Comments on community poems by Augustus
- Painful Memory (Jeff)
Powerful. Reassured to see one of your replies today. Reads well.
September 11th, 2016 09:06 - Metonymy (Augustus)
September 11th, 2016 08:48 - Scars Upon My Body (Frances.Zacharias97)
Deeply personal. Difficult to deal with. Nice job.
September 10th, 2016 23:37 - Deaths Quota Flying High (Kurt Philip Behm)
I take it many were not unhappy to see him go and the Raven took note....
September 10th, 2016 20:43 - Earthquake (Izzi Lynn)
You nailed it. If there are problems we can all decide to ignore them, sit...
September 10th, 2016 20:27 - The theory of collective cells consciousness (Avigail)
I take it you are aware of the science behind your proposition. For...
September 10th, 2016 20:17 - The Evil In Us All (Jeff)
Has a nice flow and rhythm.
Very understandable.
Portrays theme in depth...
September 10th, 2016 19:14 - This world today (Quietstorm_Dru)
Reminds me of Rap music. Consistent theme.
Offers way to fix the problem...
September 10th, 2016 19:08 - I Am Me Wholeheartedly (FruitfulSpirit)
Could I be so confident. Enjoyed reading. (I am having a little bit of...
September 10th, 2016 18:58 - The Hungry Id (Seeker)
A serious read. I get a sense of spiraling deeper and deeper downward....
September 10th, 2016 10:05 - coming Storm (Tony36)
Painted a picture I could imagine.
September 10th, 2016 08:19 - No Time For Transfiguration Today (Seeker)
Sticks to a consistent theme
Clever
Easily read and...
September 10th, 2016 08:15 - Love of My Life (Moontigerntn)
I can relate. Nice.
September 9th, 2016 20:15 - Therapy (Eli)
Unrequited love? Wounded? Hope? Got me thinking. I enjoyed it. Oops, just...
September 9th, 2016 20:09 - Us. (Pierce_The_Ky)
Nice.
September 9th, 2016 20:06
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