Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
Lessons of the Day
Teddy.15 said:
LoL oh yes, Phil, I\'ve been to the USA but I would never remotely pretend to know anything about America. You steam away dear poet. 💖
August 4th, 2023 18:22
Teddy.15 said:
LoL oh yes, Phil, I\'ve been to the USA but I would never remotely pretend to know anything about America. You steam away dear poet. 💖
August 4th, 2023 18:22
Lessons of the Day
Pop64 said:
All very true and the last had me laughing out loud!
August 4th, 2023 14:46
Pop64 said:
All very true and the last had me laughing out loud!
August 4th, 2023 14:46
A Musette
Neville said:
not so much a reflection sir but more of an illumination Phil .. say\'s I who am proud to say actually did see the late great Bonzo Bonham slap his cymbal\'s .. even more recently saw his sister & her band ..
August 3rd, 2023 16:49
Neville said:
not so much a reflection sir but more of an illumination Phil .. say\'s I who am proud to say actually did see the late great Bonzo Bonham slap his cymbal\'s .. even more recently saw his sister & her band ..
August 3rd, 2023 16:49
A Musette
Lynda May said:
This resonates with me. My muse passed away & it\'s a struggle to find the inspiration or the words now. But they\'re in there somewhere, just waiting for their moment!
August 3rd, 2023 03:30
Lynda May said:
This resonates with me. My muse passed away & it\'s a struggle to find the inspiration or the words now. But they\'re in there somewhere, just waiting for their moment!
August 3rd, 2023 03:30
A Musette
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well rhyming about a lost muse indeed. What a wonderful read, hey it\'s half price summer sales even a muse has to look good dear Phil, she\'ll be back with some massive inspiration as if you need it! 🤗 💖 Heartwarming and entertaining.
August 3rd, 2023 00:11
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well rhyming about a lost muse indeed. What a wonderful read, hey it\'s half price summer sales even a muse has to look good dear Phil, she\'ll be back with some massive inspiration as if you need it! 🤗 💖 Heartwarming and entertaining.
August 3rd, 2023 00:11
A Musette
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
And yeah , exactly you write about not being able to write
Well , I love your writing a very engaging and well written poem with many great lines
A lighthearted good poem .. many lovely words in this 🙂
I especially like these words
Words once would flow
like the rays of the Sun
now, the ideas I create
are more like a blind date
Please return to me.
My mind’s adrift and at sea
sinking fast into the great abyss
longing for your kiss
Set me free! Let me fly!
Give me wings and an open sky.
Touch my hand
with your invisible light.
Let me hear a jazz band
as I write
August 2nd, 2023 19:12
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
And yeah , exactly you write about not being able to write
Well , I love your writing a very engaging and well written poem with many great lines
A lighthearted good poem .. many lovely words in this 🙂
I especially like these words
Words once would flow
like the rays of the Sun
now, the ideas I create
are more like a blind date
Please return to me.
My mind’s adrift and at sea
sinking fast into the great abyss
longing for your kiss
Set me free! Let me fly!
Give me wings and an open sky.
Touch my hand
with your invisible light.
Let me hear a jazz band
as I write
August 2nd, 2023 19:12
A Moonlight Sonata
Neville said:
I shall wait with baited breath .. since this one when hooked, took mine clean away ........... Neville
August 2nd, 2023 03:07
Neville said:
I shall wait with baited breath .. since this one when hooked, took mine clean away ........... Neville
August 2nd, 2023 03:07
Senryus 11
Teddy.15 said:
One of my favourite forms of poetry and you get a 10! Fabulous everyone I like the first one it made me giggle with a frown lol 💖 genius
August 1st, 2023 15:22
Teddy.15 said:
One of my favourite forms of poetry and you get a 10! Fabulous everyone I like the first one it made me giggle with a frown lol 💖 genius
August 1st, 2023 15:22
Fingers
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful poem such lovely gentle words you have expressed this so nicely ))
July 20th, 2023 15:30
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful poem such lovely gentle words you have expressed this so nicely ))
July 20th, 2023 15:30
Senryus 12
Neville said:
What a treasure trove we have here darn near enough little gems to make up an entire necklace .. Neville
July 20th, 2023 00:58
Neville said:
What a treasure trove we have here darn near enough little gems to make up an entire necklace .. Neville
July 20th, 2023 00:58
The Amber Hour
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful words in your poem 🙂
July 19th, 2023 14:12
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful words in your poem 🙂
July 19th, 2023 14:12
A Myth Untrue
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
This is a lovely poem of a birds struggle / adventure to find his love
I liked reading this
Love this line
His Nightingale voice sounded like a bell tinkling.
A great writing .. nice mention of blueberries in this
Sounds like the bird felt quite alone.. and unwanted ( by seals /sheep .. for a while
Thanks for sharing .. 🙂
July 18th, 2023 15:32
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
This is a lovely poem of a birds struggle / adventure to find his love
I liked reading this
Love this line
His Nightingale voice sounded like a bell tinkling.
