Comments received on poems by Shyam
Farewell
Cheeky Missy said:
This is excellent, I think! How very well and poignantly you've depicted the dear cat and your great grief in it's loss, by expressing the lack of realization as you stand staring at its lifeless body, talking in vain to nobody, for it is gone forever. Very well done! Beautiful! I am sorry you had to lose it. I recall when my cat died, we thought hit by a passing semi; I was very sad.
March 19th, 2011 21:28
Cheeky Missy said:
This is excellent, I think! How very well and poignantly you've depicted the dear cat and your great grief in it's loss, by expressing the lack of realization as you stand staring at its lifeless body, talking in vain to nobody, for it is gone forever. Very well done! Beautiful! I am sorry you had to lose it. I recall when my cat died, we thought hit by a passing semi; I was very sad.
March 19th, 2011 21:28
Farewell
Emi said:
Awwww very sad... I'm very sorry about your cat. :( I went away on a trip when I was little, and I came back and my dog whom I loved very much was gone... Turns out my dad had put her to sleep while I was gone, so I never got a chance to say goodbye... :(
March 19th, 2011 20:31
Emi said:
Awwww very sad... I'm very sorry about your cat. :( I went away on a trip when I was little, and I came back and my dog whom I loved very much was gone... Turns out my dad had put her to sleep while I was gone, so I never got a chance to say goodbye... :(
March 19th, 2011 20:31
Farewell
Lonelykaren said:
This has dept in a way.
I lost my bestest buddy too.
She was always hiper and happy.
she would wagg her tail everytime she saw me
I miss her!!!
Good poem its and ode..
March 18th, 2011 17:57
Lonelykaren said:
This has dept in a way.
I lost my bestest buddy too.
She was always hiper and happy.
she would wagg her tail everytime she saw me
I miss her!!!
Good poem its and ode..
March 18th, 2011 17:57
Alone.............
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, for learning that most dreadful language English, you do very well. It is sad, a grievous cry of heartache and heartbreak, with good imagery and finishing rather poignantly with the plea, so touchingly lingering still on that love. Excellent. You depicted the sentiment well, I think.
March 10th, 2011 21:14
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, for learning that most dreadful language English, you do very well. It is sad, a grievous cry of heartache and heartbreak, with good imagery and finishing rather poignantly with the plea, so touchingly lingering still on that love. Excellent. You depicted the sentiment well, I think.
March 10th, 2011 21:14
Alone.............
Dolphine29 said:
It's really beatiful and a sense of lost and longing that brakes the heart.
I know the feeling, I hope that want you hope to experience and share comes to you sooner than you think; as I hope as well.
Best
Dolphine
March 10th, 2011 16:58
Dolphine29 said:
It's really beatiful and a sense of lost and longing that brakes the heart.
I know the feeling, I hope that want you hope to experience and share comes to you sooner than you think; as I hope as well.
Best
Dolphine
March 10th, 2011 16:58
Funeral
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. What a thought-provoking consideration. Fascinating! I like how you expressed it and the reflections. Very nicely expressed.
March 9th, 2011 22:27
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. What a thought-provoking consideration. Fascinating! I like how you expressed it and the reflections. Very nicely expressed.
March 9th, 2011 22:27
Alone.............
Shyam said:
Friends, you can find my other works in my blog :-
http://www.krishnabeloved.blogspot.com/
March 9th, 2011 07:07
Shyam said:
Friends, you can find my other works in my blog :-
http://www.krishnabeloved.blogspot.com/
March 9th, 2011 07:07
