Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
The Lost Idea.
orchidee said:
Would that be the poem you were going to write tomorrow, as in the thing I never get right: \'Yesterday was the day you worried about tomorrow\', is it?! lol.
August 15th, 2025 02:49
orchidee said:
Would that be the poem you were going to write tomorrow, as in the thing I never get right: \'Yesterday was the day you worried about tomorrow\', is it?! lol.
August 15th, 2025 02:49
The Lost Idea.
Neville said:
Somethings just happen .. Other things happen for the best .. Neville
August 15th, 2025 02:15
Neville said:
Somethings just happen .. Other things happen for the best .. Neville
August 15th, 2025 02:15
Where Had His Mind Gone?
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad write that will be familier to so many, nicely expressed
August 14th, 2025 05:37
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad write that will be familier to so many, nicely expressed
August 14th, 2025 05:37
Where Had His Mind Gone?
sorenbarrett said:
Mental changes as sad or more so than physical changes a tragic write Gold
August 14th, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
Mental changes as sad or more so than physical changes a tragic write Gold
August 14th, 2025 03:54
Where Had His Mind Gone?
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Happened to me. I wrote to them in a Care Home and they thought I was persecuting them.
August 14th, 2025 01:59
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Happened to me. I wrote to them in a Care Home and they thought I was persecuting them.
August 14th, 2025 01:59
Along The Seashore.
Poetic Licence said:
The cleansing freshness of that salt air, enjoyed the read
August 13th, 2025 05:47
Poetic Licence said:
The cleansing freshness of that salt air, enjoyed the read
August 13th, 2025 05:47
Along The Seashore.
sorenbarrett said:
Andy this is one of my favorite of yours a lovely piece and a fave
August 13th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
Andy this is one of my favorite of yours a lovely piece and a fave
August 13th, 2025 03:56
How Can They Afford Them?
Poetic Licence said:
I agree with the point raised but it goes much further than that, and all generations it applies to, poignant write
August 12th, 2025 06:28
Poetic Licence said:
I agree with the point raised but it goes much further than that, and all generations it applies to, poignant write
August 12th, 2025 06:28
How Can They Afford Them?
Teddy.15 said:
The label has always been there even when I was a child, but now we have influencers who by the way can stay in their beds all day to do it. Our world needs to make some changes my son\'s generation are already hoping to work on YouTube or Instagram, it\'s a great worry that adults accept this behaviour and buy the iPhones for the kids. Yes we should all remember that George at Asda also have great clothes. Or so they did when I was living in the UK 🌹 a great discussion there I\'ve had a rant too.
August 12th, 2025 05:51
Teddy.15 said:
The label has always been there even when I was a child, but now we have influencers who by the way can stay in their beds all day to do it. Our world needs to make some changes my son\'s generation are already hoping to work on YouTube or Instagram, it\'s a great worry that adults accept this behaviour and buy the iPhones for the kids. Yes we should all remember that George at Asda also have great clothes. Or so they did when I was living in the UK 🌹 a great discussion there I\'ve had a rant too.
August 12th, 2025 05:51
How Can They Afford Them?
sorenbarrett said:
It is funny how people assign priorities a good write Andy
August 12th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
It is funny how people assign priorities a good write Andy
August 12th, 2025 03:52
How Can They Afford Them?
orchidee said:
Too many of them look horrid, I think. I have a heart tattoo of KP on me - can\'t remove it, no matter how hard I try! lol.
August 12th, 2025 02:17
orchidee said:
Too many of them look horrid, I think. I have a heart tattoo of KP on me - can\'t remove it, no matter how hard I try! lol.
August 12th, 2025 02:17
The Optimist.
Poetic Licence said:
I wish more people myself included had your very positive outlook on life, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 07:59
Poetic Licence said:
I wish more people myself included had your very positive outlook on life, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 07:59
The Optimist.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Andy. Good read.
We could debate that optimism and pessimism are two halves of a whole.
But that would require wine and cheese.
August 11th, 2025 07:33
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Andy. Good read.
We could debate that optimism and pessimism are two halves of a whole.
But that would require wine and cheese.