A great writing .. nice mention of blueberries in this
Sounds like the bird felt quite alone.. and unwanted ( by seals /sheep .. for a while
Thanks for sharing .. 🙂
July 18th, 2023 15:32
To Love Someone
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A lovely writing ))
July 18th, 2023 14:33
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A lovely writing ))
July 18th, 2023 14:33
A Myth Untrue
Neville said:
and just to make absolutely sure I was write, I checked my self in again .. and yep .. I absolutely was and still am ............. Neville
July 18th, 2023 13:23
Neville said:
and just to make absolutely sure I was write, I checked my self in again .. and yep .. I absolutely was and still am ............. Neville
July 18th, 2023 13:23
A Myth Untrue
Neville said:
effin brilliant .. if I had faves, this would most surely rank high among em ... bloomin well penned my friend .. Neville
July 18th, 2023 02:29
Neville said:
effin brilliant .. if I had faves, this would most surely rank high among em ... bloomin well penned my friend .. Neville
July 18th, 2023 02:29
Clouds of Love
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
This is so nicely expressed ! Some very lovely words in this
July 17th, 2023 15:24
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
This is so nicely expressed ! Some very lovely words in this
July 17th, 2023 15:24
April Reigns
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful poem .. like your words 🙂
July 17th, 2023 15:18
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful poem .. like your words 🙂
July 17th, 2023 15:18
A Myth Untrue
Teddy.15 said:
His call appeared to be a love song
that he sang too late.
Yet, in the valley of his heartstrings
she became his “always” mate
Love this bit if I\'m honest I loved every single line ❣️
July 17th, 2023 14:06
Teddy.15 said:
His call appeared to be a love song
that he sang too late.
Yet, in the valley of his heartstrings
she became his “always” mate
Love this bit if I\'m honest I loved every single line ❣️
July 17th, 2023 14:06
Love is the Whole
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Some very beautiful words ik your poem 🙂
Especially like these lines
It reaches from inside of us to the fringes of Space.
It is a fire, a hunger, a sharing. It is moonlit.
.. and the ending lines
A lovely read )
July 17th, 2023 12:47
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Some very beautiful words ik your poem 🙂
Especially like these lines
It reaches from inside of us to the fringes of Space.
It is a fire, a hunger, a sharing. It is moonlit.
.. and the ending lines
A lovely read )
July 17th, 2023 12:47
A Poet\'s Dilemma
Neville said:
this is what I call a poets poem .. it is indeed, sadly excellent .. period .. N
July 9th, 2023 01:37
Neville said:
this is what I call a poets poem .. it is indeed, sadly excellent .. period .. N
July 9th, 2023 01:37
Love is the Whole
L. B. Mek said:
(that love is what transmutes
those holes in our heart\'s
into an impregnable, whole
by granting us, the right smile
by our side..)
in love
we entrust, for better or worse
till all hope, is drained from us..
simply Brilliant, dear Poet
thank you!
July 7th, 2023 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
(that love is what transmutes
those holes in our heart\'s
into an impregnable, whole
by granting us, the right smile
by our side..)
in love
we entrust, for better or worse
till all hope, is drained from us..
simply Brilliant, dear Poet
thank you!
July 7th, 2023 04:51
Love is the Whole
Teddy.15 said:
Well Phil, I adore your poetry and yes you are so true of love, it\'s everything and nothing it saves us and pulls us in the gutter a rollercoaster of pure emotion. A fabulous read and kudos on those last lines ❤️
July 7th, 2023 01:43
Teddy.15 said:
Well Phil, I adore your poetry and yes you are so true of love, it\'s everything and nothing it saves us and pulls us in the gutter a rollercoaster of pure emotion. A fabulous read and kudos on those last lines ❤️
July 7th, 2023 01:43
Love is the Whole
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is the strongest force in this world some just do not realise it though Phil.
Andy
July 7th, 2023 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is the strongest force in this world some just do not realise it though Phil.
Andy
July 7th, 2023 00:59
Love is the Whole
Neville said:
this is sweet if indeed not charming
be careful tho, too much sugar can be harming ..
Nevertheless Phil, you make several fine and valid points herein .. Neville
July 6th, 2023 22:50
Neville said:
this is sweet if indeed not charming
be careful tho, too much sugar can be harming ..
Nevertheless Phil, you make several fine and valid points herein .. Neville
July 6th, 2023 22:50
Philter
Teddy.15 said:
An absolute pleasure to read, such marvellous imagery. Loved the ending dear Phil, devil lady or Angel? Either way Brilliant. ❤️
July 5th, 2023 23:59
Teddy.15 said:
An absolute pleasure to read, such marvellous imagery. Loved the ending dear Phil, devil lady or Angel? Either way Brilliant. ❤️
July 5th, 2023 23:59
Philter
Neville said:
I\'m with the old dog .. once started it was so compelling I just had to down it in one .. and felt it burning all the way down .. captivatingly clever with a delicious aftertaste of Dusk till Dawn about it .. and gets full marks from yours truly .. Neville
July 5th, 2023 23:17
Neville said:
I\'m with the old dog .. once started it was so compelling I just had to down it in one .. and felt it burning all the way down .. captivatingly clever with a delicious aftertaste of Dusk till Dawn about it .. and gets full marks from yours truly .. Neville
July 5th, 2023 23:17
Philter
Doggerel Dave said:
I drank, and finished it. Definitely entertained. Many thanks Phil.
July 5th, 2023 17:49
Doggerel Dave said:
I drank, and finished it. Definitely entertained. Many thanks Phil.
July 5th, 2023 17:49
A Poet\'s Dilemma
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sad but so nicely expressed 🙂
I really like the words in this and it flows nicely
Lovely poem
July 4th, 2023 15:40
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sad but so nicely expressed 🙂
I really like the words in this and it flows nicely
Lovely poem
July 4th, 2023 15:40
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