Comments on community poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
- Shadow by figure\'s in the darkness of the room (MThackerson)
Reminds me of a djinn that I was seeing in nightmares. U wrote it in a...
November 17th, 2016 02:00 - The Melted Clock (Kasap89)
Enjoyed the play on words and the blending of nightmares and daydreams. U...
November 17th, 2016 01:55 - Honest Reflection (Emilyeaton101)
A beautiful positive poem inspiring swell. Rhymed well as well. U r right...
November 17th, 2016 01:51 - White Cross (Yorke)
Wow a nice patriotic tribute to the soldier and I like the mention of...
November 16th, 2016 15:08 - So High (SilentLaugh)
Woah sarcastic and seems to about being happy about the end of a...
November 16th, 2016 11:39 - Conquering Phobias (Survivor48)
This is a great motivating poem uniquely telling how to beat phobias. I...
November 16th, 2016 01:12 - Breaking (Taliac.)
A creative imaginative poem on a common situation in many parts of the...
November 16th, 2016 01:02 - Friends. (Kevin browne)
Wow a sublime great poem on the need of friendship . Super freeverse...
November 16th, 2016 00:55 - tangled in you (Inink)
Woah sensational and sensual. I like honey in poems. This was enjoyable...
November 15th, 2016 14:56 - Trust takes years to build (Quietstorm_Dru)
Wow super poem witty and appealing with fine twists. Yes trust could take...
November 15th, 2016 14:53 - A day of whites. (P.H.Rose)
Wow beautifully sentimental, I like marrieds poem since they portray more...
November 15th, 2016 08:22 - Trapped (EmmaR1)
This great poem reminds that this world is only transient and transitory...
November 15th, 2016 08:13 - VOID IN A TIN BORROWED FROM THE 1890S (Giantgentlebear)
Wow the imagery and muse is awesome here. I like the wording and...
November 15th, 2016 08:08 - Speak (JustABird)
Expresses how relationships can become robotic. Creatively crafted muse...
November 15th, 2016 01:40 - Severed Eyes (DezyraSatyre)
Dark poem in great sublime wording. The stark phrasing and word choice is...
November 14th, 2016 08:26
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