Comments received on poems by Discreation
Light or Dark
Discreation said:
Thanks. That is just what I was trying to do, :)
February 9th, 2018 15:30
Discreation said:
Thanks. That is just what I was trying to do, :)
February 9th, 2018 15:30
I\'m getting There
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
well i enjoyed reading this , so you can\'t be that bad at writing lol :-) you expressed yourself well , so well done . i\'m not sure one poet should compare themselves to another as we are all different on here! so you feel one writer has more talent then you .. how do you know how long they have been writing for , maybe you could become better, not that i am saying you are bad at what you do , infact i like your writings.. but all poets start somewhere , i remember the first poem i ever wrote , compared to how i write now , i would say it was rubbish but then again i am comparing my past work to my current work , different places in time .. keep writing , keep sharing , who knows what you can acheive
February 9th, 2018 05:50
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
well i enjoyed reading this , so you can\'t be that bad at writing lol :-) you expressed yourself well , so well done . i\'m not sure one poet should compare themselves to another as we are all different on here! so you feel one writer has more talent then you .. how do you know how long they have been writing for , maybe you could become better, not that i am saying you are bad at what you do , infact i like your writings.. but all poets start somewhere , i remember the first poem i ever wrote , compared to how i write now , i would say it was rubbish but then again i am comparing my past work to my current work , different places in time .. keep writing , keep sharing , who knows what you can acheive
February 9th, 2018 05:50
Light or Dark
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i like the repetiiton of the words \'\' darkness and light \'\' it definately works well in thiis piece of wriitng
February 9th, 2018 05:41
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i like the repetiiton of the words \'\' darkness and light \'\' it definately works well in thiis piece of wriitng
February 9th, 2018 05:41
Light or Dark
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
interesting and enjoyable read ! :-) nicely done .
February 9th, 2018 05:40
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
interesting and enjoyable read ! :-) nicely done .
February 9th, 2018 05:40
Black and White
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
yes, nothing is simple as just black and white.. great piece of writing :-)
February 9th, 2018 05:36
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
yes, nothing is simple as just black and white.. great piece of writing :-)
February 9th, 2018 05:36
Too much love
Digoclifford_spellbound said:
This poem is a sucker punch to the gut. This is grief. Very freaking powerful.
February 4th, 2018 18:20
Digoclifford_spellbound said:
This poem is a sucker punch to the gut. This is grief. Very freaking powerful.
February 4th, 2018 18:20
I\'m getting There
orchidee said:
A fine write D. C\'mon now, \'Way better than even me\'? You mean, there\'s people that sing better than me?! In that case, it\'s everyone!(heehee).
February 4th, 2018 10:01
orchidee said:
A fine write D. C\'mon now, \'Way better than even me\'? You mean, there\'s people that sing better than me?! In that case, it\'s everyone!(heehee).
February 4th, 2018 10:01
Too much love
P.H.Rose said:
Oh my Discreat....
I LOVE this so much
It is brilliant.....
Sorry I\'ve taken so
Long to look at your work
I will be keeping an
Eye on it in future...
Well done lady !!!
June 20th, 2017 02:02
P.H.Rose said:
Oh my Discreat....
I LOVE this so much
It is brilliant.....
Sorry I\'ve taken so
Long to look at your work
I will be keeping an
Eye on it in future...
Well done lady !!!
June 20th, 2017 02:02
Too much love
The Invisible said:
This is heart breaking, I started tearing up.
June 12th, 2017 14:54
The Invisible said:
This is heart breaking, I started tearing up.
June 12th, 2017 14:54
Too much love
Jeff said:
This is s great write...very well done. Great, great job
June 12th, 2017 12:03
Jeff said:
This is s great write...very well done. Great, great job
June 12th, 2017 12:03
What did I do WRONG
Goldfinch60 said:
Many ask that question, No answer came the reply.
May 22nd, 2017 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Many ask that question, No answer came the reply.
May 22nd, 2017 00:58
The Path
Mello said:
That right there it\'s deep like really deep yo. Good writing.👍
May 17th, 2017 21:16
Mello said:
That right there it\'s deep like really deep yo. Good writing.👍
May 17th, 2017 21:16
The Path
Discreation said:
How poetic, Who knows where those memories go in scientific terms I guess.
May 9th, 2017 21:57
Discreation said:
How poetic, Who knows where those memories go in scientific terms I guess.
May 9th, 2017 21:57
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