Comments received on poems by Huzaidi Hashim
Teacher Oh Teacher
Dolphine29 said:
I really like it! It’s so inspiring and also very honest. :)
May 16th, 2012 09:36
Dolphine29 said:
I really like it! It’s so inspiring and also very honest. :)
May 16th, 2012 09:36
My Teacher
lynn said:
Nice tribute to your teacher. I'm sure she will be pleased as she reads your beautiful words from above. Very touching. I give you a 10.
April 28th, 2012 18:02
lynn said:
Nice tribute to your teacher. I'm sure she will be pleased as she reads your beautiful words from above. Very touching. I give you a 10.
April 28th, 2012 18:02
Love's true secrets
Dolphine29 said:
I feel that our own passions can make us feel atuned with love as long as we let it be love.. I Loved this poem!!!
Best
April 27th, 2012 10:06
Dolphine29 said:
I feel that our own passions can make us feel atuned with love as long as we let it be love.. I Loved this poem!!!
Best
April 27th, 2012 10:06
Hold her hand
lynn said:
What touching words to offer your Son.Very nice poem.
February 12th, 2012 19:00
lynn said:
What touching words to offer your Son.Very nice poem.
February 12th, 2012 19:00
The Tree of Wisdom
Huzaidi Hashim said:
The poem is dissected to reveal it's meanings!
The tree of Wisdom - symbolizes the strength our unity
The tree of wisdom summons - Our unity demands our attention
... The souls of victors dead - it calls for the hero within us
Stand forth above the commons - to come out of the crowd
As we soar thru’ mines ahead - to brave thru dangers ahead
Admirals pulling their weight - commanders share responsibility
As the compass sets to shore - a direction to focus on
A journey that can ne’er wait - we must move now
Endless purpose is our chore - because this is a lifetime commitment
Wise are the sages of time - our wise leaders have a dream
Unraveling the secrets of lore - quoting the success of our past
Staging the essence of rhyme - setting the pace to follow
Beckoning the warriors afore - raising our fighting spirits
Time shall not besiege us - won't give up just coz it needs time
As the battle rages on - we will persist even if it is difficult
Dreams shall not abandon us - we will remain resilient
Until our mission is done - until our objectives are met
A school is what we plan - we want to build a school
to start and shall not end - once set up. we will keep it up
To reach the elusive honor - so that our kids will be able to gain
of scholarly stupend - an international top-class education
December 8th, 2011 04:56
Huzaidi Hashim said:
The poem is dissected to reveal it's meanings!
The tree of Wisdom - symbolizes the strength our unity
The tree of wisdom summons - Our unity demands our attention
... The souls of victors dead - it calls for the hero within us
Stand forth above the commons - to come out of the crowd
As we soar thru’ mines ahead - to brave thru dangers ahead
Admirals pulling their weight - commanders share responsibility
As the compass sets to shore - a direction to focus on
A journey that can ne’er wait - we must move now
Endless purpose is our chore - because this is a lifetime commitment
Wise are the sages of time - our wise leaders have a dream
Unraveling the secrets of lore - quoting the success of our past
Staging the essence of rhyme - setting the pace to follow
Beckoning the warriors afore - raising our fighting spirits
Time shall not besiege us - won't give up just coz it needs time
As the battle rages on - we will persist even if it is difficult
Dreams shall not abandon us - we will remain resilient
Until our mission is done - until our objectives are met
A school is what we plan - we want to build a school
to start and shall not end - once set up. we will keep it up
To reach the elusive honor - so that our kids will be able to gain
of scholarly stupend - an international top-class education
December 8th, 2011 04:56
Bring back your smile
mvvenkataraman said:
Dear respected Huzaidi Hashim,
In spite of deepest sorrow
You have penned a beauty
Your poem is excellent really
Rhyme and rhythm are intact
May God bless your dear child
She will soon recover I now pray
Please encourage her greatly
Love her strongly to strengthen
God can do miracles easily
So approaching God is wise
I can only appeal to the Lord
But, prayer will bring cure.
Yours prayerfully,
mvvenkataraman
November 16th, 2011 12:05
mvvenkataraman said:
Dear respected Huzaidi Hashim,
In spite of deepest sorrow
You have penned a beauty
Your poem is excellent really
Rhyme and rhythm are intact
May God bless your dear child
She will soon recover I now pray
Please encourage her greatly
Love her strongly to strengthen
God can do miracles easily
So approaching God is wise
I can only appeal to the Lord
But, prayer will bring cure.
