Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
20 Hours to Memphis
Bobby O said:
What a surprise ending. He left this world happy and that fir Mr ersps the story in joy
April 18th, 2023 23:19
Bobby O said:
What a surprise ending. He left this world happy and that fir Mr ersps the story in joy
April 18th, 2023 23:19
Senryus 5
Bobby O said:
I love that last line as well as the pace and some surprising prose to develop the overall point. Nice job. I will make it a point to read more of your work.
April 18th, 2023 23:14
Bobby O said:
I love that last line as well as the pace and some surprising prose to develop the overall point. Nice job. I will make it a point to read more of your work.
April 18th, 2023 23:14
Blue Stone
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(\'connectivity, a state of connate chemistry\'
be it rock or feather, a polaroid pic
or that ticket stub from that last trip
we cling to things, that our fingers
can feel
to anchor our memories within
to safeguard our heart\'s, needs
to never let Time, ravage
that we most fervently, cherish...)
April 17th, 2023 03:08
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(\'connectivity, a state of connate chemistry\'
be it rock or feather, a polaroid pic
or that ticket stub from that last trip
we cling to things, that our fingers
can feel
to anchor our memories within
to safeguard our heart\'s, needs
to never let Time, ravage
that we most fervently, cherish...)
April 17th, 2023 03:08
Blue Stone
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotive words Phil and so true, it is those little odd things that we pick up in life that mean so much to us.
Andy
April 17th, 2023 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Such emotive words Phil and so true, it is those little odd things that we pick up in life that mean so much to us.
Andy
April 17th, 2023 00:25
Blue Stone
Neville said:
You could not have given your poem a better title Phil .. it stands out from the page and sets the scene perfectly for the body of its entirety .. A more than merely moving series of treasured recollections and moments wrapped in a poem of their very own .. and most sadly of all such an enjoyable read .. Neville
April 17th, 2023 00:03
Neville said:
You could not have given your poem a better title Phil .. it stands out from the page and sets the scene perfectly for the body of its entirety .. A more than merely moving series of treasured recollections and moments wrapped in a poem of their very own .. and most sadly of all such an enjoyable read .. Neville
April 17th, 2023 00:03
Blue Stone
Doggerel Dave said:
You made the connection very clear - not unusual at all, Phil; a very moving portrait of loss, grief and remembrance I\'m sure many will relate to.
April 16th, 2023 20:52
Doggerel Dave said:
You made the connection very clear - not unusual at all, Phil; a very moving portrait of loss, grief and remembrance I\'m sure many will relate to.
April 16th, 2023 20:52
You
blueandgrey said:
This is beautiful, such amazing words you have for your wife.
April 16th, 2023 01:51
blueandgrey said:
This is beautiful, such amazing words you have for your wife.
April 16th, 2023 01:51
You
Oluwasolape Akode said:
This is totally a passionate and well-thought out poem. I enjoyed reading every bit of it.
April 15th, 2023 18:21
Oluwasolape Akode said:
This is totally a passionate and well-thought out poem. I enjoyed reading every bit of it.
April 15th, 2023 18:21
Q & A Upon Leaving
Neville said:
there is something very pleasing about two line stanza\'s sir .. I am quite taken by them .. furthermore, the overall storyline, has an inextricably linked almost subliminal relationship with its own very apt title .. bravo Phil ... Neville
April 15th, 2023 03:58
Neville said:
there is something very pleasing about two line stanza\'s sir .. I am quite taken by them .. furthermore, the overall storyline, has an inextricably linked almost subliminal relationship with its own very apt title .. bravo Phil ... Neville
April 15th, 2023 03:58
Q & A Upon Leaving
Fay Slimm. said:
This touches the core of many a break-up Phil and will be sure to waken lamentable memores for some - -.those final few lines are so moving. A heart-wrenching read of final appeal when love has to say a last Goodbye.
April 15th, 2023 01:11
Fay Slimm. said:
This touches the core of many a break-up Phil and will be sure to waken lamentable memores for some - -.those final few lines are so moving. A heart-wrenching read of final appeal when love has to say a last Goodbye.
April 15th, 2023 01:11
Q & A Upon Leaving
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words, I do hope she stays and is always with you.
Andy
April 15th, 2023 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words, I do hope she stays and is always with you.
Andy
April 15th, 2023 00:32
The Autumn Wind
Neville said:
methinks there is more to this than meets the eye .. a somewhat memorable post with a lingering aftertaste of longing ... tis super sir Fences 🌿🍀🍁🍂🍃🍂🍁🍀🌿
April 6th, 2023 01:51
Neville said:
methinks there is more to this than meets the eye .. a somewhat memorable post with a lingering aftertaste of longing ... tis super sir Fences 🌿🍀🍁🍂🍃🍂🍁🍀🌿
April 6th, 2023 01:51
The Autumn Wind
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Phil, she will certainly find a place and grow tall.
Andy
April 6th, 2023 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Phil, she will certainly find a place and grow tall.
