Comments received on poems by Huzaidi Hashim
Your Love
nikhilps said:
NICE.......it is touching....... and i loved it... bt something is missing in the feeling...... i dont knw hw to say that... bt its good........
August 15th, 2010 04:37
nikhilps said:
NICE.......it is touching....... and i loved it... bt something is missing in the feeling...... i dont knw hw to say that... bt its good........
August 15th, 2010 04:37
Child (Anak - by Freddie Aguilar)
nair36 said:
that was such a beautiful poem. you're very talented.
August 9th, 2010 22:34
nair36 said:
that was such a beautiful poem. you're very talented.
August 9th, 2010 22:34
Child (Anak - by Freddie Aguilar)
Huzaidi Hashim said:
This poem is atranslation from the lyrics to a famour tagalog song by Freddie Aguilar of the Phillippines. The tagalog version is below;
Nang isilang ka sa mundong ito
Laking tuwa ng magulang mo
At ang kamay nila ang iyong ilaw
At ang nanay at tatay mo'y
Di malaman ang gagawin
Minamasdan pati pagtulog mo
At sa gabi'y napupuyat ang iyong nanay
Sa pagtimpla ng gatas mo
At sa umaga nama'y kalong ka
Ng iyong amang tuwang-tuwa sa iyo
Ngayon nga ay malaki ka na
Nais mo'y maging malaya
Di man sila payag Walang magagawa
Ikaw nga ay biglang nagbago
Naging matigas ang iyong ulo
At ang payo nila'y sinuway mo
Di mo man lang inisip na
Ang kanilang ginagawa'y para sa iyo
Pagkat ang nais mo'y
Masunod ang layaw mo
Di mo sila pinapansin
Nagdaan pa ang mga araw
At ang landas mo'y naligaw
Ikaw ay nalulong sa masamang bisyo
At ang una mong nilapitan
Ang iyong inang lumuluha
At ang tanong,"anak, ba't ka nagkaganyan"
At ang iyong mata'y biglang lumuha ng di mo pinapansin
Nagsisisi at sa isip mo'y
Nalaman mong ika'y nagkamali
Nagsisisi at sa isip mo'y
August 9th, 2010 22:32
Huzaidi Hashim said:
This poem is atranslation from the lyrics to a famour tagalog song by Freddie Aguilar of the Phillippines. The tagalog version is below;
Nang isilang ka sa mundong ito
Laking tuwa ng magulang mo
At ang kamay nila ang iyong ilaw
At ang nanay at tatay mo'y
Di malaman ang gagawin
Minamasdan pati pagtulog mo
At sa gabi'y napupuyat ang iyong nanay
Sa pagtimpla ng gatas mo
At sa umaga nama'y kalong ka
Ng iyong amang tuwang-tuwa sa iyo
Ngayon nga ay malaki ka na
Nais mo'y maging malaya
Di man sila payag Walang magagawa
Ikaw nga ay biglang nagbago
Naging matigas ang iyong ulo
At ang payo nila'y sinuway mo
Di mo man lang inisip na
Ang kanilang ginagawa'y para sa iyo
Pagkat ang nais mo'y
Masunod ang layaw mo
Di mo sila pinapansin
Nagdaan pa ang mga araw
At ang landas mo'y naligaw
Ikaw ay nalulong sa masamang bisyo
At ang una mong nilapitan
Ang iyong inang lumuluha
At ang tanong,"anak, ba't ka nagkaganyan"
At ang iyong mata'y biglang lumuha ng di mo pinapansin
Nagsisisi at sa isip mo'y
Nalaman mong ika'y nagkamali
Nagsisisi at sa isip mo'y
August 9th, 2010 22:32
Raging Youth
lulu said:
niiiiiiiice poem especially after i knew it's 4 ur children & how u feel about them good job man good job
July 22nd, 2010 16:35
lulu said:
niiiiiiiice poem especially after i knew it's 4 ur children & how u feel about them good job man good job
July 22nd, 2010 16:35
Paint a happiness
lulu said:
coool man be possative all the time loved ur poem so much
cheeeeeeeeeers :D
July 21st, 2010 11:29
lulu said:
coool man be possative all the time loved ur poem so much
cheeeeeeeeeers :D
July 21st, 2010 11:29
Paint a happiness
Kri2arch said:
Thats very true, am inspired through ur poem.tanx
July 21st, 2010 05:41
Kri2arch said:
Thats very true, am inspired through ur poem.tanx
July 21st, 2010 05:41
Paint a happiness
Jorge G Sifuentes said:
Huzaidi...woooww.....
I knew it..... you got good stuff.....
keep on budy.......
July 20th, 2010 21:11
Jorge G Sifuentes said:
Huzaidi...woooww.....
I knew it..... you got good stuff.....
keep on budy.......
July 20th, 2010 21:11
Raging Youth
Huzaidi Hashim said:
Thank you for your kind comments and ratings. The poem was written for my teenage children who have grown out of our nest. Although our hearts fear the worst for them, we must allow them their freedom to explore their fullest potential. It expresses our deep love for them during their need to find their own identity, to be the man or woman they have always wanted to be. My eldest son is teaching English, my second son and eldest daughter are studying to be doctors, my third son is studying Multimedia while the rest are still in school (of course this excludes baby Alanis). Wherever they are, our prayer will be with them always.
July 20th, 2010 19:04
Huzaidi Hashim said:
Thank you for your kind comments and ratings. The poem was written for my teenage children who have grown out of our nest. Although our hearts fear the worst for them, we must allow them their freedom to explore their fullest potential. It expresses our deep love for them during their need to find their own identity, to be the man or woman they have always wanted to be. My eldest son is teaching English, my second son and eldest daughter are studying to be doctors, my third son is studying Multimedia while the rest are still in school (of course this excludes baby Alanis). Wherever they are, our prayer will be with them always.
July 20th, 2010 19:04
Raging Youth
Jorge G Sifuentes said:
Your spirit speaks for it self, you are full of talent...
This!... I can see it's just a morsel of it all...
Beautiful!!!
July 20th, 2010 13:04
Jorge G Sifuentes said:
Your spirit speaks for it self, you are full of talent...
This!... I can see it's just a morsel of it all...
Beautiful!!!
July 20th, 2010 13:04
Your Love
Jorge G Sifuentes said:
Your inspiration like warmth breeze for the loving heart...
Hope to read more of this..
it's very good
my regards
July 15th, 2010 06:35
Jorge G Sifuentes said:
Your inspiration like warmth breeze for the loving heart...
Hope to read more of this..
it's very good
my regards
July 15th, 2010 06:35
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