Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
A Summer Affair
Doggerel Dave said:
What\'s to be said here that hasn\'t been said above?....that last stanza........
September 18th, 2023 17:30
Doggerel Dave said:
What\'s to be said here that hasn\'t been said above?....that last stanza........
September 18th, 2023 17:30
A Summer Affair
Neville said:
dagnabit .. this could so easily have been me and ****** or me and ******** two whole summers five years apart and in both the UK and in Israel ..
that last stanza of yours is most definitely what I both said and thought and have since written about umpteen times .. so well scripted my friend .......... Neville
September 18th, 2023 12:41
Neville said:
dagnabit .. this could so easily have been me and ****** or me and ******** two whole summers five years apart and in both the UK and in Israel ..
that last stanza of yours is most definitely what I both said and thought and have since written about umpteen times .. so well scripted my friend .......... Neville
September 18th, 2023 12:41
A Summer Affair
Bella Shepard said:
Reading this poem, it\'s as if I were watching it in a darkend movie theatre, getting lost in these two people on the screen and hoping for a happy ending. Then at the end I can hear \"Take good care of my baby\" in the background. You\'ve truly created a \"Magic Moment\", in this Summer Affair, exquisitely written, and a joy to read!
September 18th, 2023 12:39
Bella Shepard said:
Reading this poem, it\'s as if I were watching it in a darkend movie theatre, getting lost in these two people on the screen and hoping for a happy ending. Then at the end I can hear \"Take good care of my baby\" in the background. You\'ve truly created a \"Magic Moment\", in this Summer Affair, exquisitely written, and a joy to read!
September 18th, 2023 12:39
A Summer Affair
Teddy.15 said:
A magnificent piece of poetry, your imagery allowed me to share these precious moments dear Phil, you have brought a richness to what could be a magnificent memory or two , positively ending this poem. Absolutely stunning, and inspiring. đź’–
September 18th, 2023 12:23
Teddy.15 said:
A magnificent piece of poetry, your imagery allowed me to share these precious moments dear Phil, you have brought a richness to what could be a magnificent memory or two , positively ending this poem. Absolutely stunning, and inspiring. đź’–
September 18th, 2023 12:23
A Summer Affair
Bobby O said:
It’s a story many may be familiar with but you relay it with an effortless style that involves metaphor snd pathos snd all with succinct phrase. I don’t write this well but with pieces like this ad a guide I can improve. Nice job
September 18th, 2023 11:43
Bobby O said:
It’s a story many may be familiar with but you relay it with an effortless style that involves metaphor snd pathos snd all with succinct phrase. I don’t write this well but with pieces like this ad a guide I can improve. Nice job
September 18th, 2023 11:43
The All-Nite Cafe
Neville said:
this is so real .. for a moment, I was in the same café .. all alone but with a full English breakfast before me .. on a badly chipped plate .. you just done good sir .. Neville
September 17th, 2023 03:32
Neville said:
this is so real .. for a moment, I was in the same café .. all alone but with a full English breakfast before me .. on a badly chipped plate .. you just done good sir .. Neville
September 17th, 2023 03:32
The All-Nite Cafe
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - but it was a very long time ago, Phil.
Have I detected the ambivalence correctly?
September 16th, 2023 19:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - but it was a very long time ago, Phil.
Have I detected the ambivalence correctly?
September 16th, 2023 19:06
Time Always Runs Out.
Neville said:
My word you tell a mean tale about two lovers and the ocean Sir Fences ..
were you ever a sailor perchance like your namesake Sir Fences Drake ..
the ending felt like being hit by a pole axe .. it came too soon and it hurt like hell .. there\'s always room for more such tales though in my book ... Exceedingly well poemed my friend ... Neville
September 14th, 2023 01:32
Neville said:
My word you tell a mean tale about two lovers and the ocean Sir Fences ..
were you ever a sailor perchance like your namesake Sir Fences Drake ..
the ending felt like being hit by a pole axe .. it came too soon and it hurt like hell .. there\'s always room for more such tales though in my book ... Exceedingly well poemed my friend ... Neville
September 14th, 2023 01:32
Time Always Runs Out.
