Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Can We Live Happily.
sorenbarrett said:

Yes I have noticed that those who have less tend to give more. A great message and nicely written.

August 17th, 2023 23:33

Can We Live Happily.
Bella Shepard said:

You present a question that doesn\'t seem to have a logical answer, since logic is something that eludes us, when we live in a world of plenty and yet allow those who have so little, to go with out. Great Write my friend!

August 17th, 2023 11:43

Can We Live Happily.
Bella Shepard said:

You present a question that doesn\'t seem to have a logical answer, since logic is something that eludes us, when we live in a world of plenty and yet allow those who have so little, to go with out. Great Write my friend!

August 17th, 2023 11:42

Can We Live Happily.
Doggerel Dave said:

Better ask the buggers with all the dosh.

August 17th, 2023 05:04

Can We Live Happily.
Neville said:



I so wish .. and wish that so would everybody sir .. ⭐

August 17th, 2023 02:24

Can We Live Happily.
LIZ said:

I\'m with you! It starts with us!

August 17th, 2023 02:03

Can We Live Happily.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.
Bit unfortunate clip - of course Doddy was happy, I say, hiding all that money under his mattress, while everyone else paid their taxes. Doh!
And my recent poem: \'He couldn\'t take it with him!\'.

August 17th, 2023 01:49

Need To Be Right.
Bigguy said:

Really interesting subject matter. It would be cool to see further exploration on the topic in other poems.
I enjoyed it!

August 16th, 2023 21:54

Give What You Can.
Neville said:



it takes two to tango but it takes all sorts to make the world go round ..

August 16th, 2023 12:49

Need To Be Right.
Doggerel Dave said:

Got that right Andy.

August 16th, 2023 07:38

Need To Be Right.
sorenbarrett said:

So few people can seer that there are more than one side to an issue. Often there is no right or wrong, black or white only shades of gray. A good write with some interesting rhyme

August 16th, 2023 06:59

Need To Be Right.
LIZ said:

I agree Andy! Everything is easier when we\'re able to see things from another\'s perspective. Respect!!!!

August 16th, 2023 06:55

Need To Be Right.
John Prophet said:

So true Andy. Many times we don’t hear but just wait for the moment to jump in

August 16th, 2023 06:25

Need To Be Right.
orchidee said:

You are right! :)

August 16th, 2023 02:07

Give What You Can.
orchidee said:

Argghh! I could have married CV instead - just as ghastly! lol.

August 16th, 2023 02:05

Need To Be Right.
Neville said:

You are most decidedly not wrong sir G .......... Neville

August 16th, 2023 01:55

Give What You Can.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

The simplicity of the language and the repetitive structure contribute to the poem\'s effectiveness in conveying its message clearly and directly.






August 15th, 2023 15:12

Give What You Can.
orchidee said:

Oh nooooo! KP\'s on the front page of a newspaper. Not read all the story yet. Bad enough seeing her pic!

August 15th, 2023 07:24

Give What You Can.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

August 15th, 2023 02:28

Give What You Can.
2781 said:

So true. Love your neighbour as yourself. Times are getting tougher and the governments won\'t cope.

August 15th, 2023 02:07

Give What You Can.
Bobby O said:

They struggle but stay generous others filling pockets copius

August 15th, 2023 01:50

The Final Match.
David Wakeling said:

Its always a great thrill to cheer on your favourite team.This is a great tribute to a great game.Well done

August 14th, 2023 16:52

The Final Match.
orchidee said:

A friend would want Hull to win. He and family live in Kingston area. Maybe not much longer. His retirement is due next year.

August 14th, 2023 01:57

Jazz On A Suumers Day.
Bella Shepard said:

Sounds like you did have \"Sugar in the morning, sugar in the evening, sugar at suppertime\", can you ever get too much? Once again the video is a real toe tapper, love the guy playing the comb, suitecase with little brooms, etc, what a virtuoso. Great write!

August 13th, 2023 14:54

Jazz On A Suumers Day.
Kinsey Peterson said:

this piece almost reads as conversational and i find it quite enticing :)

August 13th, 2023 13:38

Jazz On A Suumers Day.
Bobby O said:

This piece WARMED me. I read it twice it was nice and had the spice of improvisational displays of bold attacks w gentle landing to find exact space in the bars.

August 13th, 2023 03:20

Jazz On A Suumers Day.
Parisab said:

Preservation Hall Jazz Band did it for me! They have been traveling all across the states from New Oroeans-I published Jazz Liberation after going to their concert- sounds like you were transformed after your jazzy day too-thanks for the musical write!

August 13th, 2023 01:57

Jazz On A Suumers Day.
orchidee said:

A great jazzy day for you both!

August 13th, 2023 01:37

Miracles Written By Mary.
Bella Shepard said:

A poet in the making, me thinks! Thank you Mary for sharing this wonderful experience, you and Andy are a match made in heaven!

August 12th, 2023 12:30

Miracles Written By Mary.
BlessedbyGod said:

CONGRATULATIONS MY FRIEND!!!!
love this piece, tell Mary that she did a terrific job!!!!


August 12th, 2023 09:38



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