Comments received on poems by Bay
Why?
Goldfinch60 said:
Why? The question that can never be answered. Why?
Good write.
April 7th, 2017 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Why? The question that can never be answered. Why?
Good write.
April 7th, 2017 00:54
Why?
willyweed said:
why the greatest question of all time? nice poem. midnight
April 6th, 2017 14:46
willyweed said:
why the greatest question of all time? nice poem. midnight
April 6th, 2017 14:46
Why?
Aamina said:
sounds to me like you\'ve found the true meaning of life and is bringing me back to reality. what a beautifully gentle way of reminding us that life is too short to play with fire. amazing write x
April 6th, 2017 14:37
Aamina said:
sounds to me like you\'ve found the true meaning of life and is bringing me back to reality. what a beautifully gentle way of reminding us that life is too short to play with fire. amazing write x
April 6th, 2017 14:37
Tough Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Unfortunately there are many who do not mange to escape this cruelty, your strength of character does you justice.
April 6th, 2017 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Unfortunately there are many who do not mange to escape this cruelty, your strength of character does you justice.
April 6th, 2017 01:10
Tough Love
willyweed said:
good for you we all only need one ass hole! nice poem M_P
April 5th, 2017 17:59
willyweed said:
good for you we all only need one ass hole! nice poem M_P
April 5th, 2017 17:59
Cottage Angel
P.H.Rose said:
I love this .... it is really
Very beautiful.. but please
May I make a suggestion
And please don\'t get cross
With me, I thought of a cpl
Of things as I read it...
By all means leave it exactly
As it is but could I just put..
At the well.. \" but down down he
Fell, our beautiful little Kyle \"
And at the end...
\"For this cottage small angel, to take her to her final date\"
It was just a thought...
Welcome to MPS....
April 3rd, 2017 07:59
P.H.Rose said:
I love this .... it is really
Very beautiful.. but please
May I make a suggestion
And please don\'t get cross
With me, I thought of a cpl
Of things as I read it...
By all means leave it exactly
As it is but could I just put..
At the well.. \" but down down he
Fell, our beautiful little Kyle \"
And at the end...
\"For this cottage small angel, to take her to her final date\"
It was just a thought...
Welcome to MPS....
April 3rd, 2017 07:59
Cottage Angel
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BAYLI ~ Thanks for you very poignant first poem. Although SAD ~ this poem has a haunting beauty ~ which grips me more each time I read it ~ very haunting indeed. I am a performance poet and it has excellent rhyme & rhythm (a proper poem) and would make a good folk song. It is a very beautiful tribute to KYLE ~ congratulations ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
April 3rd, 2017 04:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BAYLI ~ Thanks for you very poignant first poem. Although SAD ~ this poem has a haunting beauty ~ which grips me more each time I read it ~ very haunting indeed. I am a performance poet and it has excellent rhyme & rhythm (a proper poem) and would make a good folk song. It is a very beautiful tribute to KYLE ~ congratulations ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
April 3rd, 2017 04:04
Cottage Angel
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Kyle will live on in your words and his Spirit is always there.
Welcome to MPS.
April 3rd, 2017 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Kyle will live on in your words and his Spirit is always there.
Welcome to MPS.
April 3rd, 2017 01:38
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