Comments received on poems by down the rabbithole
Sea of tears
L. B. Mek said:
\'How small must my self esteem be
Or how big must my love be
Or is it both?\'..
thanks for sharing
a relatable read, well written
March 24th, 2022 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'How small must my self esteem be
Or how big must my love be
Or is it both?\'..
thanks for sharing
a relatable read, well written
March 24th, 2022 04:41
Do you know how I know I love you?
L. B. Mek said:
unfiltered words of impassioned heartache,
celebrating while mourning, recollecting fondly while lamenting: thus be that lingering duality of a love cherished, wholeheartedly..
thanks for choosing to share
March 30th, 2021 05:22
L. B. Mek said:
unfiltered words of impassioned heartache,
celebrating while mourning, recollecting fondly while lamenting: thus be that lingering duality of a love cherished, wholeheartedly..
thanks for choosing to share
March 30th, 2021 05:22
Let me back in
jarcher54 said:
Aching to be understood indeed! At the end of this exquisitely sensitive piece, I almost ran upstairs to listen to my sleeping mate\'s heartbeat, which I must admit I have neglected to listen to lately. Of course it\'s 2 a.m., and she\'d have killed me for waking her!
October 18th, 2020 01:57
jarcher54 said:
Aching to be understood indeed! At the end of this exquisitely sensitive piece, I almost ran upstairs to listen to my sleeping mate\'s heartbeat, which I must admit I have neglected to listen to lately. Of course it\'s 2 a.m., and she\'d have killed me for waking her!
October 18th, 2020 01:57
The nights are the worst
Goldfinch60 said:
I know exactly how you feel as my wife passed recently and I have nobody to hold.
Andy
October 2nd, 2020 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
I know exactly how you feel as my wife passed recently and I have nobody to hold.
Andy
October 2nd, 2020 00:19
Stay
Goldfinch60 said:
One day may the right person come along and mend all those stitches in your heart and love will blossom.
Andy
October 1st, 2020 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
One day may the right person come along and mend all those stitches in your heart and love will blossom.
Andy
October 1st, 2020 00:11
Consumed
down the rabbithole said:
Thank you so much for your comments. I actually published this poem under the title ‘unrequited’ a while back but forgot I had and stumbled across it the other day so published it again by mistake.
September 4th, 2020 15:10
down the rabbithole said:
Thank you so much for your comments. I actually published this poem under the title ‘unrequited’ a while back but forgot I had and stumbled across it the other day so published it again by mistake.
September 4th, 2020 15:10
Consumed
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words, that adoration may well be returned one day if you show these words to that person.
September 4th, 2020 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words, that adoration may well be returned one day if you show these words to that person.
September 4th, 2020 00:16
Consumed
dusk arising said:
The phrasing here, your choice words display you are a fine poet indeed. I envy the romance of your word choice. I really felt the sensual way you describe \" I could paint your portrait more beautiful each time with the paint of all your caresses\".
Unconditional romantic devotion beautifully expressed.
September 3rd, 2020 21:45
dusk arising said:
The phrasing here, your choice words display you are a fine poet indeed. I envy the romance of your word choice. I really felt the sensual way you describe \" I could paint your portrait more beautiful each time with the paint of all your caresses\".
Unconditional romantic devotion beautifully expressed.
September 3rd, 2020 21:45
Consumed
jarcher54 said:
I appreciate how you use painting to embody that adoration, devotion that overwhelms you when you love another like that. Oh the frustration... all that and yet... you draw the reader in, so intense, so sensual, then boom. I\'d say thanks but I\'m still in shock!
September 3rd, 2020 18:29
jarcher54 said:
I appreciate how you use painting to embody that adoration, devotion that overwhelms you when you love another like that. Oh the frustration... all that and yet... you draw the reader in, so intense, so sensual, then boom. I\'d say thanks but I\'m still in shock!
September 3rd, 2020 18:29
The onion you made me
dusk arising said:
Excellent! So well constructed, I\'m envious.
Into my favourites for sure.
September 2nd, 2020 07:24
dusk arising said:
Excellent! So well constructed, I\'m envious.
Into my favourites for sure.
September 2nd, 2020 07:24
Coffee
MendedFences27 said:
They say coffee is a stimulant and alcohol a depressant , so what happens when I put a shot in my coffee. It\'s like a war going on in my cup and I end up with a drink that does nothing. Or maybe the coffee just stimulates my depression. So, I\'ll just add three spoonfuls of sugar and enjoy the ride,
Now I will have to watch people drink their coffees and try to read their minds. Oh may, what have you created? Coffee-people watching?
A whole lot of truth in your poem. That first cup in the morning means different things to different people. For some it\'s a high and for others a low. For me it\'s my 10AM wake up call. Terrific poem. -Phil A.
