Comments received on poems by MendedFences27



Go Figure, Eight
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 17th, 2024 12:57

Go Figure, Eight
sorenbarrett said:

Taoist in nature this looks at both sides. Nicely stated.

August 17th, 2024 12:31

Light
Teddy.15 said:

I felt the light dear Phil, I felt the light. Beautiful. ๐ŸŒน

August 17th, 2024 03:53

Light
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Phil, the sun shines on us all.

Andy

August 17th, 2024 01:45

Light
Doggerel Dave said:

Should be the world\'s Mission Statement.
Well put, Phil.

August 16th, 2024 22:34

Light
Caring dove said:

Almost makes me think of angels . Nice writing ))

August 16th, 2024 12:32

Light
Tony36 said:

Love it

August 16th, 2024 09:15

Light
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed we are the sun shines on all. Impartiality in the highest sense. A most lovely write.

August 16th, 2024 09:00

The Flames of Love
Goldfinch60 said:

But the memories will never leave us Phil.

Andy

August 16th, 2024 01:22

The Flames of Love
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

August 15th, 2024 16:58

The Flames of Love
Neville said:

they say there\'s no smoke without fire but I have grown to dispute that hot potato and now wear nothing but asbestos undergarments, just to be on the safe side .. ๐Ÿฉฒ๐Ÿ”ฅ :)

August 15th, 2024 14:17

The Flames of Love
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful and so true, some last a lifetime, others end up in the cemetery of lost love. ๐ŸŒน

August 15th, 2024 10:15

The Flames of Love
sorenbarrett said:

Passions fires often burn hot and fast burning out in a hurry. Nicely written

August 15th, 2024 10:14

Walking
Bella Shepard said:

Incredible form, love the way you bridge from stanza to stanza to tell this tale of love walking, quite moving.

August 15th, 2024 07:27

Walking
Goldfinch60 said:

May she have walked back to you forever Phil.

Andy

August 15th, 2024 01:43

Moving On
Dan Williams said:

This a summation of my second wife departing. Well said.

August 15th, 2024 00:16

Walking
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 14th, 2024 16:49

Walking
MendedFences27 said:



August 14th, 2024 16:45

Walking
Cassie58 said:

Love and relationships can and do keep us awake at night, especially when the path isnโ€™t a smooth one. Interesting format MendedFences. I enjoyed my visit.

August 14th, 2024 15:15

Walking
Thomas W Case said:

Well crafted. Powerful work.

August 14th, 2024 14:24

Walking
Teddy.15 said:

Dear Phil your poem is walking and talking, about love, love is walking through this poem and the journey hasn\'t yet ended. A beautiful form and piece of poetry. ๐ŸŒน

August 14th, 2024 12:55

Walking
Neville said:


You really are on form Phil .. & as far as I\'m concerned, that\'s a good form ular you got there .. sorry couldn\'t resist .. but its true I tell ya ..

August 14th, 2024 11:29

Walking
sorenbarrett said:

A very different style and format to this poem. It fits well and reads nicely. Very nice

August 14th, 2024 11:29

Moving On
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Phil.

Andy

August 14th, 2024 01:39

Moving On
Neville said:



If its gonna go wrong, it\'s gonna go wrong big time .. there\'s no gradual shift or halfway point .. well penned Phil .. Neville

August 13th, 2024 12:54

Moving On
Cassie58 said:

A really poignant poem about love gone wrong. Nice rhyme and a good flow to the lines. Happy Tuesday MendedFences.

August 13th, 2024 12:16

Moving On
Teddy.15 said:

Fab rhyme, awe, so maybe just maybe in the end love came to an end, but your poetry is truly wonderful. ๐ŸŒน

August 13th, 2024 10:29

Moving On
sorenbarrett said:

A sad write. Laments about how things would be if we were different are not very helpful. A nice write in rhyme.

August 13th, 2024 10:11

Lo and Behold!
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive words Phil.

Andy

August 13th, 2024 02:03

Lo and Behold!
Dan Williams said:

Lord, how this resonates with me. Writing about lost love has been , for me at least, cathartic. Hope the same for you.

August 13th, 2024 00:37

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