Comments received on poems by MendedFences27



Ten Small Poems 5
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

September 3rd, 2024 20:28

Ten Small Poems 5
Doggerel Dave said:

You get away with murder, here sometimes by quickly moving on...πŸ˜‚
At sea - lost would be my favourite among this batch, Phil.

September 3rd, 2024 17:14

Ten Small Poems 5
Tony36 said:

Awesome writing

September 3rd, 2024 15:06

Ten Small Poems 5
orchidee said:

Good write MF.

September 3rd, 2024 14:00

Ten Small Poems 4
Goldfinch60 said:

More good ones Phil and that last one is so true.

Andy

September 3rd, 2024 01:26

Ten small poems 3
Dan Williams said:

Wisdom reduced to phrases. Nice.

September 3rd, 2024 00:11

Ten Small Poems 4
Teddy.15 said:

If we spend too much time in our own company the arguements becomes boring ...

Oh how you inspire me, I had a good chuckle at some of these bravo bravo. 🌹

September 2nd, 2024 15:25

Ten Small Poems 4
Bella Shepard said:

My dear friend, I find you to be the modern day Confucius, in the wisdom and the cleverness of your words. I just love your 10 small poems, they are by no means \"small\".

September 2nd, 2024 13:15

Ten small poems 3
Goldfinch60 said:

Some wonderful sayings Phil.

Andy

September 2nd, 2024 01:41

The Wandering Poet
Dan Williams said:

Sorry but I have to disagree. The price of living is death. Nice write all the same.

September 2nd, 2024 00:31

Ten small poems 3
orchidee said:

I don\'t gret, erm regret, to say good write M.

September 1st, 2024 11:32

Ten small poems 3
Teddy.15 said:

Oh wow I cannot choose one I love more all are fab but I love the tongue in cheek of grets that\'s hilarious,and about bei g too old to remember.

If you look back long enough
You may be back at the beginning. I just thought of this, you must have inspired it. 🌹 I have enjoyed immensely your 10 small poem selections πŸ’™

September 1st, 2024 11:09

The Wandering Poet
Teddy.15 said:

This is wonderful and how true your last words are dear Phil reminds me of my first love, all I gave with nothing in return πŸ’™ I did get to be a very wise woman though 🌹

September 1st, 2024 03:00

The Wandering Poet
orchidee said:

Good write M.

September 1st, 2024 01:18

The Wandering Poet
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words and that last line is so very true Phil.

Andy

September 1st, 2024 01:11

The Wandering Poet
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 31st, 2024 19:14

Ten Small Poems 2
Doggerel Dave said:

Bite sized prompts to much (I was going to write \'deep\', but of that I\'m unsure) thought, each one. Thanks for that, Phil.

August 30th, 2024 19:37

Ten Small Poems 2
Bella Shepard said:

This flow of consciouoness is so flawless, and each little poem a work of wisdom. Beautiful dear poet!

August 30th, 2024 09:54

Ten Small Poems 2
Tony36 said:

Amazing

August 30th, 2024 09:36

Ten Small Poems 2
Teddy.15 said:

My own now if you allow ......

Love can be everything
It can also be nothing. πŸ’™

August 30th, 2024 09:17

Ten Small Poems 2
Teddy.15 said:

Wonderful wonderful your last one is so full of imagery and metaphor, love them all Phil, I couldn\'t agree more 🌹

August 30th, 2024 09:16

Mankind\'s Evolution
rrodriguez said:

Yeah, them boys sure wanted a change, but \"liquid salad bar\"? I don\'t know, but it doesn\'t sound appetizing. This was entertaining... Great job!

August 29th, 2024 19:33

Mankind\'s Evolution
Tony36 said:

Love it

August 29th, 2024 18:43

Mankind\'s Evolution
Doggerel Dave said:

Did feel ever so slightly lost, unsure where we were going next, Phil. Expectations upended. An enjoyable erratic ride.

August 29th, 2024 16:47

Mankind\'s Evolution
Teddy.15 said:

Liquid salad bar is a bit more convincing than the salad bar lol I\'d say that liquid bar would be mighty fine. What a lovely piece, kept me wondering all the way through, by the way Phil, it\'s not all us women do is shop you know lol 🌹

August 29th, 2024 12:32

Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude )
Goldfinch60 said:

Very clever write Phil, I can remember most of those songs.

Andy

August 29th, 2024 01:08

Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude )
Doggerel Dave said:

I was identifying right along Phil, and fully felt a sinking recrimination at the end, sadness that the sorry, after the insight didn\'t turn the boat around.

August 28th, 2024 20:17

Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude )
rrodriguez said:

Now this is nice. What a way to go... I enjoyed it, buddy.

August 28th, 2024 19:55

Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude )
ChrisLynπŸ•Š said:

Loved the way it was written

August 28th, 2024 12:37

Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude )
JD Boye said:

I love the structure you chose for this work. A very evocative piece.

August 28th, 2024 10:46

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