Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
A Myth Untrue
Teddy.15 said:
His call appeared to be a love song
that he sang too late.
Yet, in the valley of his heartstrings
she became his “always” mate
Love this bit if I\'m honest I loved every single line ❣️
July 17th, 2023 14:06
Teddy.15 said:
His call appeared to be a love song
that he sang too late.
Yet, in the valley of his heartstrings
she became his “always” mate
Love this bit if I\'m honest I loved every single line ❣️
July 17th, 2023 14:06
Love is the Whole
Caring dove said:
Some very beautiful words ik your poem 🙂
Especially like these lines
It reaches from inside of us to the fringes of Space.
It is a fire, a hunger, a sharing. It is moonlit.
.. and the ending lines
A lovely read )
July 17th, 2023 12:47
Caring dove said:
Some very beautiful words ik your poem 🙂
Especially like these lines
It reaches from inside of us to the fringes of Space.
It is a fire, a hunger, a sharing. It is moonlit.
.. and the ending lines
A lovely read )
July 17th, 2023 12:47
A Poet\'s Dilemma
Neville said:
this is what I call a poets poem .. it is indeed, sadly excellent .. period .. N
July 9th, 2023 01:37
Neville said:
this is what I call a poets poem .. it is indeed, sadly excellent .. period .. N
July 9th, 2023 01:37
Love is the Whole
L. B. Mek said:
(that love is what transmutes
those holes in our heart\'s
into an impregnable, whole
by granting us, the right smile
by our side..)
in love
we entrust, for better or worse
till all hope, is drained from us..
simply Brilliant, dear Poet
thank you!
July 7th, 2023 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
(that love is what transmutes
those holes in our heart\'s
into an impregnable, whole
by granting us, the right smile
by our side..)
in love
we entrust, for better or worse
till all hope, is drained from us..
simply Brilliant, dear Poet
thank you!
July 7th, 2023 04:51
Love is the Whole
Teddy.15 said:
Well Phil, I adore your poetry and yes you are so true of love, it\'s everything and nothing it saves us and pulls us in the gutter a rollercoaster of pure emotion. A fabulous read and kudos on those last lines ❤️
July 7th, 2023 01:43
Teddy.15 said:
Well Phil, I adore your poetry and yes you are so true of love, it\'s everything and nothing it saves us and pulls us in the gutter a rollercoaster of pure emotion. A fabulous read and kudos on those last lines ❤️
July 7th, 2023 01:43
Love is the Whole
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is the strongest force in this world some just do not realise it though Phil.
Andy
July 7th, 2023 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is the strongest force in this world some just do not realise it though Phil.
Andy
July 7th, 2023 00:59
Love is the Whole
Neville said:
this is sweet if indeed not charming
be careful tho, too much sugar can be harming ..
Nevertheless Phil, you make several fine and valid points herein .. Neville
July 6th, 2023 22:50
Neville said:
this is sweet if indeed not charming
be careful tho, too much sugar can be harming ..
Nevertheless Phil, you make several fine and valid points herein .. Neville
July 6th, 2023 22:50
Philter
Teddy.15 said:
An absolute pleasure to read, such marvellous imagery. Loved the ending dear Phil, devil lady or Angel? Either way Brilliant. ❤️
July 5th, 2023 23:59
Teddy.15 said:
An absolute pleasure to read, such marvellous imagery. Loved the ending dear Phil, devil lady or Angel? Either way Brilliant. ❤️
July 5th, 2023 23:59
Philter
Neville said:
I\'m with the old dog .. once started it was so compelling I just had to down it in one .. and felt it burning all the way down .. captivatingly clever with a delicious aftertaste of Dusk till Dawn about it .. and gets full marks from yours truly .. Neville
July 5th, 2023 23:17
Neville said:
I\'m with the old dog .. once started it was so compelling I just had to down it in one .. and felt it burning all the way down .. captivatingly clever with a delicious aftertaste of Dusk till Dawn about it .. and gets full marks from yours truly .. Neville
July 5th, 2023 23:17
Philter
Doggerel Dave said:
I drank, and finished it. Definitely entertained. Many thanks Phil.
July 5th, 2023 17:49
Doggerel Dave said:
I drank, and finished it. Definitely entertained. Many thanks Phil.
July 5th, 2023 17:49
A Poet\'s Dilemma
Caring dove said:
Sad but so nicely expressed 🙂
I really like the words in this and it flows nicely
Lovely poem
July 4th, 2023 15:40
Caring dove said:
Sad but so nicely expressed 🙂
I really like the words in this and it flows nicely
Lovely poem
July 4th, 2023 15:40
A Poet\'s Dilemma
Teddy.15 said:
A superb poem, tells a very sad story of love in such a beautiful way. ❤️ each line flawless.
July 4th, 2023 00:16
Teddy.15 said:
A superb poem, tells a very sad story of love in such a beautiful way. ❤️ each line flawless.
July 4th, 2023 00:16
Senryus 11
Bella Shepard said:
I guess I\'m working backwards, but I love this as much as Senryus 12, especially the conclusion.
May 30th, 2023 15:31
Bella Shepard said:
I guess I\'m working backwards, but I love this as much as Senryus 12, especially the conclusion.
May 30th, 2023 15:31
Senryus 12
Bella Shepard said:
Each part of this piece speaks simply and powerfully of truth and wisdom. I especially love The New Frontier, for it really is in each of us. Thank you for sharing this gem.