Teddy.15 said:
An epic heart breaker, mesmerized by every line your absolutely beautiful imagery and your heart within each line makes this so so special. Everything must come to an end. Absolutely love this poem dear Phil. Kudos a 1000 times đź’–
September 13th, 2023 15:48
Teddy.15 said:
An epic heart breaker, mesmerized by every line your absolutely beautiful imagery and your heart within each line makes this so so special. Everything must come to an end. Absolutely love this poem dear Phil. Kudos a 1000 times đź’–
September 13th, 2023 15:48
Troglodyte
Neville said:
very deep .. but then what would one expect from a subterranean dweller .. very much enjoyed Phil .. and just between you and me sir .. I lived for just over two weeks with the Troglodyte community on the fringe of the Sahara and would you believe my stay there with Sami was only cut short because we got flooded .. Neville
September 8th, 2023 12:57
Neville said:
very deep .. but then what would one expect from a subterranean dweller .. very much enjoyed Phil .. and just between you and me sir .. I lived for just over two weeks with the Troglodyte community on the fringe of the Sahara and would you believe my stay there with Sami was only cut short because we got flooded .. Neville
September 8th, 2023 12:57
Troglodyte
Doggerel Dave said:
Come on - cheer up!!
A very well written piece of misery.
( I\'m only doing this because I cannot compete with the previous entries above.....)
PS: What qualifies you as a Troglodyte?
September 7th, 2023 15:04
Doggerel Dave said:
Come on - cheer up!!
A very well written piece of misery.
( I\'m only doing this because I cannot compete with the previous entries above.....)
PS: What qualifies you as a Troglodyte?
September 7th, 2023 15:04
Troglodyte
Bella Shepard said:
Your descriptive words of love lost, a fitting lament, taking me to that so poignant last stanza, that just fits like a glove. Beautifully written!
September 7th, 2023 13:10
Bella Shepard said:
Your descriptive words of love lost, a fitting lament, taking me to that so poignant last stanza, that just fits like a glove. Beautifully written!
September 7th, 2023 13:10
Troglodyte
Teddy.15 said:
There’s water beneath this sweltering sand
cause I cried a river over you
a bleeding river like the Rio Grande
whose desertlike ending makes me blue
Would it be wrong to say I wish someone had written this for me?
I guess not after all I\'m only human. This is as yours always are a kudos written with a poets pen perfectly ❤️
A true inspiring read. Thank you Sir.
September 7th, 2023 12:52
Teddy.15 said:
There’s water beneath this sweltering sand
cause I cried a river over you
a bleeding river like the Rio Grande
whose desertlike ending makes me blue
Would it be wrong to say I wish someone had written this for me?
I guess not after all I\'m only human. This is as yours always are a kudos written with a poets pen perfectly ❤️
A true inspiring read. Thank you Sir.
September 7th, 2023 12:52
Troglodyte
Pop64 said:
Love lost is that love to lament upon, to write about in a beautifully rhyming, descriptive write such as this done. Well written! Clearly expressed!
September 7th, 2023 12:50
Pop64 said:
Love lost is that love to lament upon, to write about in a beautifully rhyming, descriptive write such as this done. Well written! Clearly expressed!
September 7th, 2023 12:50
Where was I?
Bella Shepard said:
This is powerful stuff, you strike a chord deep within. There are things that happened in my lifetime, where I can tell you precisely where I was, and know how it changed our lives forever. \"Lest we forget\" is so right my friend, this is such a thought-filled and intuitive write.
August 20th, 2023 12:26
Bella Shepard said:
This is powerful stuff, you strike a chord deep within. There are things that happened in my lifetime, where I can tell you precisely where I was, and know how it changed our lives forever. \"Lest we forget\" is so right my friend, this is such a thought-filled and intuitive write.
August 20th, 2023 12:26
Where was I?
Kinsey Peterson said:
remembering can become a weapon against repeating- beautiful poem
August 19th, 2023 16:16
Kinsey Peterson said:
remembering can become a weapon against repeating- beautiful poem
August 19th, 2023 16:16
Where was I?
Neville said:
this is nothing less than a literary/poetic masterpiece Phil ..
I hit the \'red heart shaped like icon\' so hard and so many times to try and award extra marks, but to no avail ..
You will just have to take my word for it sir .. Neville
August 18th, 2023 23:10
Neville said:
this is nothing less than a literary/poetic masterpiece Phil ..
I hit the \'red heart shaped like icon\' so hard and so many times to try and award extra marks, but to no avail ..
