Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
Ten Small Poems 2
Doggerel Dave said:
Bite sized prompts to much (I was going to write \'deep\', but of that I\'m unsure) thought, each one. Thanks for that, Phil.
August 30th, 2024 19:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Bite sized prompts to much (I was going to write \'deep\', but of that I\'m unsure) thought, each one. Thanks for that, Phil.
August 30th, 2024 19:37
Ten Small Poems 2
Bella Shepard said:
This flow of consciouoness is so flawless, and each little poem a work of wisdom. Beautiful dear poet!
August 30th, 2024 09:54
Bella Shepard said:
This flow of consciouoness is so flawless, and each little poem a work of wisdom. Beautiful dear poet!
August 30th, 2024 09:54
Ten Small Poems 2
Teddy.15 said:
My own now if you allow ......
Love can be everything
It can also be nothing. 💙
August 30th, 2024 09:17
Teddy.15 said:
My own now if you allow ......
Love can be everything
It can also be nothing. 💙
August 30th, 2024 09:17
Ten Small Poems 2
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful wonderful your last one is so full of imagery and metaphor, love them all Phil, I couldn\'t agree more 🌹
August 30th, 2024 09:16
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful wonderful your last one is so full of imagery and metaphor, love them all Phil, I couldn\'t agree more 🌹
August 30th, 2024 09:16
Mankind\'s Evolution
rrodriguez said:
Yeah, them boys sure wanted a change, but \"liquid salad bar\"? I don\'t know, but it doesn\'t sound appetizing. This was entertaining... Great job!
August 29th, 2024 19:33
rrodriguez said:
Yeah, them boys sure wanted a change, but \"liquid salad bar\"? I don\'t know, but it doesn\'t sound appetizing. This was entertaining... Great job!
August 29th, 2024 19:33
Mankind\'s Evolution
Doggerel Dave said:
Did feel ever so slightly lost, unsure where we were going next, Phil. Expectations upended. An enjoyable erratic ride.
August 29th, 2024 16:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Did feel ever so slightly lost, unsure where we were going next, Phil. Expectations upended. An enjoyable erratic ride.
August 29th, 2024 16:47
Mankind\'s Evolution
Teddy.15 said:
Liquid salad bar is a bit more convincing than the salad bar lol I\'d say that liquid bar would be mighty fine. What a lovely piece, kept me wondering all the way through, by the way Phil, it\'s not all us women do is shop you know lol 🌹
August 29th, 2024 12:32
Teddy.15 said:
Liquid salad bar is a bit more convincing than the salad bar lol I\'d say that liquid bar would be mighty fine. What a lovely piece, kept me wondering all the way through, by the way Phil, it\'s not all us women do is shop you know lol 🌹
August 29th, 2024 12:32
Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude )
Goldfinch60 said:
Very clever write Phil, I can remember most of those songs.
Andy
August 29th, 2024 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Very clever write Phil, I can remember most of those songs.
Andy
August 29th, 2024 01:08
Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude )
Doggerel Dave said:
I was identifying right along Phil, and fully felt a sinking recrimination at the end, sadness that the sorry, after the insight didn\'t turn the boat around.
August 28th, 2024 20:17
Doggerel Dave said:
I was identifying right along Phil, and fully felt a sinking recrimination at the end, sadness that the sorry, after the insight didn\'t turn the boat around.
August 28th, 2024 20:17
Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude )
rrodriguez said:
Now this is nice. What a way to go... I enjoyed it, buddy.
August 28th, 2024 19:55
rrodriguez said:
Now this is nice. What a way to go... I enjoyed it, buddy.
August 28th, 2024 19:55
Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude )
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Loved the way it was written
August 28th, 2024 12:37
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Loved the way it was written
August 28th, 2024 12:37
Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude )
JD Boye said:
I love the structure you chose for this work. A very evocative piece.
August 28th, 2024 10:46
JD Boye said:
I love the structure you chose for this work. A very evocative piece.
August 28th, 2024 10:46
Ten Very Small Poems
Doggerel Dave said:
Truth, The night Sky and buttonholes would have satisfied me, Phil - the rest a bonus.
August 27th, 2024 22:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Truth, The night Sky and buttonholes would have satisfied me, Phil - the rest a bonus.
August 27th, 2024 22:58
Ten Very Small Poems
rrodriguez said:
So, poetry can be found in a flea market. This Sunday I\'m going to the flea market to find my inspiration. Or should I look to \"The night’s sky because it\'s is more truthful than the day’s?\" I believe it is. Great write, my friend. If you let me, maybe I can use one of your line as a prompt for my next poem. Just kidding!
August 27th, 2024 20:26
rrodriguez said:
So, poetry can be found in a flea market. This Sunday I\'m going to the flea market to find my inspiration. Or should I look to \"The night’s sky because it\'s is more truthful than the day’s?\" I believe it is. Great write, my friend. If you let me, maybe I can use one of your line as a prompt for my next poem. Just kidding!
August 27th, 2024 20:26
Ten Very Small Poems
sorenbarrett said:
Great sayings my friend enjoyed them all.
August 27th, 2024 12:36
sorenbarrett said:
Great sayings my friend enjoyed them all.
August 27th, 2024 12:36
Ten Very Small Poems
orchidee said:
A small comment - Good! lol.
I could be gushing and say - Oh wonderful, marvellous, full of wisdom, etc. Well, these poems are all that too.
August 27th, 2024 12:11
orchidee said:
A small comment - Good! lol.
I could be gushing and say - Oh wonderful, marvellous, full of wisdom, etc. Well, these poems are all that too.
August 27th, 2024 12:11
Ten Very Small Poems
Teddy.15 said:
lol I can honestly say this is one of the most entertaining poems I have ever read, I love every one. lol fabulous dearest Phil fabulous 🌹
August 27th, 2024 10:27
Teddy.15 said:
lol I can honestly say this is one of the most entertaining poems I have ever read, I love every one. lol fabulous dearest Phil fabulous 🌹
August 27th, 2024 10:27
Go Figure, Eight
Cassie58 said:
Looking at situations from all sides, surely has to be a good thing. If more did that, perhaps there might be less conflict. I like the thoughts you have shared here MF. I sensed the wisdom.
August 25th, 2024 12:13
Cassie58 said:
Looking at situations from all sides, surely has to be a good thing. If more did that, perhaps there might be less conflict. I like the thoughts you have shared here MF. I sensed the wisdom.
August 25th, 2024 12:13
Go Figure, Eight
Dan Williams said:
A generous serving of wisdom, this. Well done.
August 17th, 2024 23:27
Dan Williams said:
A generous serving of wisdom, this. Well done.
August 17th, 2024 23:27
Go Figure, Eight
Neville said:
this reads like a treatise on the unity of opposites .. well said say\'s I ..
August 17th, 2024 14:30
Neville said:
this reads like a treatise on the unity of opposites .. well said say\'s I ..
August 17th, 2024 14:30
Go Figure, Eight
sorenbarrett said:
Taoist in nature this looks at both sides. Nicely stated.
August 17th, 2024 12:31
sorenbarrett said:
Taoist in nature this looks at both sides. Nicely stated.
August 17th, 2024 12:31
Light
Teddy.15 said:
I felt the light dear Phil, I felt the light. Beautiful. 🌹
August 17th, 2024 03:53
Teddy.15 said:
I felt the light dear Phil, I felt the light. Beautiful. 🌹
August 17th, 2024 03:53
Light
Doggerel Dave said:
Should be the world\'s Mission Statement.
Well put, Phil.
August 16th, 2024 22:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Should be the world\'s Mission Statement.
Well put, Phil.
August 16th, 2024 22:34
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