May 30th, 2023 15:26
Bella Shepard said:
Each part of this piece speaks simply and powerfully of truth and wisdom. I especially love The New Frontier, for it really is in each of us. Thank you for sharing this gem.
May 30th, 2023 15:26
Senryus 11
Neville said:
Without a single exception, these little fellows are pure genius .. bloomin brill Phil .. Neville
May 16th, 2023 11:38
Neville said:
Without a single exception, these little fellows are pure genius .. bloomin brill Phil .. Neville
May 16th, 2023 11:38
Scapes
Neville said:
S Scape, the wanting to get outa here quick when one realises that they have stumbled on something far better than they could ever have writ ...................... Neville
May 14th, 2023 04:20
Neville said:
S Scape, the wanting to get outa here quick when one realises that they have stumbled on something far better than they could ever have writ ...................... Neville
May 14th, 2023 04:20
Hannah the Hellion
Parisab said:
Captivating narrative poetry which normally doesn’t sustain my attention. It was powerfully developed with multi dimensional subjects and participants. The ending did not disappoint. Clever women of the sea have existed throughout history and bought and sold sailor “secrets” in the form of psychic knowledge which they also possessed. Thank you.
May 12th, 2023 14:05
Parisab said:
Captivating narrative poetry which normally doesn’t sustain my attention. It was powerfully developed with multi dimensional subjects and participants. The ending did not disappoint. Clever women of the sea have existed throughout history and bought and sold sailor “secrets” in the form of psychic knowledge which they also possessed. Thank you.
May 12th, 2023 14:05
Hannah the Hellion
L. B. Mek said:
\'Nantucket\'
sent me straight to \'call me Ishmael\'
and your wonderful short story
was as gripping, as that books
first few chapters
Brilliant!
thank you for choosing to share
your wonderful talent, dear Poet
(there\'s a trace of hellion
in all of us, i think
our actions n words, as trappings
for that we aspire to realise
and chains, stifling our way
of surviving, life)
May 12th, 2023 02:01
L. B. Mek said:
\'Nantucket\'
sent me straight to \'call me Ishmael\'
and your wonderful short story
was as gripping, as that books
first few chapters
Brilliant!
thank you for choosing to share
your wonderful talent, dear Poet
(there\'s a trace of hellion
in all of us, i think
our actions n words, as trappings
for that we aspire to realise
and chains, stifling our way
of surviving, life)
May 12th, 2023 02:01
Senryus 5
Neville said:
How I managed to miss these x5 little gems until now is one helluva mystery .. or perhaps not, maybe I was saving the best till last .. whatever the case .. it no longer matters much since each packs one hell of a punch and is quite literarily a crown in its own write ..
May 9th, 2023 00:01
Neville said:
How I managed to miss these x5 little gems until now is one helluva mystery .. or perhaps not, maybe I was saving the best till last .. whatever the case .. it no longer matters much since each packs one hell of a punch and is quite literarily a crown in its own write ..
May 9th, 2023 00:01
Conspiracy Theory
Neville said:
indeed a most cleverly crafted and otherwise strategically contrived poem .. a tragic tale told terribly well and pretty on the eye too sir .. what more could one possibly want .. another winner based on so many losses .. a crying shame, for all those directly involved and of course for those who love happy endings .. Neville
May 8th, 2023 23:49
Neville said:
indeed a most cleverly crafted and otherwise strategically contrived poem .. a tragic tale told terribly well and pretty on the eye too sir .. what more could one possibly want .. another winner based on so many losses .. a crying shame, for all those directly involved and of course for those who love happy endings .. Neville
May 8th, 2023 23:49
Hannah the Hellion
Neville said:
Just one brief question before awarding scores ..
Would it be even possible to contemplate passing by here without first leaving the full marks this exceptionally fine story poem most certainly deserves .. The simplest of answers is surely no, it would be impossible .. No kidding Phil, you penned a captivating and most credible tale .. and as yet, I still remain unsure whether Hannah the Hellion is based on some infamous legendary figure, or stems entirely from your own magnificent imagination .. You are the master of this particular genre regardless sir ........... Neville
May 8th, 2023 23:36
Neville said:
Just one brief question before awarding scores ..
Would it be even possible to contemplate passing by here without first leaving the full marks this exceptionally fine story poem most certainly deserves .. The simplest of answers is surely no, it would be impossible .. No kidding Phil, you penned a captivating and most credible tale .. and as yet, I still remain unsure whether Hannah the Hellion is based on some infamous legendary figure, or stems entirely from your own magnificent imagination .. You are the master of this particular genre regardless sir ........... Neville
May 8th, 2023 23:36
Conspiracy Theory
Bobby O said:
On an altruistic path a pure agenda is like a new carefully tended crop That farmer , without certain knowledge of the future, proceeds w tireless care , and he learns , and he honors his craft and that land is better and matured and should his love have to start anew , or not(?) his readiness had grown and holds nary a tiny regret. This piece could be about that farmer for
His grand effort is satisfying nourishment
May 7th, 2023 04:42
Bobby O said:
On an altruistic path a pure agenda is like a new carefully tended crop That farmer , without certain knowledge of the future, proceeds w tireless care , and he learns , and he honors his craft and that land is better and matured and should his love have to start anew , or not(?) his readiness had grown and holds nary a tiny regret. This piece could be about that farmer for
His grand effort is satisfying nourishment
May 7th, 2023 04:42
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