Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
The Christmas Card
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine story Phil, did they catch her!
Andy
September 6th, 2024 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine story Phil, did they catch her!
Andy
September 6th, 2024 01:21
The Christmas Card
Doggerel Dave said:
You kept me in suspenders the whole way Phil, despite that I had this feeling of impendingโฆ.. I had to keep going.
September 5th, 2024 17:23
Doggerel Dave said:
You kept me in suspenders the whole way Phil, despite that I had this feeling of impendingโฆ.. I had to keep going.
September 5th, 2024 17:23
The Christmas Card
sorenbarrett said:
A crime story here of suspense and horror. Nicely written.
September 5th, 2024 10:55
sorenbarrett said:
A crime story here of suspense and horror. Nicely written.
September 5th, 2024 10:55
All Alone
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Phil, I know how you feel when my wife passed but I now have a new lady in my life for which I am very fortunate and grateful.
Andy
September 5th, 2024 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Phil, I know how you feel when my wife passed but I now have a new lady in my life for which I am very fortunate and grateful.
Andy
September 5th, 2024 01:44
All Alone
Pappy155 said:
I lost my wife in an instant in my arms - I unfortunately know your pain
September 4th, 2024 18:25
Pappy155 said:
I lost my wife in an instant in my arms - I unfortunately know your pain
September 4th, 2024 18:25
All Alone
Teddy.15 said:
Very sad indeed, this happened to one of my best friends, she left us in a flash, she didn\'t want us to know and she was only 34, I often write about her, a very beautifully composed piece, dear Phil. ๐นmy song, leave me here to dream is about her and her husband, who was left to look after their 1 year old. ๐
September 4th, 2024 10:52
Teddy.15 said:
Very sad indeed, this happened to one of my best friends, she left us in a flash, she didn\'t want us to know and she was only 34, I often write about her, a very beautifully composed piece, dear Phil. ๐นmy song, leave me here to dream is about her and her husband, who was left to look after their 1 year old. ๐
September 4th, 2024 10:52
Ten Small Poems 5
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful.
If the world is truly round, why do I see the house of my awful neighbour lol
September 4th, 2024 02:36
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful.
If the world is truly round, why do I see the house of my awful neighbour lol
September 4th, 2024 02:36
Ten Small Poems 5
Doggerel Dave said:
You get away with murder, here sometimes by quickly moving on...๐
At sea - lost would be my favourite among this batch, Phil.
September 3rd, 2024 17:14
Doggerel Dave said:
You get away with murder, here sometimes by quickly moving on...๐
At sea - lost would be my favourite among this batch, Phil.
September 3rd, 2024 17:14
Ten Small Poems 4
Goldfinch60 said:
More good ones Phil and that last one is so true.
Andy
September 3rd, 2024 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
More good ones Phil and that last one is so true.
Andy
September 3rd, 2024 01:26
Ten Small Poems 4
Teddy.15 said:
If we spend too much time in our own company the arguements becomes boring ...
Oh how you inspire me, I had a good chuckle at some of these bravo bravo. ๐น
September 2nd, 2024 15:25
Teddy.15 said:
If we spend too much time in our own company the arguements becomes boring ...
Oh how you inspire me, I had a good chuckle at some of these bravo bravo. ๐น
September 2nd, 2024 15:25
Ten Small Poems 4
Bella Shepard said:
My dear friend, I find you to be the modern day Confucius, in the wisdom and the cleverness of your words. I just love your 10 small poems, they are by no means \"small\".
September 2nd, 2024 13:15
Bella Shepard said:
My dear friend, I find you to be the modern day Confucius, in the wisdom and the cleverness of your words. I just love your 10 small poems, they are by no means \"small\".
September 2nd, 2024 13:15
The Wandering Poet
Dan Williams said:
Sorry but I have to disagree. The price of living is death. Nice write all the same.
September 2nd, 2024 00:31
Dan Williams said:
Sorry but I have to disagree. The price of living is death. Nice write all the same.
September 2nd, 2024 00:31
Ten small poems 3
orchidee said:
I don\'t gret, erm regret, to say good write M.
September 1st, 2024 11:32
orchidee said:
I don\'t gret, erm regret, to say good write M.
September 1st, 2024 11:32
Ten small poems 3
Teddy.15 said:
Oh wow I cannot choose one I love more all are fab but I love the tongue in cheek of grets that\'s hilarious,and about bei g too old to remember.
If you look back long enough
You may be back at the beginning. I just thought of this, you must have inspired it. ๐น I have enjoyed immensely your 10 small poem selections ๐
September 1st, 2024 11:09
Teddy.15 said:
Oh wow I cannot choose one I love more all are fab but I love the tongue in cheek of grets that\'s hilarious,and about bei g too old to remember.
If you look back long enough
You may be back at the beginning. I just thought of this, you must have inspired it. ๐น I have enjoyed immensely your 10 small poem selections ๐
September 1st, 2024 11:09
The Wandering Poet
Teddy.15 said:
This is wonderful and how true your last words are dear Phil reminds me of my first love, all I gave with nothing in return ๐ I did get to be a very wise woman though ๐น
September 1st, 2024 03:00
Teddy.15 said:
This is wonderful and how true your last words are dear Phil reminds me of my first love, all I gave with nothing in return ๐ I did get to be a very wise woman though ๐น
September 1st, 2024 03:00
The Wandering Poet
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words and that last line is so very true Phil.
Andy
September 1st, 2024 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words and that last line is so very true Phil.
Andy
September 1st, 2024 01:11
Ten Small Poems 2
Doggerel Dave said:
Bite sized prompts to much (I was going to write \'deep\', but of that I\'m unsure) thought, each one. Thanks for that, Phil.
August 30th, 2024 19:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Bite sized prompts to much (I was going to write \'deep\', but of that I\'m unsure) thought, each one. Thanks for that, Phil.
August 30th, 2024 19:37
Ten Small Poems 2
Bella Shepard said:
This flow of consciouoness is so flawless, and each little poem a work of wisdom. Beautiful dear poet!
August 30th, 2024 09:54
Bella Shepard said:
This flow of consciouoness is so flawless, and each little poem a work of wisdom. Beautiful dear poet!
August 30th, 2024 09:54
Ten Small Poems 2
Teddy.15 said:
My own now if you allow ......
Love can be everything
It can also be nothing. ๐
August 30th, 2024 09:17
Teddy.15 said:
My own now if you allow ......
Love can be everything
It can also be nothing. ๐
August 30th, 2024 09:17
Ten Small Poems 2
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful wonderful your last one is so full of imagery and metaphor, love them all Phil, I couldn\'t agree more ๐น
August 30th, 2024 09:16
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful wonderful your last one is so full of imagery and metaphor, love them all Phil, I couldn\'t agree more ๐น
August 30th, 2024 09:16
Mankind\'s Evolution
rrodriguez said:
Yeah, them boys sure wanted a change, but \"liquid salad bar\"? I don\'t know, but it doesn\'t sound appetizing. This was entertaining... Great job!
August 29th, 2024 19:33
rrodriguez said:
Yeah, them boys sure wanted a change, but \"liquid salad bar\"? I don\'t know, but it doesn\'t sound appetizing. This was entertaining... Great job!
August 29th, 2024 19:33
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