Comments received on poems by Elizabethan Sea
Dear Wisdom Teeth...
valene said:
Elizabeth, you poem truly made me LOL! I love that you wrote a letter to your wisdom teeth....not something most people would think to do! And you did so in such a clever way! I remember when I had mine pulled...i looked like a chipmunk for a week....puffy cheeks! but the pain meds did help and i didn\'t mind that part....LOL! I love it when someone thinks out of the box and comes up with a well crafted piece!
April 14th, 2017 17:37
valene said:
Elizabeth, you poem truly made me LOL! I love that you wrote a letter to your wisdom teeth....not something most people would think to do! And you did so in such a clever way! I remember when I had mine pulled...i looked like a chipmunk for a week....puffy cheeks! but the pain meds did help and i didn\'t mind that part....LOL! I love it when someone thinks out of the box and comes up with a well crafted piece!
April 14th, 2017 17:37
The Landscaper\'s Debate
Aa Harvey said:
This is a beautiful poem and it sounds like it is such a nice place to be.
March 23rd, 2017 17:35
Aa Harvey said:
This is a beautiful poem and it sounds like it is such a nice place to be.
March 23rd, 2017 17:35
Ballad to a Journey
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sometimes change can be a great adventure to the unknown
March 23rd, 2017 00:23
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sometimes change can be a great adventure to the unknown
March 23rd, 2017 00:23
Ballad to a Journey
Tony36 said:
Being part of a military family when I was growing up. We moved quite a bit as well. Great write
February 16th, 2017 15:53
Tony36 said:
Being part of a military family when I was growing up. We moved quite a bit as well. Great write
February 16th, 2017 15:53
Ballad to a Journey
Fay Slimm. said:
You describe a move across miles with all its challenges so well here - - do hope by now you are settled and having happy adventures in your new home. A beautifully honest verse.
February 16th, 2017 15:40
Fay Slimm. said:
You describe a move across miles with all its challenges so well here - - do hope by now you are settled and having happy adventures in your new home. A beautifully honest verse.
February 16th, 2017 15:40
Embrace
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for your second poem ELIZABETH ~ a beautiful tribute to HUGGING ! There are 11 STANZAS and each one focuses on a different and lovely experience of embrace. I am a Performance Poem so I like Poems with FLOW (Rhyme & Rhythm !). Your meter is fine but random as is your rhyme pattern but to me ~ these two factors do not detract from the structure and subject of the poem. It is obviously from your HEART (emotional) rather than your HEAD (clinical) and because of that i (personally) would not change a word ~ it is well honed ! STANZA 1. Memories of embrace ~ pulsates with rhyme & rhythm. S 2. Lovely images good R & R S 3. I felt that HUG ! S 4. A sensual hug ~ lovely. S 5. A Winter hug ~ awesome. S 6. A memorable hug ~ WOW S 7. A lingering hug ~ love them ! S 8. A Family Hug ! I love this verse ! S 9. A Lovers hug ~ sensual ! S 10. An emotional hug ~ I felt that too ! S 11. Memories of Hugs ~ You end where you began ~ full Circle. I really did read ~ sorry i could not offer any meaningful alterations ~ there are none ! More poems please ~ Hugs BRIAN Love the visual !
February 4th, 2017 10:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for your second poem ELIZABETH ~ a beautiful tribute to HUGGING ! There are 11 STANZAS and each one focuses on a different and lovely experience of embrace. I am a Performance Poem so I like Poems with FLOW (Rhyme & Rhythm !). Your meter is fine but random as is your rhyme pattern but to me ~ these two factors do not detract from the structure and subject of the poem. It is obviously from your HEART (emotional) rather than your HEAD (clinical) and because of that i (personally) would not change a word ~ it is well honed ! STANZA 1. Memories of embrace ~ pulsates with rhyme & rhythm. S 2. Lovely images good R & R S 3. I felt that HUG ! S 4. A sensual hug ~ lovely. S 5. A Winter hug ~ awesome. S 6. A memorable hug ~ WOW S 7. A lingering hug ~ love them ! S 8. A Family Hug ! I love this verse ! S 9. A Lovers hug ~ sensual ! S 10. An emotional hug ~ I felt that too ! S 11. Memories of Hugs ~ You end where you began ~ full Circle. I really did read ~ sorry i could not offer any meaningful alterations ~ there are none ! More poems please ~ Hugs BRIAN Love the visual !
February 4th, 2017 10:24
My Favorite Jeans
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ELIZEABETH ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ which as you say is both sweet and casual just like your favorite pair of Jeans. My fave pair are BLACK CHINOS ! You know what they say \"The end justifies the JEANS ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 4th, 2017 08:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ELIZEABETH ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ which as you say is both sweet and casual just like your favorite pair of Jeans. My fave pair are BLACK CHINOS ! You know what they say \"The end justifies the JEANS ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 4th, 2017 08:47
My Favorite Jeans
Corey said:
Hi Elizabethan, this made me think about how much I appreciate my comfortable worn in jeans. It was delightful to read! Thank you.
February 3rd, 2017 22:26
Corey said:
Hi Elizabethan, this made me think about how much I appreciate my comfortable worn in jeans. It was delightful to read! Thank you.
February 3rd, 2017 22:26
