Comments on community poems by Augustus
- coherence , beer and potato chips (Avigail)
How you want to be is none of my business. Love your surprises.
September 14th, 2016 11:31 - Darkness Above (Notapoet)
Flows well for me until "not very fun."
September 14th, 2016 11:22 - BEST POEMS ARE PALINDROMES ARE POEMS BEST (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Maybe it was the scotch last night, or lack of sleep, or my inability to...
September 14th, 2016 11:04 - Face (Lovedud)
There is such a longing for something that you know in the end will never...
September 13th, 2016 18:39 - Silently Pray (Ternic73)
I can't imagine what it must be like to be a soldier in a war zone. Your...
September 13th, 2016 18:29 - Quintessence of freedom (Master Sora)
It is almost like getting in touch with your inner child.
September 13th, 2016 18:24 - Irony: Self-Destruct How to Watch Your Soul Die (More Medic)
Diary of depression.
Well done.
September 13th, 2016 18:22 - Just A Thought (Jeff)
Yes, embrace the hurt, pain and depression. Recognize these, feel them and...
September 13th, 2016 18:17 - Mothers Milk (Just10)
Your tribute to and description of innocence is so tender, yet profound....
September 13th, 2016 18:11 - Non Awareness (Avigail)
Your example of things that spread below our sensory radar wreaking havoc...
September 13th, 2016 17:00 - Do you know what I wanted (Arevalolo)
Ouch! Message received. Nice.
September 13th, 2016 16:46 - He (FruitfulSpirit)
Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Hal le a lu jah! Thanks.
September 13th, 2016 16:43 - Do you even notice (Stephanie Showers)
Lovely poem, but I did not get the suicide. I saw it as breaking a...
September 13th, 2016 16:35 - The translucent bubble (Daniel dawes)
Lovely.
September 13th, 2016 16:26 - Blue Ribbon (Abpoet18)
Lots of blue ribbons.
Wishing you success.
September 13th, 2016 16:25
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