Comments received on poems by AmbiguousOdist
A Whimsical Informative Bon Mot Canonized Notorious July, 4th...
Frank Prem said:
Happy 4th July, but I have to tell you this is very difficult to read. I wonder if you\'ve considered the audience for your work?
Cheers.
July 1st, 2017 03:25
Frank Prem said:
Happy 4th July, but I have to tell you this is very difficult to read. I wonder if you\'ve considered the audience for your work?
Cheers.
July 1st, 2017 03:25
I, The Dark Horse Adding Insult To Injury
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed
May 8th, 2017 07:04
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed
May 8th, 2017 07:04
CRITICAL PIVOTAL MOMENTS
swingline said:
My father served in WWII in the Pacific . He was seventeen when he went in and served four years . He never talk to me about anything in the war . Not the first word . His younger brother served in Korea and came back a mental wreck . He had PTSD s bad he could not stay in relationshis and often spentry months in VA Hospitals . His even younger brother fought in Vietnam and was exposed to agent orange and shortly after his return died of cancer but the VA refused to say agent orange was responsible . I had an aqua intense that was given LSD as a test dummy in the Army without their know ledge . That so disturbed him he went insane and committed sicide . My best high school friend was a Marine at seventeen and served in Vietnam and came home in a sealed casket not recommended to be opeed . So many tragedies . So little governmental appreciation .
May 4th, 2017 20:22
swingline said:
My father served in WWII in the Pacific . He was seventeen when he went in and served four years . He never talk to me about anything in the war . Not the first word . His younger brother served in Korea and came back a mental wreck . He had PTSD s bad he could not stay in relationshis and often spentry months in VA Hospitals . His even younger brother fought in Vietnam and was exposed to agent orange and shortly after his return died of cancer but the VA refused to say agent orange was responsible . I had an aqua intense that was given LSD as a test dummy in the Army without their know ledge . That so disturbed him he went insane and committed sicide . My best high school friend was a Marine at seventeen and served in Vietnam and came home in a sealed casket not recommended to be opeed . So many tragedies . So little governmental appreciation .
May 4th, 2017 20:22
An Earnest Reflection About The Lack Of Humanness That\'s Transitory
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed
May 1st, 2017 13:20
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed
May 1st, 2017 13:20
\"EACH AND EVERY GODDAMN CURSED DAY
orchidee said:
Well, you did warn us at least. Erm - no comment on this!
April 30th, 2017 01:34
orchidee said:
Well, you did warn us at least. Erm - no comment on this!
April 30th, 2017 01:34
FORSAKEN SAUCIUS BELLATOR
willyweed said:
I just got out a VA hospital after a month of trying to find and regain my sanity. I hear your cry. I have PTSD and I feel sad for your pain. I know how you feel. USMC 2/5 infantry regiment 1st mar div
Vietnam 1968-69 GOD bless you
March 14th, 2017 16:03
willyweed said:
I just got out a VA hospital after a month of trying to find and regain my sanity. I hear your cry. I have PTSD and I feel sad for your pain. I know how you feel. USMC 2/5 infantry regiment 1st mar div
Vietnam 1968-69 GOD bless you
March 14th, 2017 16:03