Yours prayerfully,
mvvenkataraman
November 16th, 2011 12:05
Paint a happiness
Paul Price said:
Very nice, its always good to read happy poems. I like it...
October 11th, 2011 18:41
Paul Price said:
Very nice, its always good to read happy poems. I like it...
October 11th, 2011 18:41
When you went away
tamm13 said:
i love this poem. it reminds me of my first love. we separated because we have prioritize our study. even if we were miles a part. i still love him and i am hoping that we will meet again..
September 20th, 2011 06:51
tamm13 said:
i love this poem. it reminds me of my first love. we separated because we have prioritize our study. even if we were miles a part. i still love him and i am hoping that we will meet again..
September 20th, 2011 06:51
When you went away
Huzaidi Hashim said:
Thanks Cheeky Missy ... I'm sure my daughter will appreciate your comments on her poem
September 19th, 2011 01:10
Huzaidi Hashim said:
Thanks Cheeky Missy ... I'm sure my daughter will appreciate your comments on her poem
September 19th, 2011 01:10
When you went away
Cheeky Missy said:
The author's explanatory note makes this piece so much more special, for the bride's heart indeed would suffer greatly (it seems to ignorant/inexperienced me) when her husband must be absent. La, but she has a lot of suffering to bear and she is bearing it bravely and beautifully it appears to me. I hope their separation may somehow not seem as long as it is and that it may not be very long. This is beautiful. She writes well. The imagery in the S1 one is poignant, powerful and superb in indicating the loss.
September 18th, 2011 20:09
Cheeky Missy said:
The author's explanatory note makes this piece so much more special, for the bride's heart indeed would suffer greatly (it seems to ignorant/inexperienced me) when her husband must be absent. La, but she has a lot of suffering to bear and she is bearing it bravely and beautifully it appears to me. I hope their separation may somehow not seem as long as it is and that it may not be very long. This is beautiful. She writes well. The imagery in the S1 one is poignant, powerful and superb in indicating the loss.
September 18th, 2011 20:09
Bring back your smile
Huzaidi Hashim said:
Thank you Dolphine29. An A10 from you is certainly a compliment. Our daughter reads my poems in this site. I'm sure she will appreciate what you have written here! Thank you again from all of us here in Malaysia
September 13th, 2011 17:47
Huzaidi Hashim said:
Thank you Dolphine29. An A10 from you is certainly a compliment. Our daughter reads my poems in this site. I'm sure she will appreciate what you have written here! Thank you again from all of us here in Malaysia
September 13th, 2011 17:47
Bring back your smile
Dolphine29 said:
I am sure she will, just give her love, space and time. That will ensure her own pace to find herself again. And never despair, 'cause we all see that the truth lies inside ourselves.
Please send her a note from me, I hope she finds what she dreams and hopes above all, that she enjoys herself, for who she is, we are all precious.
Best
Dolphine.
September 13th, 2011 12:59
Dolphine29 said:
I am sure she will, just give her love, space and time. That will ensure her own pace to find herself again. And never despair, 'cause we all see that the truth lies inside ourselves.
Please send her a note from me, I hope she finds what she dreams and hopes above all, that she enjoys herself, for who she is, we are all precious.
Best
Dolphine.
September 13th, 2011 12:59
Last dash to the finish line!
Cheeky Missy said:
Thank you for the very helpful author's note. Oh, how sweet and poignant this is! May she recover from the horrendous cruel solution to cancer and bounce back shortly! It is precious because of the love that is cheering the wearied racer to hang in there. Sweet. I like it.
August 11th, 2011 23:17
Cheeky Missy said:
Thank you for the very helpful author's note. Oh, how sweet and poignant this is! May she recover from the horrendous cruel solution to cancer and bounce back shortly! It is precious because of the love that is cheering the wearied racer to hang in there. Sweet. I like it.
August 11th, 2011 23:17
Tears on Your Wedding Day
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I wish them all the best. This is a beautiful, slightly intriguing blessing, depiction and tribute to your precious daughter's marriage. I enjoyed it.
August 2nd, 2011 18:57
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I wish them all the best. This is a beautiful, slightly intriguing blessing, depiction and tribute to your precious daughter's marriage. I enjoyed it.
