Comments on community poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
- I\'m Trapped (WriteBeLight)
Oopsy revenge of the bugs eh? What a tongue in cheek poem n though....
December 2nd, 2016 07:43 - The Old Barber\'s Shop (Michael Champion)
Described in awesome rhyming in mod ballad style wow and very interesting....
November 23rd, 2016 09:48 - Haiku: Desert (Elegant_Style)
What a crackling cracking imagery haiku. I find even deserts poetic. And u...
November 23rd, 2016 09:41 - Tail Impale (IRonnie)
Wow what a super poem humoured and witty. Awesome rhyming too. I enjoyed...
November 23rd, 2016 04:48 - Our children (Christina8)
Why wouldn\'t I like such a lovely heartwarming poem in fabulous flow and...
November 23rd, 2016 00:35 - I love you, i despise you (Nicolerobinson)
Woah I could relate to this poem as to mixed emotions about love. Clever...
November 23rd, 2016 00:24 - A.M.E.R.I.C.A.N L.E.A.D.E.R.S (BSmooth)
Woahba ranting political poem expressing the dejection with the leaders in...
November 23rd, 2016 00:21 - War (Wolf2778)
All about war poetically well presented. The last line sums it up so...
November 23rd, 2016 00:09 - Fight (TheWritingInstrument)
Emotive muse expressed in poetic lyrical wordings and tones. Effective and...
November 23rd, 2016 00:06 - what to feel what to do (Kitkat231997)
A cool rap like songish lyrical poem in bouncy rhyming. Thumbs up. Keep...
November 22nd, 2016 04:39 - Why? (Gothic_Girl)
An appealing poem on a very common life love problem and u wrote it in a...
November 22nd, 2016 04:37 - The Cloak Of Forgiveness (Kurt Philip Behm)
Wow great analogy here in metaphor. The comparison is impressively done....
November 21st, 2016 23:20 - untitled (Littlegoat23)
Yes pls we need more of yor awesome rhyming poetry here, pls don\'t leave...
November 21st, 2016 23:17 - Pressure Gauge (Augustus)
Wow such a creatively awesome poem esp from the 2nd stanza onwards where...
November 21st, 2016 23:14 - Don\'t Do Drugs (Tony36)
A very motivating poem and I love didactic topics. This is so true about...
November 21st, 2016 10:42
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