Comments received on poems by alisha
first love
FredPeyer said:
Well written, alisha! There is a lot of emotion between the lines. There also seems to be only one solution: It\'s time to move on....
November 13th, 2017 16:21
FredPeyer said:
Well written, alisha! There is a lot of emotion between the lines. There also seems to be only one solution: It\'s time to move on....
November 13th, 2017 16:21
save me
malubotelho said:
I was consulting my heart to see what to say about your poem. Could not find a thing. I wish I could transfer the feelings I have in my heart about life and its profound meaning. To live it better one need to observe, admire, live and love each moment. Even when it seems it is not so graceful if you stop your thoughts and just observe it without judgment you can deeply find the beautiful side of that moment. Gracefully or not.
June 19th, 2017 09:54
malubotelho said:
I was consulting my heart to see what to say about your poem. Could not find a thing. I wish I could transfer the feelings I have in my heart about life and its profound meaning. To live it better one need to observe, admire, live and love each moment. Even when it seems it is not so graceful if you stop your thoughts and just observe it without judgment you can deeply find the beautiful side of that moment. Gracefully or not.
June 19th, 2017 09:54
save me
Goldfinch60 said:
Life does not exist if you are dead and your life is there before you, live it to the full.
June 19th, 2017 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Life does not exist if you are dead and your life is there before you, live it to the full.
June 19th, 2017 00:35
it hurts
Allan J. Renaldo said:
Your poetry is stunning. The way you write, how you make people feel while reading it. It\'s spectacular. Stay strong, love. We\'re all here for you xoxo
June 11th, 2017 14:12
Allan J. Renaldo said:
Your poetry is stunning. The way you write, how you make people feel while reading it. It\'s spectacular. Stay strong, love. We\'re all here for you xoxo
June 11th, 2017 14:12
karma
Hali said:
I love your poetry, I can\'t stop reading! Not only is it beautifully written, but it is so powerful and moving. You seem like such a strong and amazing person, I hope you find what you\'re looking for.
May 30th, 2017 17:40
Hali said:
I love your poetry, I can\'t stop reading! Not only is it beautifully written, but it is so powerful and moving. You seem like such a strong and amazing person, I hope you find what you\'re looking for.
May 30th, 2017 17:40
karma
stephanieh1996 said:
Love love love this you really do write with a lot of great emotion I could seriously read it all day!
March 21st, 2017 22:57
stephanieh1996 said:
Love love love this you really do write with a lot of great emotion I could seriously read it all day!
March 21st, 2017 22:57
it hurts
stephanieh1996 said:
There is so much in life worth living for I\'m glad that you\'ve come this far I don\'t think that anyone should feel like a waste of space you are perfect in your own way as cleche as that may sound I don\'t know you but I am proud of anyone that is trying I will post a poem tomorrow that I wrote the otjer day that i really think you should read I love this poem though your words are so deep and from your own heart and it shows keep going girl you got this!
March 20th, 2017 04:24
stephanieh1996 said:
There is so much in life worth living for I\'m glad that you\'ve come this far I don\'t think that anyone should feel like a waste of space you are perfect in your own way as cleche as that may sound I don\'t know you but I am proud of anyone that is trying I will post a poem tomorrow that I wrote the otjer day that i really think you should read I love this poem though your words are so deep and from your own heart and it shows keep going girl you got this!
March 20th, 2017 04:24
karma
Lana D said:
I just absolutely LOVE this poem...I\'ve read this over & over & I love it more & more! It just describes me to the fullest
March 18th, 2017 21:44
Lana D said:
I just absolutely LOVE this poem...I\'ve read this over & over & I love it more & more! It just describes me to the fullest
March 18th, 2017 21:44
karma
JJCooke said:
Very good read thank you. Can\'t wait for more! Check out my work too please :) as well as the gentleman\'s above.
March 18th, 2017 21:22
JJCooke said:
Very good read thank you. Can\'t wait for more! Check out my work too please :) as well as the gentleman\'s above.
March 18th, 2017 21:22
karma
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ALISHA (lovely name !) Thanks for your first poem which has a lovely positive ring of resolve about it !. It is well structured ~ throbbing with Rhyme & Rhythm ! To some extent we all (M & F) get bullied when we are younger but there comes a time (16+) when we wake up stand firm & fight back ! Love the resolve in your last line ! \"She\'s gonna treat you the way you treated her ~ and it\'s really gonna burn\" Honest Honey i\'m not gonna mess with you !\" Thanks for caring & sharing ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
March 18th, 2017 18:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ALISHA (lovely name !) Thanks for your first poem which has a lovely positive ring of resolve about it !. It is well structured ~ throbbing with Rhyme & Rhythm ! To some extent we all (M & F) get bullied when we are younger but there comes a time (16+) when we wake up stand firm & fight back ! Love the resolve in your last line ! \"She\'s gonna treat you the way you treated her ~ and it\'s really gonna burn\" Honest Honey i\'m not gonna mess with you !\" Thanks for caring & sharing ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
March 18th, 2017 18:41
