Comments received on poems by meigh
life goes on
mvvenkataraman said:
A really wonderful poem though sad
The poet has followed poetic norms
The poem exhibits the skill of the poet
I am amazed by the sorrow told gently.
mvvenkataraman
July 4th, 2012 10:17
mvvenkataraman said:
A really wonderful poem though sad
The poet has followed poetic norms
The poem exhibits the skill of the poet
I am amazed by the sorrow told gently.
mvvenkataraman
July 4th, 2012 10:17
Is there anyone out there
Shyam said:
'help me find a mate' - Mildly Raw and simply honest. Very nice.
When left incomplete, our most basic instincts start to convulse and burns us from inside. Every living thing, a simple plant or a bug, is bound to such needs. Mother nature's creation is both beautiful and extremely rude.
All the best!
April 3rd, 2011 04:24
Shyam said:
'help me find a mate' - Mildly Raw and simply honest. Very nice.
When left incomplete, our most basic instincts start to convulse and burns us from inside. Every living thing, a simple plant or a bug, is bound to such needs. Mother nature's creation is both beautiful and extremely rude.
All the best!
April 3rd, 2011 04:24
Tearing me apart
Alexandre Landsley said:
Nice poem......feelings are well express :)
March 27th, 2011 09:32
Alexandre Landsley said:
Nice poem......feelings are well express :)
March 27th, 2011 09:32
Not Forgotten
Emi said:
Awww this is very sad... :( Such an awful thing to happen...
March 26th, 2011 16:52
Emi said:
Awww this is very sad... :( Such an awful thing to happen...
March 26th, 2011 16:52
Tearing me apart
Emi said:
Awww... Very sad. This is perfectly written - I even felt the sadness that you wrote about when I read it. :)
March 26th, 2011 09:47
Emi said:
Awww... Very sad. This is perfectly written - I even felt the sadness that you wrote about when I read it. :)
March 26th, 2011 09:47
Beginnings
Emi said:
Awww, very sweet. The word choice is brilliant - just perfect, and I love the rhyming. :) Just awesome!
March 23rd, 2011 13:05
Emi said:
Awww, very sweet. The word choice is brilliant - just perfect, and I love the rhyming. :) Just awesome!
March 23rd, 2011 13:05
A BEAUTIFUL DAY
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. What a sweet poem from a loving father to his precious twins. Glad they liked it and you love them. It's very sweet, and beautiful.
March 12th, 2011 22:32
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. What a sweet poem from a loving father to his precious twins. Glad they liked it and you love them. It's very sweet, and beautiful.
March 12th, 2011 22:32
Not Forgotten
aliveinua said:
I started writing this comment... when suddenly I realised I don't know what to say... It's so overwhelming... words fail me... made me cry... sorry...
Made me remember my own losses...
Just be ok... please
March 12th, 2011 13:15
aliveinua said:
I started writing this comment... when suddenly I realised I don't know what to say... It's so overwhelming... words fail me... made me cry... sorry...
Made me remember my own losses...
Just be ok... please
March 12th, 2011 13:15
My Secret
aliveinua said:
Yeah.. life is a journey.. not a guided tour.. I understand you too well.. used to write like this... But still... there's always hope for a better life, right?:)
March 12th, 2011 13:08
aliveinua said:
Yeah.. life is a journey.. not a guided tour.. I understand you too well.. used to write like this... But still... there's always hope for a better life, right?:)
March 12th, 2011 13:08
My Secret
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. This is VERY sad. Very poignantly expressed as well. Left me wide-eyed and sorrowful. Oh, please, cry to the Lord God of the Bible for deliverance, seek His face evermore. O, may He have mercy on you and your little family and deliver you into His heavenly kingdom.
March 12th, 2011 00:12
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. This is VERY sad. Very poignantly expressed as well. Left me wide-eyed and sorrowful. Oh, please, cry to the Lord God of the Bible for deliverance, seek His face evermore. O, may He have mercy on you and your little family and deliver you into His heavenly kingdom.
March 12th, 2011 00:12
A BEAUTIFUL DAY
Emi said:
Awww, a very sweet poem. :) If you showed it to your daughter(s), I am sure she (or they) very much enjoyed it as much, if not more, than I did. :)
March 11th, 2011 18:17
Emi said:
Awww, a very sweet poem. :) If you showed it to your daughter(s), I am sure she (or they) very much enjoyed it as much, if not more, than I did. :)
March 11th, 2011 18:17
Not Forgotten
meigh said:
thank you. but I had 5 years of a beautiful marriage and she gave me 3 wonderful children again thanks. god bless
March 10th, 2011 22:21
meigh said:
thank you. but I had 5 years of a beautiful marriage and she gave me 3 wonderful children again thanks. god bless
March 10th, 2011 22:21
Not Forgotten
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is very, very sad. What a horrible memory and great grief! You presented it well with rhyming. How very sad it is.
March 10th, 2011 21:09
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is very, very sad. What a horrible memory and great grief! You presented it well with rhyming. How very sad it is.
March 10th, 2011 21:09
Not Forgotten
Dolphine29 said:
I am deeply moved. I want to say, I just feel that you and the ones you love are going to be ok and are cared very much.
I wish you the best
Take care
Dolphine.
March 10th, 2011 16:40
Dolphine29 said:
I am deeply moved. I want to say, I just feel that you and the ones you love are going to be ok and are cared very much.
I wish you the best
Take care
Dolphine.
March 10th, 2011 16:40
soulmate
meigh said:
thanks. water lilys were her favorte .have a good day god bless
March 9th, 2011 23:15
meigh said:
thanks. water lilys were her favorte .have a good day god bless
March 9th, 2011 23:15
soulmate
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Eleven years is a while, yet with such deep love,....seems you might ever miss her. This is very sweet. And the image is delightfully fitting.
March 9th, 2011 22:13
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Eleven years is a while, yet with such deep love,....seems you might ever miss her. This is very sweet. And the image is delightfully fitting.
March 9th, 2011 22:13
Not Forgotten
Shyam said:
That was brilliant. You managed to bring the details with good rhyming
March 9th, 2011 07:14
Shyam said:
That was brilliant. You managed to bring the details with good rhyming
March 9th, 2011 07:14
soulmate
Dolphine29 said:
Ohh!!! Really Beautiful, I am sure this message has been heard.
I hope you have a great week.
Best
Dolphine
March 8th, 2011 16:27
Dolphine29 said:
Ohh!!! Really Beautiful, I am sure this message has been heard.
I hope you have a great week.
Best
Dolphine
March 8th, 2011 16:27
Cancer
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Very sober, sorrowful, sweet, hopeful, poignant. The image is fitting as well. Well-done. Ah, but what a sad contemplation...how very realistic it is, too.
March 8th, 2011 00:47
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Very sober, sorrowful, sweet, hopeful, poignant. The image is fitting as well. Well-done. Ah, but what a sad contemplation...how very realistic it is, too.
March 8th, 2011 00:47
