned them and just as beautifully too ....... Neville
April 26th, 2023 10:35
Neville said:
two things immediately struck me about these fine words .. firstly how incredibly beautiful you have penned them and just as beautifully too ....... Neville
April 26th, 2023 10:35
Fingers
L. B. Mek said:
such relatable imagery
and impactful emotive bravery
so many of us, have shared
in such similar events, but
most of us lack the bravery
to word our hurt, so acutely
(I hope these words
have some, cathartic healing
valuation, to you
dear Poet
so that it\'s not just your readers
who benefit
by your purposed utilisation
of poetic therapy)
thank you! a great read
April 24th, 2023 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
such relatable imagery
and impactful emotive bravery
so many of us, have shared
in such similar events, but
most of us lack the bravery
to word our hurt, so acutely
(I hope these words
have some, cathartic healing
valuation, to you
dear Poet
so that it\'s not just your readers
who benefit
by your purposed utilisation
of poetic therapy)
thank you! a great read
April 24th, 2023 03:54
Fingers
Doggerel Dave said:
Love poem which I\'m prepared to read only because you wrote it Phil, and therefore I\'m guaranteed a smooth read, free of saccharine sentimentality.
April 24th, 2023 01:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Love poem which I\'m prepared to read only because you wrote it Phil, and therefore I\'m guaranteed a smooth read, free of saccharine sentimentality.
April 24th, 2023 01:38
Senryus 5
L. B. Mek said:
loved this, a great read
dear Poet
(more meaningful when there\'s an evolving thread
adding to those syllable count, depths
succinct wording, as only a beginning
to poetry\'s euphonious brevity)
April 21st, 2023 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
loved this, a great read
dear Poet
(more meaningful when there\'s an evolving thread
adding to those syllable count, depths
succinct wording, as only a beginning
to poetry\'s euphonious brevity)
April 21st, 2023 04:16
Our World Today
Doggerel Dave said:
😂 Good to laugh Phil, otherwise.... Large parts of your picture can be pasted on a few places I can think of (no names...) partly because they feel impelled to slavishly follow \'the greatest economy in the world.\'
April 19th, 2023 20:09
Doggerel Dave said:
😂 Good to laugh Phil, otherwise.... Large parts of your picture can be pasted on a few places I can think of (no names...) partly because they feel impelled to slavishly follow \'the greatest economy in the world.\'
April 19th, 2023 20:09
20 Hours to Memphis
Bobby O said:
What a surprise ending. He left this world happy and that fir Mr ersps the story in joy
April 18th, 2023 23:19
Bobby O said:
What a surprise ending. He left this world happy and that fir Mr ersps the story in joy
April 18th, 2023 23:19
Senryus 5
Bobby O said:
I love that last line as well as the pace and some surprising prose to develop the overall point. Nice job. I will make it a point to read more of your work.
April 18th, 2023 23:14
Bobby O said:
I love that last line as well as the pace and some surprising prose to develop the overall point. Nice job. I will make it a point to read more of your work.
April 18th, 2023 23:14
Blue Stone
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(\'connectivity, a state of connate chemistry\'
be it rock or feather, a polaroid pic
or that ticket stub from that last trip
we cling to things, that our fingers
can feel
to anchor our memories within
to safeguard our heart\'s, needs
to never let Time, ravage
that we most fervently, cherish...)
April 17th, 2023 03:08
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(\'connectivity, a state of connate chemistry\'
be it rock or feather, a polaroid pic
or that ticket stub from that last trip
we cling to things, that our fingers
can feel
to anchor our memories within
to safeguard our heart\'s, needs
to never let Time, ravage
that we most fervently, cherish...)
April 17th, 2023 03:08
Blue Stone
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotive words Phil and so true, it is those little odd things that we pick up in life that mean so much to us.
Andy
April 17th, 2023 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotive words Phil and so true, it is those little odd things that we pick up in life that mean so much to us.
Andy
April 17th, 2023 00:25
Blue Stone
Neville said:
You could not have given your poem a better title Phil .. it stands out from the page and sets the scene perfectly for the body of its entirety .. A more than merely moving series of treasured recollections and moments wrapped in a poem of their very own .. and most sadly of all such an enjoyable read .. Neville
April 17th, 2023 00:03
Neville said:
You could not have given your poem a better title Phil .. it stands out from the page and sets the scene perfectly for the body of its entirety .. A more than merely moving series of treasured recollections and moments wrapped in a poem of their very own .. and most sadly of all such an enjoyable read .. Neville
April 17th, 2023 00:03
Blue Stone
Doggerel Dave said:
You made the connection very clear - not unusual at all, Phil; a very moving portrait of loss, grief and remembrance I\'m sure many will relate to.
