Comments received on poems by ---mari0
Smile
Heather T said:
I can\'t imagine that you don\'t spark smiles without even saying a word. This piece is lovely in its simplicity.
July 30th, 2017 14:15
Heather T said:
I can\'t imagine that you don\'t spark smiles without even saying a word. This piece is lovely in its simplicity.
July 30th, 2017 14:15
Smile
Accidental Poet said:
One good smile deserves another. Keep those smiles coming.
July 30th, 2017 06:39
Accidental Poet said:
One good smile deserves another. Keep those smiles coming.
July 30th, 2017 06:39
Someday
Garry said:
Excellent. Slowly working my way through all your poems and it\'s time well spent.
March 26th, 2017 22:33
Garry said:
Excellent. Slowly working my way through all your poems and it\'s time well spent.
March 26th, 2017 22:33
(a)live
Garry said:
Very clever, very true. Beatifully expressed and presented.
March 26th, 2017 22:30
Garry said:
Very clever, very true. Beatifully expressed and presented.
March 26th, 2017 22:30
Chapters
Augustus said:
I gather that you are about to cross the Rubicon or so to speak; after that it\'s all or nothing. Interesting form. Well done.
March 26th, 2017 21:33
Augustus said:
I gather that you are about to cross the Rubicon or so to speak; after that it\'s all or nothing. Interesting form. Well done.
March 26th, 2017 21:33
(a)live
MendedFences27 said:
A fine distinction, finely presented. To be living is not be alive, although one requires the other. However, we would all choose \"the full range of emotions\"
over just barely living. Great poem. - Phil A.
March 18th, 2017 22:21
MendedFences27 said:
A fine distinction, finely presented. To be living is not be alive, although one requires the other. However, we would all choose \"the full range of emotions\"
over just barely living. Great poem. - Phil A.
March 18th, 2017 22:21
Racing
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I loved this porm, hun....It is straight up, perfect length, and portrays a powerful emotion to how it would feel to be in the shoes of one whos man asked them about their illness....Very, Very well done
March 16th, 2017 21:52
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I loved this porm, hun....It is straight up, perfect length, and portrays a powerful emotion to how it would feel to be in the shoes of one whos man asked them about their illness....Very, Very well done
March 16th, 2017 21:52
Racing
MendedFences27 said:
I was going to say that it\'s between you and him, but anxiety ( if that is all it is?) is no joke. You shouldn\'t be feeling that way all the time. I think most people only feel anxiety, on rare occasions.
Your poetry is beautiful, perhaps your anxiety can be relieved if you were to choose a happier subject. Try something in Nature to write about. Just a suggestion. - Phil A.
March 16th, 2017 21:20
MendedFences27 said:
I was going to say that it\'s between you and him, but anxiety ( if that is all it is?) is no joke. You shouldn\'t be feeling that way all the time. I think most people only feel anxiety, on rare occasions.
Your poetry is beautiful, perhaps your anxiety can be relieved if you were to choose a happier subject. Try something in Nature to write about. Just a suggestion. - Phil A.
March 16th, 2017 21:20
Someday
Tris Eaton said:
I love this, such a positive way of looking at it. Brought a smile to my face, very nice.
March 15th, 2017 22:42
Tris Eaton said:
I love this, such a positive way of looking at it. Brought a smile to my face, very nice.
March 15th, 2017 22:42
Space
Augustus said:
As the lines of your poem are separated you are separated from your love. Or perhaps you are wandering if indeed you are both on the same page. Love is very complicated. Enjoyed. The form was unique.
March 12th, 2017 19:10
Augustus said:
As the lines of your poem are separated you are separated from your love. Or perhaps you are wandering if indeed you are both on the same page. Love is very complicated. Enjoyed. The form was unique.
March 12th, 2017 19:10
Space
MendedFences27 said:
Worlds apart, emotionally or physically? It doesn\'t matter, they are the same. You could be in the same room and be worlds apart. If it is a separation by physical distance, there is no cure except reunion. From your poem I first believed it to be a physical separation (from how you separated the\"same moon same stars\"), but your ending said \"it feels\" and so I feel like it is more emotional. I tell you this so you can determine if it reads as you would want it to. The form you use in this and another of yours that I read is unique and original, using space to amplify the intent of your writing. Well enough from me, An enjoyable write. - Phil A.
March 12th, 2017 16:02
MendedFences27 said:
Worlds apart, emotionally or physically? It doesn\'t matter, they are the same. You could be in the same room and be worlds apart. If it is a separation by physical distance, there is no cure except reunion. From your poem I first believed it to be a physical separation (from how you separated the\"same moon same stars\"), but your ending said \"it feels\" and so I feel like it is more emotional. I tell you this so you can determine if it reads as you would want it to. The form you use in this and another of yours that I read is unique and original, using space to amplify the intent of your writing. Well enough from me, An enjoyable write. - Phil A.
March 12th, 2017 16:02
Wait
MendedFences27 said:
Brilliant work. Loved the format and the message. Missing or having lost someone, makes love seem impossible, but it can draw two even closer after the separation is over, for you never again want to suffer that pain. A great write. - Phil A.
March 12th, 2017 11:40
MendedFences27 said:
Brilliant work. Loved the format and the message. Missing or having lost someone, makes love seem impossible, but it can draw two even closer after the separation is over, for you never again want to suffer that pain. A great write. - Phil A.
March 12th, 2017 11:40
Question
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind is so powerful but the heart is more so with a person you love, the bodies come after both love and heart. Good write.
March 10th, 2017 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind is so powerful but the heart is more so with a person you love, the bodies come after both love and heart. Good write.
March 10th, 2017 02:49
Question
Augustus said:
Sex is all about the mind. But nice to put that out as a poetic question. Enjoyed.
March 9th, 2017 22:58
Augustus said:
Sex is all about the mind. But nice to put that out as a poetic question. Enjoyed.
March 9th, 2017 22:58
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