Comments received on poems by brandon k f
Slow Death
MaddieJ said:
Your word flow is on point! Thanks for posting. This was a great read.
August 27th, 2019 23:20
MaddieJ said:
Your word flow is on point! Thanks for posting. This was a great read.
August 27th, 2019 23:20
Slow Death
Christina8 said:
This is really good. You convey your feelings well through your poetry!
June 27th, 2019 22:55
Christina8 said:
This is really good. You convey your feelings well through your poetry!
June 27th, 2019 22:55
My pack is heavy
Goldfinch60 said:
Your burden will unload all the time you write great words like those on here.
April 28th, 2017 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Your burden will unload all the time you write great words like those on here.
April 28th, 2017 00:58
The shore is calling
vvnrose said:
Powerful descriptions, enjoyed reading this!
April 15th, 2017 14:25
vvnrose said:
Powerful descriptions, enjoyed reading this!
April 15th, 2017 14:25
Heal
Garry said:
Very good. Really well done. Reads beautifully and with a powerful mesaage.
Enjoyed it. Simple but vivid.
April 13th, 2017 14:41
Garry said:
Very good. Really well done. Reads beautifully and with a powerful mesaage.
Enjoyed it. Simple but vivid.
April 13th, 2017 14:41
Bodega
Pintu Mahakul said:
\"Because the bodega is home
and I\'m with them in this
I\'ve settled ,\" Very beautifully presented poem is shared here. Every line reflects your nice thought.
April 13th, 2017 04:38
Pintu Mahakul said:
\"Because the bodega is home
and I\'m with them in this
I\'ve settled ,\" Very beautifully presented poem is shared here. Every line reflects your nice thought.
April 13th, 2017 04:38
Sad brown eyes
Pintu Mahakul said:
Looking at eyes reflects and perceives love. Wonderful and well crafted poem is shared here my friend.
April 13th, 2017 04:36
Pintu Mahakul said:
Looking at eyes reflects and perceives love. Wonderful and well crafted poem is shared here my friend.
April 13th, 2017 04:36
Bodega
elchupacabra said:
wow that\'s a fantastic piece of writing. that is all.
April 11th, 2017 20:44
elchupacabra said:
wow that\'s a fantastic piece of writing. that is all.
April 11th, 2017 20:44
3 am
Goldfinch60 said:
Many answers to the days problems come to he a 3am in the morning.
April 10th, 2017 08:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Many answers to the days problems come to he a 3am in the morning.
April 10th, 2017 08:03
Father
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write but it is more a senryu than a haiku.
The origins of both say that a haiku should be of nature and the seasons where a senryu is for emotions.
I apologise if I am being pedantic.
April 4th, 2017 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write but it is more a senryu than a haiku.
The origins of both say that a haiku should be of nature and the seasons where a senryu is for emotions.
I apologise if I am being pedantic.
April 4th, 2017 01:33
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