August 11th, 2025 07:33
The Optimist.
arqios said:
This poem speaks with clear-eyed warmth about choosing to see joy and goodness, even in a cynical, blame-driven world. It balances gentle idealism with awareness of the forces that undermine it, rejecting despair in favour of an active, hopeful stance. The closing twist on Stevie Smith’s line becomes a rallying cry to live fully in fleeting moments.
August 11th, 2025 04:19
arqios said:
This poem speaks with clear-eyed warmth about choosing to see joy and goodness, even in a cynical, blame-driven world. It balances gentle idealism with awareness of the forces that undermine it, rejecting despair in favour of an active, hopeful stance. The closing twist on Stevie Smith’s line becomes a rallying cry to live fully in fleeting moments.
August 11th, 2025 04:19
The Optimist.
sorenbarrett said:
A good write Andy the body focus\' on the pain not what feels good and as such we are miserable when we could be grateful that most of us feels well. A great message to a world in pain.
August 11th, 2025 03:38
sorenbarrett said:
A good write Andy the body focus\' on the pain not what feels good and as such we are miserable when we could be grateful that most of us feels well. A great message to a world in pain.
August 11th, 2025 03:38
Driving To The Moon.
Bella Shepard said:
Lucky you! I stepped out for my early morning walk today, and there was the full moon glowing, it took my breath away. I can fully understand why you had to write this poem, and so very glad you did. I have to thank you for the Diana Krall video of Fly Me To The Moon. I found it on You Tube with lyrics, and I can\'t wait to play it in my Thursday music group at the nursing home so we can all sing it together. A very Happy Sunday my friend!
August 10th, 2025 09:54
Bella Shepard said:
Lucky you! I stepped out for my early morning walk today, and there was the full moon glowing, it took my breath away. I can fully understand why you had to write this poem, and so very glad you did. I have to thank you for the Diana Krall video of Fly Me To The Moon. I found it on You Tube with lyrics, and I can\'t wait to play it in my Thursday music group at the nursing home so we can all sing it together. A very Happy Sunday my friend!
August 10th, 2025 09:54
Driving To The Moon.
Poetic Licence said:
We had very bright with red tinge, beautiful, enjoyed the read
August 10th, 2025 07:05
Poetic Licence said:
We had very bright with red tinge, beautiful, enjoyed the read
August 10th, 2025 07:05
Driving To The Moon.
Jerry Reynolds said:
And it was a beautiful moon last night, Andy. Nice reflection.
August 10th, 2025 06:30
Jerry Reynolds said:
And it was a beautiful moon last night, Andy. Nice reflection.
August 10th, 2025 06:30
Driving To The Moon.
Doggerel Dave said:
Felt the harmony, your day heightened to a new level by the moon\'s presence; conveyed beautifully in your piece, Andy.
August 10th, 2025 05:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Felt the harmony, your day heightened to a new level by the moon\'s presence; conveyed beautifully in your piece, Andy.
August 10th, 2025 05:52
Driving To The Moon.
Teddy.15 said:
The moon was beautiful on the island too. Such lovely imagery you write. 🌹
August 10th, 2025 03:57
Teddy.15 said:
The moon was beautiful on the island too. Such lovely imagery you write. 🌹
August 10th, 2025 03:57
Driving To The Moon.
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes nature aligns the stars, even the moon, to light our way. Very picturesque Andy
August 10th, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes nature aligns the stars, even the moon, to light our way. Very picturesque Andy
August 10th, 2025 03:54
Pedantry Limerick.
Kevin Hulme said:
Can\'t beat a good Limerick. Great stuff.
August 9th, 2025 12:49
Kevin Hulme said:
Can\'t beat a good Limerick. Great stuff.
August 9th, 2025 12:49
Pedantry Limerick.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Andy. A lot of fun for me.
August 9th, 2025 06:12
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Andy. A lot of fun for me.
August 9th, 2025 06:12
Pedantry Limerick.
Neville said:
That\'s not decrying, dat\'s de spirit talkin .. Neville
August 9th, 2025 02:55
Neville said:
That\'s not decrying, dat\'s de spirit talkin .. Neville
August 9th, 2025 02:55
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