Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
Ten Small Poems 5
Doggerel Dave said:
You get away with murder, here sometimes by quickly moving on...π
At sea - lost would be my favourite among this batch, Phil.
September 3rd, 2024 17:14
Doggerel Dave said:
You get away with murder, here sometimes by quickly moving on...π
At sea - lost would be my favourite among this batch, Phil.
September 3rd, 2024 17:14
Ten Small Poems 4
Goldfinch60 said:
More good ones Phil and that last one is so true.
Andy
September 3rd, 2024 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
More good ones Phil and that last one is so true.
Andy
September 3rd, 2024 01:26
Ten Small Poems 4
Teddy.15 said:
If we spend too much time in our own company the arguements becomes boring ...
Oh how you inspire me, I had a good chuckle at some of these bravo bravo. πΉ
September 2nd, 2024 15:25
Teddy.15 said:
If we spend too much time in our own company the arguements becomes boring ...
Oh how you inspire me, I had a good chuckle at some of these bravo bravo. πΉ
September 2nd, 2024 15:25
Ten Small Poems 4
Bella Shepard said:
My dear friend, I find you to be the modern day Confucius, in the wisdom and the cleverness of your words. I just love your 10 small poems, they are by no means \"small\".
September 2nd, 2024 13:15
Bella Shepard said:
My dear friend, I find you to be the modern day Confucius, in the wisdom and the cleverness of your words. I just love your 10 small poems, they are by no means \"small\".
September 2nd, 2024 13:15
The Wandering Poet
Dan Williams said:
Sorry but I have to disagree. The price of living is death. Nice write all the same.
September 2nd, 2024 00:31
Dan Williams said:
Sorry but I have to disagree. The price of living is death. Nice write all the same.
September 2nd, 2024 00:31
Ten small poems 3
orchidee said:
I don\'t gret, erm regret, to say good write M.
September 1st, 2024 11:32
orchidee said:
I don\'t gret, erm regret, to say good write M.
September 1st, 2024 11:32
Ten small poems 3
Teddy.15 said:
Oh wow I cannot choose one I love more all are fab but I love the tongue in cheek of grets that\'s hilarious,and about bei g too old to remember.
If you look back long enough
You may be back at the beginning. I just thought of this, you must have inspired it. πΉ I have enjoyed immensely your 10 small poem selections π
September 1st, 2024 11:09
Teddy.15 said:
Oh wow I cannot choose one I love more all are fab but I love the tongue in cheek of grets that\'s hilarious,and about bei g too old to remember.
If you look back long enough
You may be back at the beginning. I just thought of this, you must have inspired it. πΉ I have enjoyed immensely your 10 small poem selections π
September 1st, 2024 11:09
The Wandering Poet
Teddy.15 said:
This is wonderful and how true your last words are dear Phil reminds me of my first love, all I gave with nothing in return π I did get to be a very wise woman though πΉ
September 1st, 2024 03:00
Teddy.15 said:
This is wonderful and how true your last words are dear Phil reminds me of my first love, all I gave with nothing in return π I did get to be a very wise woman though πΉ
September 1st, 2024 03:00
The Wandering Poet
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words and that last line is so very true Phil.
Andy
September 1st, 2024 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words and that last line is so very true Phil.
Andy
September 1st, 2024 01:11
Ten Small Poems 2
Doggerel Dave said:
Bite sized prompts to much (I was going to write \'deep\', but of that I\'m unsure) thought, each one. Thanks for that, Phil.
August 30th, 2024 19:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Bite sized prompts to much (I was going to write \'deep\', but of that I\'m unsure) thought, each one. Thanks for that, Phil.
August 30th, 2024 19:37
Ten Small Poems 2
Bella Shepard said:
This flow of consciouoness is so flawless, and each little poem a work of wisdom. Beautiful dear poet!
August 30th, 2024 09:54
Bella Shepard said:
This flow of consciouoness is so flawless, and each little poem a work of wisdom. Beautiful dear poet!
August 30th, 2024 09:54
Ten Small Poems 2
Teddy.15 said:
My own now if you allow ......
Love can be everything
It can also be nothing. π
August 30th, 2024 09:17
Teddy.15 said:
My own now if you allow ......
Love can be everything
It can also be nothing. π
August 30th, 2024 09:17
Ten Small Poems 2
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful wonderful your last one is so full of imagery and metaphor, love them all Phil, I couldn\'t agree more πΉ
August 30th, 2024 09:16
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful wonderful your last one is so full of imagery and metaphor, love them all Phil, I couldn\'t agree more πΉ
August 30th, 2024 09:16
Mankind\'s Evolution
rrodriguez said:
Yeah, them boys sure wanted a change, but \"liquid salad bar\"? I don\'t know, but it doesn\'t sound appetizing. This was entertaining... Great job!
August 29th, 2024 19:33
rrodriguez said:
Yeah, them boys sure wanted a change, but \"liquid salad bar\"? I don\'t know, but it doesn\'t sound appetizing. This was entertaining... Great job!
August 29th, 2024 19:33
Mankind\'s Evolution
Doggerel Dave said:
Did feel ever so slightly lost, unsure where we were going next, Phil. Expectations upended. An enjoyable erratic ride.
August 29th, 2024 16:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Did feel ever so slightly lost, unsure where we were going next, Phil. Expectations upended. An enjoyable erratic ride.
August 29th, 2024 16:47
Mankind\'s Evolution
Teddy.15 said:
Liquid salad bar is a bit more convincing than the salad bar lol I\'d say that liquid bar would be mighty fine. What a lovely piece, kept me wondering all the way through, by the way Phil, it\'s not all us women do is shop you know lol πΉ
August 29th, 2024 12:32
Teddy.15 said:
Liquid salad bar is a bit more convincing than the salad bar lol I\'d say that liquid bar would be mighty fine. What a lovely piece, kept me wondering all the way through, by the way Phil, it\'s not all us women do is shop you know lol πΉ
August 29th, 2024 12:32
Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude )
Goldfinch60 said:
Very clever write Phil, I can remember most of those songs.
Andy
August 29th, 2024 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Very clever write Phil, I can remember most of those songs.
Andy
August 29th, 2024 01:08
Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude )
Doggerel Dave said:
I was identifying right along Phil, and fully felt a sinking recrimination at the end, sadness that the sorry, after the insight didn\'t turn the boat around.
August 28th, 2024 20:17
Doggerel Dave said:
I was identifying right along Phil, and fully felt a sinking recrimination at the end, sadness that the sorry, after the insight didn\'t turn the boat around.
August 28th, 2024 20:17
Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude )
rrodriguez said:
Now this is nice. What a way to go... I enjoyed it, buddy.
August 28th, 2024 19:55
rrodriguez said:
Now this is nice. What a way to go... I enjoyed it, buddy.
August 28th, 2024 19:55
Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude )
ChrisLynπ said:
Loved the way it was written
August 28th, 2024 12:37
ChrisLynπ said:
Loved the way it was written
August 28th, 2024 12:37
Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude )
JD Boye said:
I love the structure you chose for this work. A very evocative piece.
August 28th, 2024 10:46
JD Boye said:
I love the structure you chose for this work. A very evocative piece.
August 28th, 2024 10:46
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