Comments received on poems by Bryso



Our Future The Past
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. Just a thought though, history was written by the winners, what if the losers were right.

April 12th, 2017 04:09

Our Future The Past
Garry said:

Very nice. I have on a similar theme floating round somewhere. Must brush it down and post it soon.
Enjiyed this.

April 12th, 2017 03:38

Our Future The Past
Bryso said:

This came about as I reflected on a great documentary film my wife and I saw yesterday, \'I Am Not Your Negro\', based on the writings and oratory of James Baldwin, a truly great writer, thinker and speaker. See it! I\'m 70 now and I\'ve been round the block a few times and am aware how the rise of fascism and intolerance in our modern world is the result of a failure to learn from the past.

April 12th, 2017 03:14

Otherness
Garry said:

Very well done. Interesting twist in the last line. Loved it but not sure i understood it.

April 10th, 2017 16:20

On hearing of a dead baby found in a river
willyweed said:

another good piece of writing,

April 6th, 2017 14:13

Power Disconnected
willyweed said:

a stark scene you paint with your words nicely done.WW

April 6th, 2017 14:11

On hearing of a dead baby found in a river
orchidee said:

Thoughtful write. I read of a so-called comedian making jokes about dead babies - monstrous. I doubt I shall ever find him funny again. Not that he was that funny before anyway! doh!

April 2nd, 2017 02:31