June 10th, 2019 14:19
MendedFences27 said:
They say coffee is a stimulant and alcohol a depressant , so what happens when I put a shot in my coffee. It\'s like a war going on in my cup and I end up with a drink that does nothing. Or maybe the coffee just stimulates my depression. So, I\'ll just add three spoonfuls of sugar and enjoy the ride,
Now I will have to watch people drink their coffees and try to read their minds. Oh may, what have you created? Coffee-people watching?
A whole lot of truth in your poem. That first cup in the morning means different things to different people. For some it\'s a high and for others a low. For me it\'s my 10AM wake up call. Terrific poem. -Phil A.
June 10th, 2019 14:19
Coffee
dusk arising said:
It feels like you are living a lost love and in pain. Your immediate surroundings become a stage for your pain to perform its play upon your otherwise resting mind.
Hopefully something positive will come along and share your arabica appreciation.
June 10th, 2019 04:36
dusk arising said:
It feels like you are living a lost love and in pain. Your immediate surroundings become a stage for your pain to perform its play upon your otherwise resting mind.
Hopefully something positive will come along and share your arabica appreciation.
June 10th, 2019 04:36
Ink talk
dusk arising said:
Confrontation of your deamons, kept at bay with a pen, mightier than the blade.
Long may it be for you.
This piece is all of these - sad, deep, entertaining with it\'s creativity and uplifting.
A gift to us poets who scrawl our heartfelt pains onto the page/screen.
January 24th, 2019 17:32
dusk arising said:
Confrontation of your deamons, kept at bay with a pen, mightier than the blade.
Long may it be for you.
This piece is all of these - sad, deep, entertaining with it\'s creativity and uplifting.
A gift to us poets who scrawl our heartfelt pains onto the page/screen.
January 24th, 2019 17:32
Strawberry fire
Neville said:
as long as you enjoyed the experience and no one was hurt as a consequence, sounds fine by me.... nice little bit of explicit poetry never did anyone any harm ... N
January 24th, 2019 09:22
Neville said:
as long as you enjoyed the experience and no one was hurt as a consequence, sounds fine by me.... nice little bit of explicit poetry never did anyone any harm ... N
January 24th, 2019 09:22
Ink talk
Neville said:
Yes, keep writing.. this is the first poem of yours that I have had the pleasure of reading so far, and am sure it won\'t be the last... a most original write.... Neville
January 24th, 2019 09:16
Neville said:
Yes, keep writing.. this is the first poem of yours that I have had the pleasure of reading so far, and am sure it won\'t be the last... a most original write.... Neville
January 24th, 2019 09:16
Stages
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write.
The Good will always outweigh and outlast the bad.
December 13th, 2018 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write.
The Good will always outweigh and outlast the bad.
December 13th, 2018 01:34
White Love
charlesbarrett said:
Beautiful piece. The love you share runs very deep. Willingness to take that pain from another is love in its purest form. Thank you for sharing.
July 24th, 2017 07:25
charlesbarrett said:
Beautiful piece. The love you share runs very deep. Willingness to take that pain from another is love in its purest form. Thank you for sharing.
July 24th, 2017 07:25
Strawberry fire
MendedFences27 said:
Very zesty. Great mix of metaphor and directness. Be careful, the fruit of such a relationship can quickly become rotten tomatoes. -Phil A.
April 23rd, 2017 21:13
MendedFences27 said:
Very zesty. Great mix of metaphor and directness. Be careful, the fruit of such a relationship can quickly become rotten tomatoes. -Phil A.
April 23rd, 2017 21:13
Reminiscing
willyweed said:
very well done romantic piece, sexy and as smooth as butter. write on ww
April 21st, 2017 06:54
willyweed said:
very well done romantic piece, sexy and as smooth as butter. write on ww
April 21st, 2017 06:54
The night I hated you
P.H.Rose said:
Superb !!!! Bravo, Bravo !!!
I love this DTRH...
Passion in each passage..
I can actually feel it
As I read the words..
And can almost hear
You speak it...
So very good..
Well done lady, well done..
April 15th, 2017 09:36
P.H.Rose said:
Superb !!!! Bravo, Bravo !!!
I love this DTRH...
Passion in each passage..
I can actually feel it
As I read the words..
And can almost hear
You speak it...
So very good..
Well done lady, well done..
April 15th, 2017 09:36
UNFOLDED
down the rabbithole said:
Those are my two favourite parts of the poem too. Thank you for your lovely comment
April 14th, 2017 03:21
down the rabbithole said:
Those are my two favourite parts of the poem too. Thank you for your lovely comment
April 14th, 2017 03:21
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