Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
Troglodyte
Teddy.15 said:
There’s water beneath this sweltering sand
cause I cried a river over you
a bleeding river like the Rio Grande
whose desertlike ending makes me blue
Would it be wrong to say I wish someone had written this for me?
I guess not after all I\'m only human. This is as yours always are a kudos written with a poets pen perfectly ❤️
A true inspiring read. Thank you Sir.
September 7th, 2023 12:52
Teddy.15 said:
There’s water beneath this sweltering sand
cause I cried a river over you
a bleeding river like the Rio Grande
whose desertlike ending makes me blue
Would it be wrong to say I wish someone had written this for me?
I guess not after all I\'m only human. This is as yours always are a kudos written with a poets pen perfectly ❤️
A true inspiring read. Thank you Sir.
September 7th, 2023 12:52
Troglodyte
Pop64 said:
Love lost is that love to lament upon, to write about in a beautifully rhyming, descriptive write such as this done. Well written! Clearly expressed!
September 7th, 2023 12:50
Pop64 said:
Love lost is that love to lament upon, to write about in a beautifully rhyming, descriptive write such as this done. Well written! Clearly expressed!
September 7th, 2023 12:50
Where was I?
Bella Shepard said:
This is powerful stuff, you strike a chord deep within. There are things that happened in my lifetime, where I can tell you precisely where I was, and know how it changed our lives forever. \"Lest we forget\" is so right my friend, this is such a thought-filled and intuitive write.
August 20th, 2023 12:26
Bella Shepard said:
This is powerful stuff, you strike a chord deep within. There are things that happened in my lifetime, where I can tell you precisely where I was, and know how it changed our lives forever. \"Lest we forget\" is so right my friend, this is such a thought-filled and intuitive write.
August 20th, 2023 12:26
Where was I?
Kinsey Peterson said:
remembering can become a weapon against repeating- beautiful poem
August 19th, 2023 16:16
Kinsey Peterson said:
remembering can become a weapon against repeating- beautiful poem
August 19th, 2023 16:16
Where was I?
Neville said:
this is nothing less than a literary/poetic masterpiece Phil ..
I hit the \'red heart shaped like icon\' so hard and so many times to try and award extra marks, but to no avail ..
You will just have to take my word for it sir .. Neville
August 18th, 2023 23:10
Neville said:
this is nothing less than a literary/poetic masterpiece Phil ..
I hit the \'red heart shaped like icon\' so hard and so many times to try and award extra marks, but to no avail ..
You will just have to take my word for it sir .. Neville
August 18th, 2023 23:10
Lessons of the Day
Neville said:
Now let that be a lesson to you all folks .. and well putt sir P :)
August 5th, 2023 12:34
Neville said:
Now let that be a lesson to you all folks .. and well putt sir P :)
August 5th, 2023 12:34
Lessons of the Day
Bobby O said:
A new handicap. Like that guy in the commercial shot in a Tattoo parlor “ stay in your lane bro”
And if you had a habit of kidnapping Mended Fences than I hope your slick talk convinces all you just took hollow poles and wire filling holes to loss prevent cuz if they find out you captured our poet you lack the sense heaven sent cuz he might be a broke dude with only two cents there ain’t many rich poets just cool dudes content.
August 4th, 2023 20:53
Bobby O said:
A new handicap. Like that guy in the commercial shot in a Tattoo parlor “ stay in your lane bro”
And if you had a habit of kidnapping Mended Fences than I hope your slick talk convinces all you just took hollow poles and wire filling holes to loss prevent cuz if they find out you captured our poet you lack the sense heaven sent cuz he might be a broke dude with only two cents there ain’t many rich poets just cool dudes content.
August 4th, 2023 20:53
Lessons of the Day
Teddy.15 said:
LoL oh yes, Phil, I\'ve been to the USA but I would never remotely pretend to know anything about America. You steam away dear poet. 💖
August 4th, 2023 18:22
Teddy.15 said:
LoL oh yes, Phil, I\'ve been to the USA but I would never remotely pretend to know anything about America. You steam away dear poet. 💖
August 4th, 2023 18:22
Lessons of the Day
Pop64 said:
All very true and the last had me laughing out loud!
August 4th, 2023 14:46
Pop64 said:
All very true and the last had me laughing out loud!
August 4th, 2023 14:46
A Musette
Neville said:
not so much a reflection sir but more of an illumination Phil .. say\'s I who am proud to say actually did see the late great Bonzo Bonham slap his cymbal\'s .. even more recently saw his sister & her band ..
August 3rd, 2023 16:49
Neville said:
not so much a reflection sir but more of an illumination Phil .. say\'s I who am proud to say actually did see the late great Bonzo Bonham slap his cymbal\'s .. even more recently saw his sister & her band ..
August 3rd, 2023 16:49
A Musette
Lynda May said:
This resonates with me. My muse passed away & it\'s a struggle to find the inspiration or the words now. But they\'re in there somewhere, just waiting for their moment!
August 3rd, 2023 03:30
Lynda May said:
This resonates with me. My muse passed away & it\'s a struggle to find the inspiration or the words now. But they\'re in there somewhere, just waiting for their moment!
