Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
The Model Boat.
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one Andy. The rhyme and meter are good but this is no surprise fore we know that you are a most capable poet it is the message and its subtleties that got my attention and make it a fave my friend. Woven into this story is a message that deserves contemplation and I will not spoil it for others but it certainly is worth the thought.
September 29th, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one Andy. The rhyme and meter are good but this is no surprise fore we know that you are a most capable poet it is the message and its subtleties that got my attention and make it a fave my friend. Woven into this story is a message that deserves contemplation and I will not spoil it for others but it certainly is worth the thought.
September 29th, 2026 04:30
The Model Boat.
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Reminds me of a boat I had as a child, good write
September 29th, 2026 03:26
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Reminds me of a boat I had as a child, good write
September 29th, 2026 03:26
The Model Boat.
Doggerel Dave said:
A well told tale of creativity loss and compassion, Andy. I liked this one a lot.
September 29th, 2026 01:38
Doggerel Dave said:
A well told tale of creativity loss and compassion, Andy. I liked this one a lot.
September 29th, 2026 01:38
Never Come Again.
Kevin Hulme said:
Fine Poem. Good film. And Grace Kelly.
September 28th, 2026 18:19
Kevin Hulme said:
Fine Poem. Good film. And Grace Kelly.
September 28th, 2026 18:19
Never Come Again.
arqios said:
Ah that’s a real classic film right there, Andy! 🙏🏻🕊️
September 28th, 2026 06:32
arqios said:
Ah that’s a real classic film right there, Andy! 🙏🏻🕊️
September 28th, 2026 06:32
Never Come Again.
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is Andy a fist and final performance in each act a jaz tune improvised and composed all in the same move until the curtain falls. Nicely said my friend.
September 28th, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is Andy a fist and final performance in each act a jaz tune improvised and composed all in the same move until the curtain falls. Nicely said my friend.
September 28th, 2026 04:21
Never Come Again.
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
We only have one chance my friend
September 28th, 2026 03:48
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
We only have one chance my friend
September 28th, 2026 03:48
Never Come Again.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. Though that Bing was a monster in disguise in his private life and family.
September 28th, 2026 02:33
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. Though that Bing was a monster in disguise in his private life and family.
September 28th, 2026 02:33
Fewer Days To Come.
Teddy.15 said:
Beautifully said dear Andy, enjoy each moment because they are unique and precious, and not guaranteed tomorrow. 🌹
September 27th, 2026 07:36
Teddy.15 said:
Beautifully said dear Andy, enjoy each moment because they are unique and precious, and not guaranteed tomorrow. 🌹
September 27th, 2026 07:36
Always Stay Thankful.
sorenbarrett said:
Being grateful improves the quality of life both for those around you and for yourself as well. Having a choice to live a happy life or one of want and need I choose the first. Nice Andy
September 27th, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
Being grateful improves the quality of life both for those around you and for yourself as well. Having a choice to live a happy life or one of want and need I choose the first. Nice Andy
September 27th, 2026 03:54
Always Stay Thankful.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. A pity I\'m still here to sing. Aww, no one\'s thankful for that! lol.
September 27th, 2026 02:16
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. A pity I\'m still here to sing. Aww, no one\'s thankful for that! lol.
September 27th, 2026 02:16
Equality In Light And Dark.
arqios said:
The in-between times are the best 👍🏻🕊️
September 26th, 2026 06:31
arqios said:
The in-between times are the best 👍🏻🕊️
September 26th, 2026 06:31
Equality In Light And Dark.
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely combining of poetry with nature, the cosmos and a wish for love and peace. Very bright and calming at the same time my friend.
September 26th, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely combining of poetry with nature, the cosmos and a wish for love and peace. Very bright and calming at the same time my friend.
September 26th, 2026 04:12
Equality In Light And Dark.
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A beautiful sight
September 26th, 2026 03:22
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A beautiful sight
September 26th, 2026 03:22
Nature\'s Cure-all.
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
nature a beautiful way to unwind
September 25th, 2026 07:04
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
nature a beautiful way to unwind
September 25th, 2026 07:04
Nature\'s Cure-all.
sorenbarrett said:
Nature the best cure for modern society and its after effects. Nicely written Gold
September 25th, 2026 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
Nature the best cure for modern society and its after effects. Nicely written Gold
September 25th, 2026 04:54
Nature\'s Cure-all.
orchidee said:
I had a ginsh or twosh, now I can\'t shay \'The sixth sheikh\'s sheep is sick\' or summat like thatsh! Cut the wooden acting, says Fido to me! lol.
I would pop round for a tipple with you, but I would only add water to it. lol.
September 25th, 2026 02:36
orchidee said:
I had a ginsh or twosh, now I can\'t shay \'The sixth sheikh\'s sheep is sick\' or summat like thatsh! Cut the wooden acting, says Fido to me! lol.
I would pop round for a tipple with you, but I would only add water to it. lol.
September 25th, 2026 02:36
Shivani And Davinder Sonnet.
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful gesture and gift as a poem of a new beginning. Nicely written in beautiful form and rhyme a most lovely sonnet set in good meter as well. Nicely done Andy
September 24th, 2026 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful gesture and gift as a poem of a new beginning. Nicely written in beautiful form and rhyme a most lovely sonnet set in good meter as well. Nicely done Andy
September 24th, 2026 03:43
Shivani And Davinder Sonnet.
Doggerel Dave said:
If Shivani and Davinder have a wedding album, then I bet that sonnet finds a prominent place there.
September 24th, 2026 01:43
Doggerel Dave said:
If Shivani and Davinder have a wedding album, then I bet that sonnet finds a prominent place there.
September 24th, 2026 01:43
Shivani And Davinder Sonnet.
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
may it bring them a long and happy marriage
September 24th, 2026 01:17
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
may it bring them a long and happy marriage
September 24th, 2026 01:17
Fewer Days To Come.
sorenbarrett said:
A great message carpe diem. If one believes there are a set number of days that one has then they as time are invaluable and should be spent very carefully. A wonderful write my friend
September 23rd, 2026 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
A great message carpe diem. If one believes there are a set number of days that one has then they as time are invaluable and should be spent very carefully. A wonderful write my friend
September 23rd, 2026 04:11
Fewer Days To Come.
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Tomorrow never comes, its always today
September 23rd, 2026 02:51
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Tomorrow never comes, its always today
September 23rd, 2026 02:51
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