Andy
April 6th, 2023 00:27
Lost Gypsy Wife
Neville said:
my mental muscle pointed me in the direction of a Canadian Jewish poet and I like the aftertaste those thoughts were kind enough to leave behind .. Enjoyed & very muchly Phil ...... Neville
March 26th, 2023 02:40
Neville said:
my mental muscle pointed me in the direction of a Canadian Jewish poet and I like the aftertaste those thoughts were kind enough to leave behind .. Enjoyed & very muchly Phil ...... Neville
March 26th, 2023 02:40
Infinity Equals Zero
Neville said:
hard hittingly ragged and real and with maybe a hint of an aftertaste I cannot as yet attempt, let alone, adequately describe, but these words of yours made me wince, smile and sigh simultaneously and several times over .. thank you for reminding me of why I fell in love with poetry Phil ... Neville
March 25th, 2023 03:03
Neville said:
hard hittingly ragged and real and with maybe a hint of an aftertaste I cannot as yet attempt, let alone, adequately describe, but these words of yours made me wince, smile and sigh simultaneously and several times over .. thank you for reminding me of why I fell in love with poetry Phil ... Neville
March 25th, 2023 03:03
Infinity Equals Zero
hzugman said:
Your poem should make anybody who reads it get it done today whatever it is. Every day is a gift and we shouldn\'t waste it.
March 24th, 2023 14:04
hzugman said:
Your poem should make anybody who reads it get it done today whatever it is. Every day is a gift and we shouldn\'t waste it.
March 24th, 2023 14:04
Infinity Equals Zero
Doggerel Dave said:
I have absolutely no wish to be tubed up - I\'d like to clock off just a wee bit earlier...
If I do get a fractional glimpse of ultimate reality on the way through that would be great...
The mystery of it all is well embodied in your piece, Phil - thanks.
March 23rd, 2023 16:03
Doggerel Dave said:
I have absolutely no wish to be tubed up - I\'d like to clock off just a wee bit earlier...
If I do get a fractional glimpse of ultimate reality on the way through that would be great...
The mystery of it all is well embodied in your piece, Phil - thanks.
March 23rd, 2023 16:03
Thoughts 10
Neville said:
you have just (well not only just because I know I am late in getting here) presented us with a little masterpiece of poetry Phil .. tis a splendid example of our fine art sir .. Neville
March 1st, 2023 02:33
Neville said:
you have just (well not only just because I know I am late in getting here) presented us with a little masterpiece of poetry Phil .. tis a splendid example of our fine art sir .. Neville
March 1st, 2023 02:33
Thoughts 10
Goldfinch60 said:
I do wish that harmony would prevail in our world as it does in music.
Andy
February 6th, 2023 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
I do wish that harmony would prevail in our world as it does in music.
Andy
February 6th, 2023 02:21
Lost Gypsy Wife
L. B. Mek said:
(devoid of context, these words are hard to penetrate
yet, at an intuitive level I think I relate
experiencing a sudden loss, is debilitating
yet, to then imagine
the person you\'ve lost is a famous public figure
with a legacy, prevalent
in so much of society
her life\'s essence
a haunting presence
wherever, you turn
must make the ordeal, that much
more heart-breaking to survive..)
really well written, dear Poet
thanks for sharing
(forgive me if my take on it
is way off the mark, I meant
no disrespect)
February 3rd, 2023 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
(devoid of context, these words are hard to penetrate
yet, at an intuitive level I think I relate
experiencing a sudden loss, is debilitating
yet, to then imagine
the person you\'ve lost is a famous public figure
with a legacy, prevalent
in so much of society
her life\'s essence
a haunting presence
wherever, you turn
must make the ordeal, that much
more heart-breaking to survive..)
really well written, dear Poet
thanks for sharing
(forgive me if my take on it
is way off the mark, I meant
no disrespect)
February 3rd, 2023 05:09
20 Hours to Memphis
Neville said:
You are without any doubt sir the master of the particular genre .. enjoyed immensely .. even the sad bit at the very end my friend .. Neville
January 12th, 2023 04:55
Neville said:
You are without any doubt sir the master of the particular genre .. enjoyed immensely .. even the sad bit at the very end my friend .. Neville
January 12th, 2023 04:55
20 Hours to Memphis
Doggerel Dave said:
A story, Phil with the absolute ring of truth. Became totally involved. the reality of the of the story\'s trajectory took me in ...the end so painful.
January 11th, 2023 03:35
Doggerel Dave said:
A story, Phil with the absolute ring of truth. Became totally involved. the reality of the of the story\'s trajectory took me in ...the end so painful.
January 11th, 2023 03:35
20 Hours to Memphis
Goldfinch60 said:
What a very emotional write Phil, this really pulled at me.
Andy
January 11th, 2023 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
What a very emotional write Phil, this really pulled at me.
Andy
January 11th, 2023 01:44
Separate Lives
Neville said:
Sadly this is simply beautiful .. & conversely, it is simultaneously beautiful and sad ......... it also needs to be viewed & appreciated much more widely than it has been to date .. I sincerely hope my own interest will kickstart further visits and breathe some life back into what is essentially a gem of a poem ..
and a bloomin Happy New Year to you & yours sir Phil
Neville
January 3rd, 2023 11:13
Neville said:
Sadly this is simply beautiful .. & conversely, it is simultaneously beautiful and sad ......... it also needs to be viewed & appreciated much more widely than it has been to date .. I sincerely hope my own interest will kickstart further visits and breathe some life back into what is essentially a gem of a poem ..
and a bloomin Happy New Year to you & yours sir Phil
Neville
January 3rd, 2023 11:13
Your Leaving
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes Phil - - loneliness has to be given its time of work-outs - -- then perhaps it can seek company again when the heart has partially healed. Much food for thought in your posting today.
December 4th, 2022 07:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes Phil - - loneliness has to be given its time of work-outs - -- then perhaps it can seek company again when the heart has partially healed. Much food for thought in your posting today.
December 4th, 2022 07:21
Your Leaving
Goldfinch60 said:
That can be very true Phil but the heart can be mended in time.
Andy
December 4th, 2022 03:12
Goldfinch60 said:
That can be very true Phil but the heart can be mended in time.
Andy
December 4th, 2022 03:12
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