August 3rd, 2023 03:30
A Musette
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well rhyming about a lost muse indeed. What a wonderful read, hey it\'s half price summer sales even a muse has to look good dear Phil, she\'ll be back with some massive inspiration as if you need it! 🤗 💖 Heartwarming and entertaining.
August 3rd, 2023 00:11
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well rhyming about a lost muse indeed. What a wonderful read, hey it\'s half price summer sales even a muse has to look good dear Phil, she\'ll be back with some massive inspiration as if you need it! 🤗 💖 Heartwarming and entertaining.
August 3rd, 2023 00:11
A Musette
Caring dove said:
And yeah , exactly you write about not being able to write
Well , I love your writing a very engaging and well written poem with many great lines
A lighthearted good poem .. many lovely words in this 🙂
I especially like these words
Words once would flow
like the rays of the Sun
now, the ideas I create
are more like a blind date
Please return to me.
My mind’s adrift and at sea
sinking fast into the great abyss
longing for your kiss
Set me free! Let me fly!
Give me wings and an open sky.
Touch my hand
with your invisible light.
Let me hear a jazz band
as I write
August 2nd, 2023 19:12
Caring dove said:
And yeah , exactly you write about not being able to write
Well , I love your writing a very engaging and well written poem with many great lines
A lighthearted good poem .. many lovely words in this 🙂
I especially like these words
Words once would flow
like the rays of the Sun
now, the ideas I create
are more like a blind date
Please return to me.
My mind’s adrift and at sea
sinking fast into the great abyss
longing for your kiss
Set me free! Let me fly!
Give me wings and an open sky.
Touch my hand
with your invisible light.
Let me hear a jazz band
as I write
August 2nd, 2023 19:12
A Moonlight Sonata
Neville said:
I shall wait with baited breath .. since this one when hooked, took mine clean away ........... Neville
August 2nd, 2023 03:07
Neville said:
I shall wait with baited breath .. since this one when hooked, took mine clean away ........... Neville
August 2nd, 2023 03:07
Senryus 11
Teddy.15 said:
One of my favourite forms of poetry and you get a 10! Fabulous everyone I like the first one it made me giggle with a frown lol 💖 genius
August 1st, 2023 15:22
Teddy.15 said:
One of my favourite forms of poetry and you get a 10! Fabulous everyone I like the first one it made me giggle with a frown lol 💖 genius
August 1st, 2023 15:22
Fingers
Caring dove said:
Beautiful poem such lovely gentle words you have expressed this so nicely ))
July 20th, 2023 15:30
Caring dove said:
Beautiful poem such lovely gentle words you have expressed this so nicely ))
July 20th, 2023 15:30
Senryus 12
Neville said:
What a treasure trove we have here darn near enough little gems to make up an entire necklace .. Neville
July 20th, 2023 00:58
Neville said:
What a treasure trove we have here darn near enough little gems to make up an entire necklace .. Neville
July 20th, 2023 00:58
A Myth Untrue
Caring dove said:
This is a lovely poem of a birds struggle / adventure to find his love
I liked reading this
Love this line
His Nightingale voice sounded like a bell tinkling.
A great writing .. nice mention of blueberries in this
Sounds like the bird felt quite alone.. and unwanted ( by seals /sheep .. for a while
Thanks for sharing .. 🙂
July 18th, 2023 15:32
Caring dove said:
This is a lovely poem of a birds struggle / adventure to find his love
I liked reading this
Love this line
His Nightingale voice sounded like a bell tinkling.
A great writing .. nice mention of blueberries in this
Sounds like the bird felt quite alone.. and unwanted ( by seals /sheep .. for a while
Thanks for sharing .. 🙂
July 18th, 2023 15:32
A Myth Untrue
Neville said:
and just to make absolutely sure I was write, I checked my self in again .. and yep .. I absolutely was and still am ............. Neville
July 18th, 2023 13:23
Neville said:
and just to make absolutely sure I was write, I checked my self in again .. and yep .. I absolutely was and still am ............. Neville
July 18th, 2023 13:23
A Myth Untrue
Neville said:
effin brilliant .. if I had faves, this would most surely rank high among em ... bloomin well penned my friend .. Neville
July 18th, 2023 02:29
Neville said:
effin brilliant .. if I had faves, this would most surely rank high among em ... bloomin well penned my friend .. Neville
July 18th, 2023 02:29
Clouds of Love
Caring dove said:
This is so nicely expressed ! Some very lovely words in this
July 17th, 2023 15:24
Caring dove said:
This is so nicely expressed ! Some very lovely words in this
July 17th, 2023 15:24
A Myth Untrue
Teddy.15 said:
His call appeared to be a love song
that he sang too late.
Yet, in the valley of his heartstrings
she became his “always” mate
Love this bit if I\'m honest I loved every single line ❣️
July 17th, 2023 14:06
Teddy.15 said:
His call appeared to be a love song
that he sang too late.
Yet, in the valley of his heartstrings
she became his “always” mate
Love this bit if I\'m honest I loved every single line ❣️
July 17th, 2023 14:06
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