Comments received on poems by down the rabbithole



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MendedFences27 said:

I like this one. No surprise there, so well written. I especially liked the last stanza and two lines. \"The string slips............My heart.\" Heartstrings tied to a balloon, interesting concept and a great image. \"We simply unfold like leaves in the rain,\" also a great image, and you seem to have used some of my favorite words, which is why I love your poem. Really, really, good this one. - Phil A.

April 13th, 2017 20:06

The Moth
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

April 13th, 2017 00:19

Lost & Found
P.H.Rose said:

Garry took the words
Right out of my mouth.
Vivid picture perfectly
Discribed it....
Another good one...

April 12th, 2017 15:43

Unrequited
P.H.Rose said:

This is so very lovely
Heat and light in every
Word... Filled with
Passion.. Well done..

April 12th, 2017 15:39

The Moth
P.H.Rose said:

Love this DTRH
Really good poem

April 12th, 2017 15:37

The Moth
willyweed said:

nice poem good structure and flow. ww

April 12th, 2017 07:41

The Moth
willyweed said:



April 12th, 2017 07:40

The Moth
down the rabbithole said:

Comas? Glad you enjoyed it though

April 12th, 2017 05:33

Lost & Found
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write. Thank you for sharing.

April 12th, 2017 00:29

Lost & Found
elchupacabra said:

i love the style you gave this piece, well done

April 11th, 2017 20:05

Lost & Found
willyweed said:

Good style and nice visuals lovely garden you have there.

April 11th, 2017 06:29

Lost & Found
Garry said:

Some lovely language used to paint a vivid picture. Well done.

April 11th, 2017 06:23

Unrequited
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write, may that broken glass be mended.

April 11th, 2017 01:07

Unrequited
willyweed said:

wonderfully deep and painful

April 10th, 2017 17:05

Unrequited
rrodriguez said:

Beautiful poem.

April 10th, 2017 15:04

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