Comments received on poems by Bay



Clouds
Goldfinch60 said:

Watching the clouds and the sky can be so wonderful.

Andy

November 8th, 2020 16:23

Clouds
orchidee said:

Good write Bay.

November 8th, 2020 06:50

Clouds
dusk arising said:

Lovely positive appreciation of the wonderful world we live in and of course the sky, an ever changing work of art.
Right up my street with this kind of poetry.

November 8th, 2020 05:19

The One
Evergreen said:

Awe this is cute! Loved it.

January 9th, 2020 23:57

Mourning
Fay Slimm. said:

The feel of sad loss and overwhelming depression makes this a haunt of a read - hope the message gets across to the one intended - a rhythmic flow sets a lighter vein to the whole piece.

September 7th, 2019 09:59

Mourning
Alta H Mabin said:

I absolutely loved reading this. Masterfully crafted words.

September 7th, 2019 07:21

Maybe?
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

I think there are different types of love like there are different types of hate
The love of our children is unbreakable
Other love is just not
Watch that heart but don\'t lock it away
Great questions Bay an enjoyable read
Loving your work keep writing

September 7th, 2019 04:18

Your Hands
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

This is a beautiful tribute to your Grandma B
She must have been very proud and I am sure will have taken that love with her

September 7th, 2019 04:11

Mourning
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Beautifully captured
Like summer coming the bright days get longer and brighter and one day you\'ll remember and smile and not cry... but we\'ll always cry...
BRAVO!

September 7th, 2019 03:55

Mourning
Clara said:

This is incredible. Such wonderful poems are being shared today. I feel blessed.
Reading this... There\'s such rhythm to the words, I found myself almost rapping at times to this.

Wonderful well rounded piece.

CLARA X

September 7th, 2019 03:28

Heartless Love
Blackhawkwings said:

Really nice and so vivid as though watching a movie.

February 6th, 2019 15:04

I’ve always hated you....
orchidee said:

I understand this. Meanwhile - I\'ve never hated ya! I\'ve liked ya more! heehee.

June 24th, 2018 01:48

Encapturing Sadness
emmat23 said:

truly very sad...no one should feel that way.

March 21st, 2018 18:27

10 Thoughts to a Freshman from a Senior
Lorna said:

I sure am glad I\'m not in high school these days............ did you add, you could get shot!

March 21st, 2018 12:08

Not a Day Goes By
clair jane said:

oh my god.... I\'m speachless.... This hit close to home, I just delt with a loss. This is beautiful

December 19th, 2017 22:01

Encapturing Sadness
Egyptianqt79 said:

beautiful

November 2nd, 2017 22:33

Encapturing Sadness
Michael taylor said:

No one can help you but yourself. Very sad

November 2nd, 2017 19:58

I was going to write a poem
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

October 30th, 2017 10:09

I was going to write a poem
Laura🌻 said:

I’m glad you did not pass!
I’m glad you passed it
on to us!
So relatable!
Thank you for sharing, Bayli!

October 30th, 2017 02:41

I was going to write a poem
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Because to write from the heart good poet is to correspond with God. Let’s not let Him find us squandering the gift dear sister...

October 29th, 2017 22:38

Lost
Gary Edward Geraci said:

We must learn to love ourselves as God loves us: unconditionally. Otherwise, indeed we are simply lost. For those friends whom are not quite there yet there’s NAMI.

October 29th, 2017 22:20

Lost
Noah said:

The burden of a secret such as so, I know that pain. A tough write. I love it.

September 28th, 2017 23:10

A Mother of a Daughter
BlueDays said:

Love this. Beautiful, sweet depiction of a mother and daughter relationship. Nothing quite like it. I am very close to my mum and I have 2 daughters so am well taught in the turbulent but everlasting strength that bonds us as women.

September 4th, 2017 06:27

Midnight Thoughts: My Grief
Jeff said:

Its never easy to lose a loved one...but I find solace in this:Each day that passes, is another day closer to seeing them again. This was very well written and a great write....nice job

June 13th, 2017 09:04

Midnight Thoughts: My Grief
Brycycle said:

Good write, I knew from the first line of what you were talking about. I am sorry for your loss.

June 13th, 2017 06:39

Tricked
willyweed said:

nice one sorry for your loss.

April 8th, 2017 11:21

Tricked
Garry said:

Very poignant. I particularly like the first verse. Also the last two lines of the second are very striking. Good writing well done.

April 8th, 2017 02:31

Tricked
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, it will get easier in time.

April 8th, 2017 01:19

Tricked
Gino said:

Nice write.

April 7th, 2017 23:31

Why?
Goldfinch60 said:

Why? The question that can never be answered. Why?
Good write.

April 7th, 2017 00:54

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