Comments on community poems by mvvenkataraman
- Who do you trust? (Hzugman)
Mind will act smart,
But, heart will comfort,
By playing a kind...
January 5th, 2023 03:02 - A Purpose To Live (Undreamed_friend)
We always need a purpose to live,
Once that is firmly established,
Then,...
January 4th, 2023 21:25 - Life As The Economy Drones (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
First I studied the meaning friend,
Only then I noticed the...
January 4th, 2023 21:20 - Bravery (Natalie Heisey)
In the eighth line, it is \"were\"
In the 16th line, it is...
January 3rd, 2023 12:53 - A Hearts Complications (Rick j. lewis)
At age 14, I didn\'t even know how to talk in English,
Language and...
January 3rd, 2023 12:45 - Fading Away (Sassy Lou)
Superb free verse indeed,
The flow is excellent,
The meaning is...
January 3rd, 2023 12:39 - Relax (PurpleGlasses)
Relax or else life will tax,
Tension and worry, you axe,
Relax to end...
January 3rd, 2023 12:36 - Bald Is Beautiful (BlessedbyGod)
One fully bald-headed actor in Tamil Nadu,
Who lost hair at the age of 25...
January 2nd, 2023 21:53 - Observe Wisdom. (Goldfinch60)
Knowledge is gathered by all,
But, unfortunately wisdom is...
January 2nd, 2023 21:46 - December (Undreamed_friend)
Great philosophy is sprinkled in your poem,
I feel you are sad and feel...
January 1st, 2023 22:13 - New Year (Dr. Soma)
I totally agree with your poetic message,
We must await solutions for...
January 1st, 2023 22:07 - 2023 (Randyjohnson71)
An optimistic poetry to bring great hope,
May your feelings become a...
January 1st, 2023 22:04 - Death (PurpleGlasses)
Though your poem contains just four lines,
It has colossal meaning to...
January 1st, 2023 22:00 - Welcome New Year. (Goldfinch60)
New Year and Nature are combined by you in your poem,
I am sure it is a...
January 1st, 2023 21:56 - Old year vs new (NafisaSB)
I like this reasonable comparison,
You have perfectly analyzed indeed,
A...
January 1st, 2023 01:28
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