Comments on community poems by Ryszard
- Testing (2781)
Loaded with emotional clichés, overtly sentimental but lacks substance.
February 26th, 2023 13:49
- Little Davy Blue Eyes. (David Wakeling)
Ouch, dripping with cliché\'s and emotional drivel. Painful read.
February 16th, 2023 17:54
- The Potion (Paul Bell)
Lol, wicked.
October 23rd, 2022 12:09
- The Conversation (Paul Bell)
I felt for both antagonists and the banter felt real, unforced, and fresh....
September 27th, 2022 17:39
- Grains Of Sand (Kurt Philip Behm)
Enchanted (by the meter)
Mystified (at first)
Elated (to see the...
September 27th, 2022 13:21
- I Felt Pretty Today... (That quiet girl)
Honest, raw, the rhyme softens the blow. Powerful.
September 26th, 2022 22:10
- Eclipse (Audraburwell)
Tender sensitivity entwined with stunning imagery. Great flow and a...
September 26th, 2022 14:35
- A beautiful vase (Lovepoetry)
I liked this very much. The poem is so... balanced, with wonder...
September 26th, 2022 10:47
- Becoming Tomorrow (Kurt Philip Behm)
Never thought of it quite like this but it\'s so true. Brilliant insights...
September 26th, 2022 10:35
- Vodka& Coke (Paul Bell)
Brilliant fun, thoroughly enjoyed this.
September 25th, 2022 11:31
- End Game (John Prophet)
A waterfall of words and meaning, hidden rocks in the current create...
September 23rd, 2022 16:27
- Quiet (Candlegirl21)
Simple yet multi-layered. An elegantly human poem.
September 21st, 2022 12:36
- Winter, Winter (TheDarkQueen)
Infectiously happy poem.
September 21st, 2022 12:30