April 16th, 2023 20:52
Doggerel Dave said:
You made the connection very clear - not unusual at all, Phil; a very moving portrait of loss, grief and remembrance I\'m sure many will relate to.
April 16th, 2023 20:52
You
blueandgrey said:
This is beautiful, such amazing words you have for your wife.
April 16th, 2023 01:51
blueandgrey said:
This is beautiful, such amazing words you have for your wife.
April 16th, 2023 01:51
You
Oluwasolape Akode said:
This is totally a passionate and well-thought out poem. I enjoyed reading every bit of it.
April 15th, 2023 18:21
Oluwasolape Akode said:
This is totally a passionate and well-thought out poem. I enjoyed reading every bit of it.
April 15th, 2023 18:21
Q & A Upon Leaving
Neville said:
there is something very pleasing about two line stanza\'s sir .. I am quite taken by them .. furthermore, the overall storyline, has an inextricably linked almost subliminal relationship with its own very apt title .. bravo Phil ... Neville
April 15th, 2023 03:58
Neville said:
there is something very pleasing about two line stanza\'s sir .. I am quite taken by them .. furthermore, the overall storyline, has an inextricably linked almost subliminal relationship with its own very apt title .. bravo Phil ... Neville
April 15th, 2023 03:58
Q & A Upon Leaving
Fay Slimm. said:
This touches the core of many a break-up Phil and will be sure to waken lamentable memores for some - -.those final few lines are so moving. A heart-wrenching read of final appeal when love has to say a last Goodbye.
April 15th, 2023 01:11
Fay Slimm. said:
This touches the core of many a break-up Phil and will be sure to waken lamentable memores for some - -.those final few lines are so moving. A heart-wrenching read of final appeal when love has to say a last Goodbye.
April 15th, 2023 01:11
Q & A Upon Leaving
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words, I do hope she stays and is always with you.
Andy
April 15th, 2023 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words, I do hope she stays and is always with you.
Andy
April 15th, 2023 00:32
The Autumn Wind
Neville said:
methinks there is more to this than meets the eye .. a somewhat memorable post with a lingering aftertaste of longing ... tis super sir Fences 🌿🍀🍁🍂🍃🍂🍁🍀🌿
April 6th, 2023 01:51
Neville said:
methinks there is more to this than meets the eye .. a somewhat memorable post with a lingering aftertaste of longing ... tis super sir Fences 🌿🍀🍁🍂🍃🍂🍁🍀🌿
April 6th, 2023 01:51
The Autumn Wind
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Phil, she will certainly find a place and grow tall.
Andy
April 6th, 2023 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Phil, she will certainly find a place and grow tall.
Andy
April 6th, 2023 00:27
Lost Gypsy Wife
Neville said:
my mental muscle pointed me in the direction of a Canadian Jewish poet and I like the aftertaste those thoughts were kind enough to leave behind .. Enjoyed & very muchly Phil ...... Neville
March 26th, 2023 02:40
Neville said:
my mental muscle pointed me in the direction of a Canadian Jewish poet and I like the aftertaste those thoughts were kind enough to leave behind .. Enjoyed & very muchly Phil ...... Neville
March 26th, 2023 02:40
Infinity Equals Zero
Neville said:
hard hittingly ragged and real and with maybe a hint of an aftertaste I cannot as yet attempt, let alone, adequately describe, but these words of yours made me wince, smile and sigh simultaneously and several times over .. thank you for reminding me of why I fell in love with poetry Phil ... Neville
March 25th, 2023 03:03
Neville said:
hard hittingly ragged and real and with maybe a hint of an aftertaste I cannot as yet attempt, let alone, adequately describe, but these words of yours made me wince, smile and sigh simultaneously and several times over .. thank you for reminding me of why I fell in love with poetry Phil ... Neville
March 25th, 2023 03:03
Infinity Equals Zero
hzugman said:
Your poem should make anybody who reads it get it done today whatever it is. Every day is a gift and we shouldn\'t waste it.
March 24th, 2023 14:04
hzugman said:
Your poem should make anybody who reads it get it done today whatever it is. Every day is a gift and we shouldn\'t waste it.
March 24th, 2023 14:04
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