Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Give What You Can.
orchidee said:

Argghh! I could have married CV instead - just as ghastly! lol.

August 16th, 2023 02:05

Need To Be Right.
Neville said:

You are most decidedly not wrong sir G .......... Neville

August 16th, 2023 01:55

Give What You Can.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

The simplicity of the language and the repetitive structure contribute to the poem\'s effectiveness in conveying its message clearly and directly.






August 15th, 2023 15:12

Give What You Can.
orchidee said:

Oh nooooo! KP\'s on the front page of a newspaper. Not read all the story yet. Bad enough seeing her pic!

August 15th, 2023 07:24

Give What You Can.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

August 15th, 2023 02:28

Give What You Can.
2781 said:

So true. Love your neighbour as yourself. Times are getting tougher and the governments won\'t cope.

August 15th, 2023 02:07

Give What You Can.
Bobby O said:

They struggle but stay generous others filling pockets copius

August 15th, 2023 01:50

The Final Match.
David Wakeling said:

Its always a great thrill to cheer on your favourite team.This is a great tribute to a great game.Well done

August 14th, 2023 16:52

The Final Match.
orchidee said:

A friend would want Hull to win. He and family live in Kingston area. Maybe not much longer. His retirement is due next year.

August 14th, 2023 01:57

Jazz On A Suumers Day.
Bella Shepard said:

Sounds like you did have \"Sugar in the morning, sugar in the evening, sugar at suppertime\", can you ever get too much? Once again the video is a real toe tapper, love the guy playing the comb, suitecase with little brooms, etc, what a virtuoso. Great write!

August 13th, 2023 14:54

Jazz On A Suumers Day.
Kinsey Peterson said:

this piece almost reads as conversational and i find it quite enticing :)

August 13th, 2023 13:38

Jazz On A Suumers Day.
Bobby O said:

This piece WARMED me. I read it twice it was nice and had the spice of improvisational displays of bold attacks w gentle landing to find exact space in the bars.

August 13th, 2023 03:20

Jazz On A Suumers Day.
Parisab said:

Preservation Hall Jazz Band did it for me! They have been traveling all across the states from New Oroeans-I published Jazz Liberation after going to their concert- sounds like you were transformed after your jazzy day too-thanks for the musical write!

August 13th, 2023 01:57

Jazz On A Suumers Day.
orchidee said:

A great jazzy day for you both!

August 13th, 2023 01:37

Miracles Written By Mary.
Bella Shepard said:

A poet in the making, me thinks! Thank you Mary for sharing this wonderful experience, you and Andy are a match made in heaven!

August 12th, 2023 12:30

Miracles Written By Mary.
BlessedbyGod said:

CONGRATULATIONS MY FRIEND!!!!
love this piece, tell Mary that she did a terrific job!!!!


August 12th, 2023 09:38

Miracles Written By Mary.
Doggerel Dave said:

Did it come in a velvet lined box? Couldn\'t afford to buy one? Nah I forgot - you are saving to buy Osbourne..
You should encourage Mary to register with MPS herself - don\'t want to see you slacking when you put her to work on your page.........

August 12th, 2023 02:55

Miracles Written By Mary.
orchidee said:

Good write Mary and Gold.
Oh dear, troubles at that IOW Prison, I heard. Good job you didn\'t pop in to see my prisoner penfriend.

August 12th, 2023 02:04

Miracles Written By Mary.
Teddy.15 said:

Congratulations to you both, lol on the pen and finding this beautiful lady who brings you all the sun shine and turns out she is a writer too. LoL ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–

August 12th, 2023 01:49

I Do Not Understand.
Parisab said:

Youโ€™re listening to natureโ€™s call and reflecting it back to us-We owe nature so much and she forgives eventually everytime-thanks for the write Finch.

August 11th, 2023 19:45

I Do Not Understand.
Bobby O said:

Kill nothing but time. I might add that to my repertoire of snappy reparteeโ€™., if I may? W your blessing Mr Finch?

August 11th, 2023 14:48

I Do Not Understand.
Teddy.15 said:

A lovely poem dear Andy. ๐Ÿ’– This is what it\'s all about about cherish what beauty we have in our world ๐ŸŒŽโฃ๏ธ

August 11th, 2023 03:16

I Do Not Understand.
orchidee said:

KP and I went for a walk by the river. I chucked her in! lol.

August 11th, 2023 01:54

I Do Not Understand.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

I completely agree . A good writing ) I love nature and yes some people can be very selfish and cruel

I like your last three lines in this poem

We should definitely take care of nature ..but sadly some people donโ€™t care enough

August 11th, 2023 01:17

Flaming Computers!
Sunsetmet said:

Yes how I can relate to this one so much passwords and everything I rather go back to having what I had before more peace of mind

August 10th, 2023 11:21

Tony Hudgell.
Teddy.15 said:

What\'s a boy indeed, I truly believe those treated the worst come out the best ๐Ÿ’–

August 10th, 2023 02:43

Tony Hudgell.
orchidee said:

Yes, amazing!

August 10th, 2023 02:06

Flaming Computers!
Bella Shepard said:

Perfect song Andy, I\'m 100% with you on this one. I don\'t think the Geeks seem to understand that the simplest way is the best way. It will invariably take longer to jump through all the hoops and screens, than the time it takes for a simple phone call, if you can get a real person. Thank you for the rant, I feel better!

August 9th, 2023 13:57

Flaming Computers!
orchidee said:

Say nice things to it - or it will cut us orf MPS, for example - like it has done before. Doh!

August 9th, 2023 08:18

Flaming Computers!
Teddy.15 said:

I\'m not such a fan of computers lol ๐Ÿ’–

August 9th, 2023 08:06



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