Comments received on poems by AudreyB
Boundless.
smallest_stars said:
What a lovely poem. It’s hard to read knowing what comes later.
“I feel so at ease
Your touch is my only plea”
I love this couplet. Such a softness to it.
April 6th, 2018 08:46
smallest_stars said:
What a lovely poem. It’s hard to read knowing what comes later.
“I feel so at ease
Your touch is my only plea”
I love this couplet. Such a softness to it.
April 6th, 2018 08:46
And one year later.
smallest_stars said:
Wow. What an intense poem. I’ve been there but I couldn’t express like this.
I loved this line:
“I missed the intimacy we once shared in how you always smiled when you heard my voice.”
Such sweetness in the middle pain. It really stuck out to me.
Great write!
April 5th, 2018 20:19
smallest_stars said:
Wow. What an intense poem. I’ve been there but I couldn’t express like this.
I loved this line:
“I missed the intimacy we once shared in how you always smiled when you heard my voice.”
Such sweetness in the middle pain. It really stuck out to me.
Great write!
April 5th, 2018 20:19
Empty picture frames
Preciosa Martin said:
I love your poem ,very good choice of words., .
September 4th, 2017 22:52
Preciosa Martin said:
I love your poem ,very good choice of words., .
September 4th, 2017 22:52
Empty picture frames
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Life without a Lover is like a black white photo that has fallen out of the frame, face down.
September 4th, 2017 22:06
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Life without a Lover is like a black white photo that has fallen out of the frame, face down.
September 4th, 2017 22:06
void vs void
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I hold you in my arms and rock you
A wee babe through and through
God sees us all as just that....
Little plump babes cute and fat (in a baby sort of way)
He comes to us not directly; forget those whom peddle a \"wonder worker like magician\"
But He\'s there in the caring voices of strangers and children and in all of creation.
So please do keep writing, exploring space and time
Trust me when I rhyme you\'ll soon find a lover in the almighty sublime.
-Gary Edward Geraci for AudryB only
June 18th, 2017 22:40
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I hold you in my arms and rock you
A wee babe through and through
God sees us all as just that....
Little plump babes cute and fat (in a baby sort of way)
He comes to us not directly; forget those whom peddle a \"wonder worker like magician\"
But He\'s there in the caring voices of strangers and children and in all of creation.
So please do keep writing, exploring space and time
Trust me when I rhyme you\'ll soon find a lover in the almighty sublime.
-Gary Edward Geraci for AudryB only
June 18th, 2017 22:40
void vs void
Discreation said:
I get you\'re story. i understand what you might of been feeling when you wrote this. i think it\'s beautiful.
June 18th, 2017 22:22
Discreation said:
I get you\'re story. i understand what you might of been feeling when you wrote this. i think it\'s beautiful.
June 18th, 2017 22:22
Pisces counterpart
Reivax Camlost said:
You paint a beautiful picture of yourself and your boyfriend relaxing at sea. If baseball is the American pastime, then beach vacations must be the American Dream.
A solid poem, not focusing overly much on silly rhymes or restricting formulae, rather remaining simply expressive and heartfelt.
Lol, I\'m a Sagittarius... I often feel as if I have no natural partner, and end up lolling into spells of my melancholy nature... but this poem fills me with gladness, all the same!
February 25th, 2017 16:11
Reivax Camlost said:
You paint a beautiful picture of yourself and your boyfriend relaxing at sea. If baseball is the American pastime, then beach vacations must be the American Dream.
A solid poem, not focusing overly much on silly rhymes or restricting formulae, rather remaining simply expressive and heartfelt.
Lol, I\'m a Sagittarius... I often feel as if I have no natural partner, and end up lolling into spells of my melancholy nature... but this poem fills me with gladness, all the same!
February 25th, 2017 16:11
Boundless.
Silvertulip said:
That was an amazing write. The open lines had my attention immediately. Thanks for sharing~ silver
February 25th, 2017 08:14
Silvertulip said:
That was an amazing write. The open lines had my attention immediately. Thanks for sharing~ silver
February 25th, 2017 08:14
Boundless.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME AUDRY ~ Love the satisfied coolness of your portrait and this is reflected in your perfect love poem ! To find such perfect satisfaction in love ~ when one is Young ~ is a great Blessing ! It is not SELFISHNESS it is just the joy of TRUE LOVE. Every Blessing ~ thanks for Caring & Sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 25th, 2017 06:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME AUDRY ~ Love the satisfied coolness of your portrait and this is reflected in your perfect love poem ! To find such perfect satisfaction in love ~ when one is Young ~ is a great Blessing ! It is not SELFISHNESS it is just the joy of TRUE LOVE. Every Blessing ~ thanks for Caring & Sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 25th, 2017 06:19