August 2nd, 2011 18:57
No use regretting now! (a song written by my late father)
Cheeky Missy said:
Thank you very much for taking the time to translate it for those of us (like me) who are not bilingual. Excellent reminder with the usual wisdom that "all that glitters is NOT gold", and if only we might wisely heed to think farther than the present passionate moment to the inevitable unknown future we'd well be saved some grief. I liked it.
July 17th, 2011 21:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Thank you very much for taking the time to translate it for those of us (like me) who are not bilingual. Excellent reminder with the usual wisdom that "all that glitters is NOT gold", and if only we might wisely heed to think farther than the present passionate moment to the inevitable unknown future we'd well be saved some grief. I liked it.
July 17th, 2011 21:18
True Friendship
Emi said:
I love it! I especially like these two lines: "He knows the song in your heart, and sings it to you when you’ve forgotten". :)
June 1st, 2011 09:44
Emi said:
I love it! I especially like these two lines: "He knows the song in your heart, and sings it to you when you’ve forgotten". :)
June 1st, 2011 09:44
Memories of Love Lost
Huzaidi Hashim said:
Your sensitivity allows you to feel into the deeper meanings of my words. The prison refers to the perpetual state of being in love which make it ever more painful, especially when the person you love can no longer reciprocate for reasons beyond our control!
May 2nd, 2011 21:59
Huzaidi Hashim said:
Your sensitivity allows you to feel into the deeper meanings of my words. The prison refers to the perpetual state of being in love which make it ever more painful, especially when the person you love can no longer reciprocate for reasons beyond our control!
May 2nd, 2011 21:59
Paint a happiness
Dolphine29 said:
It has made me smile, but also gave me a deep thought. We do paint our own picture to reflect how we feel deep inside in our lives and to be able to enjoy. But while is so true, we can choose the colors; we need to see the different colors, all of them in order to have a true piece … a whole. Well that is my humble opinion.
Either way I really liked your poem :)
Best
Dolphine
April 29th, 2011 18:37
Dolphine29 said:
It has made me smile, but also gave me a deep thought. We do paint our own picture to reflect how we feel deep inside in our lives and to be able to enjoy. But while is so true, we can choose the colors; we need to see the different colors, all of them in order to have a true piece … a whole. Well that is my humble opinion.
Either way I really liked your poem :)
Best
Dolphine
April 29th, 2011 18:37
Memories of Love Lost
Dolphine29 said:
Very deep. I want to say that .. I think in way we never really loose anything or anyone, inside ourselves it becomes part of us and we exist forever even if we change, what is inside our feelings is still part of us and always will be.
:)
April 29th, 2011 18:29
Dolphine29 said:
Very deep. I want to say that .. I think in way we never really loose anything or anyone, inside ourselves it becomes part of us and we exist forever even if we change, what is inside our feelings is still part of us and always will be.
:)
April 29th, 2011 18:29
My lil Darlin ... a country song! (original)
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Excellent! Fascinating and beautiful. So perfect and delightful. I quite enjoyed it.
March 17th, 2011 22:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Excellent! Fascinating and beautiful. So perfect and delightful. I quite enjoyed it.
March 17th, 2011 22:05
Luna Lunera (A Peruvian Lullaby)
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautiful, bittersweet, fascinating. Thank you for sharing it.
March 17th, 2011 21:41
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautiful, bittersweet, fascinating. Thank you for sharing it.
March 17th, 2011 21:41
Secret Key
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I love it! So beautifully depicting that exact thing....excellently expressed. Short and succinct. Delightful!
March 15th, 2011 23:43
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I love it! So beautifully depicting that exact thing....excellently expressed. Short and succinct. Delightful!
March 15th, 2011 23:43
Poetry
Cheeky Missy said:
Cool! I like it, not only for the content, but also for the sweet fact of it being a fusioned poem by father and son! A fascinating explanation of poems, beautiful, rhymed; an enjoyable description and reflection....very nice! Great job!
March 12th, 2011 12:34
Cheeky Missy said:
Cool! I like it, not only for the content, but also for the sweet fact of it being a fusioned poem by father and son! A fascinating explanation of poems, beautiful, rhymed; an enjoyable description and reflection....very nice! Great job!
March 12th, 2011 12:34
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