Comments received on poems by Laurie christine
Bridget snow
Laurie christine said:
That was my point teach them what they do to get them away from the people who protect them thanks for your comment
June 6th, 2022 15:41
Laurie christine said:
That was my point teach them what they do to get them away from the people who protect them thanks for your comment
June 6th, 2022 15:41
Bridget snow
Paul Bell said:
Yes, instead of teaching kids about sexuality, teach them how to survive in the concrete jungle. Show them what adults do to lure them away, get them streetwise.
June 5th, 2022 09:56
Paul Bell said:
Yes, instead of teaching kids about sexuality, teach them how to survive in the concrete jungle. Show them what adults do to lure them away, get them streetwise.
June 5th, 2022 09:56
Unaltered
Jerry Reynolds said:
Nicely written. Have a Happy Holiday and Seay Safe.
December 24th, 2020 16:52
Jerry Reynolds said:
Nicely written. Have a Happy Holiday and Seay Safe.
December 24th, 2020 16:52
In My Room
willyweed said:
nice I love children poems, and have written a few. good work Laurie.
April 8th, 2017 14:27
willyweed said:
nice I love children poems, and have written a few. good work Laurie.
April 8th, 2017 14:27
Insanity
Laurie christine said:
Oops! The word gear in the fourth line should have been fear
April 4th, 2017 11:58
Laurie christine said:
Oops! The word gear in the fourth line should have been fear
April 4th, 2017 11:58
Seeds Of Sorrow
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, we all shed those tears..
Welcome to MPS
April 3rd, 2017 04:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, we all shed those tears..
Welcome to MPS
April 3rd, 2017 04:04
Seeds Of Sorrow
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first ~ very elegant ~ poem. It is sad and a reminder the every day SEEDS are planted in our hearts. Sometimes by people ~ sometimes by circumstances ~ they can be \"Seeds of Joy\" but are often \"Seeds of Sorrow\" which destroys our inner Joy and makes us Sad. Thinking of you praying for you ~ BRIAN (UK)
April 3rd, 2017 03:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first ~ very elegant ~ poem. It is sad and a reminder the every day SEEDS are planted in our hearts. Sometimes by people ~ sometimes by circumstances ~ they can be \"Seeds of Joy\" but are often \"Seeds of Sorrow\" which destroys our inner Joy and makes us Sad. Thinking of you praying for you ~ BRIAN (UK)
April 3rd, 2017 03:54