You will just have to take my word for it sir .. Neville
August 18th, 2023 23:10
Lessons of the Day
Neville said:
Now let that be a lesson to you all folks .. and well putt sir P :)
August 5th, 2023 12:34
Neville said:
Now let that be a lesson to you all folks .. and well putt sir P :)
August 5th, 2023 12:34
Lessons of the Day
Bobby O said:
A new handicap. Like that guy in the commercial shot in a Tattoo parlor “ stay in your lane bro”
And if you had a habit of kidnapping Mended Fences than I hope your slick talk convinces all you just took hollow poles and wire filling holes to loss prevent cuz if they find out you captured our poet you lack the sense heaven sent cuz he might be a broke dude with only two cents there ain’t many rich poets just cool dudes content.
August 4th, 2023 20:53
Bobby O said:
A new handicap. Like that guy in the commercial shot in a Tattoo parlor “ stay in your lane bro”
And if you had a habit of kidnapping Mended Fences than I hope your slick talk convinces all you just took hollow poles and wire filling holes to loss prevent cuz if they find out you captured our poet you lack the sense heaven sent cuz he might be a broke dude with only two cents there ain’t many rich poets just cool dudes content.
August 4th, 2023 20:53
Lessons of the Day
Teddy.15 said:
LoL oh yes, Phil, I\'ve been to the USA but I would never remotely pretend to know anything about America. You steam away dear poet. đź’–
August 4th, 2023 18:22
Teddy.15 said:
LoL oh yes, Phil, I\'ve been to the USA but I would never remotely pretend to know anything about America. You steam away dear poet. đź’–
August 4th, 2023 18:22
Lessons of the Day
Pop64 said:
All very true and the last had me laughing out loud!
August 4th, 2023 14:46
Pop64 said:
All very true and the last had me laughing out loud!
August 4th, 2023 14:46
A Musette
Neville said:
not so much a reflection sir but more of an illumination Phil .. say\'s I who am proud to say actually did see the late great Bonzo Bonham slap his cymbal\'s .. even more recently saw his sister & her band ..
August 3rd, 2023 16:49
Neville said:
not so much a reflection sir but more of an illumination Phil .. say\'s I who am proud to say actually did see the late great Bonzo Bonham slap his cymbal\'s .. even more recently saw his sister & her band ..
August 3rd, 2023 16:49
A Musette
Lynda May said:
This resonates with me. My muse passed away & it\'s a struggle to find the inspiration or the words now. But they\'re in there somewhere, just waiting for their moment!
August 3rd, 2023 03:30
Lynda May said:
This resonates with me. My muse passed away & it\'s a struggle to find the inspiration or the words now. But they\'re in there somewhere, just waiting for their moment!
August 3rd, 2023 03:30
A Musette
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well rhyming about a lost muse indeed. What a wonderful read, hey it\'s half price summer sales even a muse has to look good dear Phil, she\'ll be back with some massive inspiration as if you need it! 🤗 💖 Heartwarming and entertaining.
August 3rd, 2023 00:11
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well rhyming about a lost muse indeed. What a wonderful read, hey it\'s half price summer sales even a muse has to look good dear Phil, she\'ll be back with some massive inspiration as if you need it! 🤗 💖 Heartwarming and entertaining.
August 3rd, 2023 00:11
A Musette
Caring dove said:
And yeah , exactly you write about not being able to write
Well , I love your writing a very engaging and well written poem with many great lines
A lighthearted good poem .. many lovely words in this 🙂
I especially like these words
Words once would flow
like the rays of the Sun
now, the ideas I create
are more like a blind date
Please return to me.
My mind’s adrift and at sea
sinking fast into the great abyss
longing for your kiss
Set me free! Let me fly!
Give me wings and an open sky.
Touch my hand
with your invisible light.
Let me hear a jazz band
as I write
August 2nd, 2023 19:12
Caring dove said:
And yeah , exactly you write about not being able to write
Well , I love your writing a very engaging and well written poem with many great lines
A lighthearted good poem .. many lovely words in this 🙂
I especially like these words
Words once would flow
like the rays of the Sun
now, the ideas I create
are more like a blind date
Please return to me.
My mind’s adrift and at sea
sinking fast into the great abyss
longing for your kiss
Set me free! Let me fly!
Give me wings and an open sky.
Touch my hand
with your invisible light.
Let me hear a jazz band
as I write
August 2nd, 2023 19:12
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