Comments on community poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽



  • I\'m Trapped (WriteBeLight) Oopsy revenge of the bugs eh? What a tongue in cheek poem n though....
    December 2nd, 2016 07:43
  • The Old Barber\'s Shop (Michael Champion) Described in awesome rhyming in mod ballad style wow and very interesting....
    November 23rd, 2016 09:48
  • Haiku: Desert (Elegant_Style) What a crackling cracking imagery haiku. I find even deserts poetic. And u...
    November 23rd, 2016 09:41
  • Tail Impale (IRonnie) Wow what a super poem humoured and witty. Awesome rhyming too. I enjoyed...
    November 23rd, 2016 04:48
  • Our children (Christina8) Why wouldn\'t I like such a lovely heartwarming poem in fabulous flow and...
    November 23rd, 2016 00:35
  • I love you, i despise you (Nicolerobinson) Woah I could relate to this poem as to mixed emotions about love. Clever...
    November 23rd, 2016 00:24
  • A.M.E.R.I.C.A.N L.E.A.D.E.R.S (BSmooth) Woahba ranting political poem expressing the dejection with the leaders in...
    November 23rd, 2016 00:21
  • War (Wolf2778) All about war poetically well presented. The last line sums it up so...
    November 23rd, 2016 00:09
  • Fight (TheWritingInstrument) Emotive muse expressed in poetic lyrical wordings and tones. Effective and...
    November 23rd, 2016 00:06
  • what to feel what to do (Kitkat231997) A cool rap like songish lyrical poem in bouncy rhyming. Thumbs up. Keep...
    November 22nd, 2016 04:39
  • Why? (Gothic_Girl) An appealing poem on a very common life love problem and u wrote it in a...
    November 22nd, 2016 04:37
  • The Cloak Of Forgiveness (Kurt Philip Behm) Wow great analogy here in metaphor. The comparison is impressively done....
    November 21st, 2016 23:20
  • untitled (Littlegoat23) Yes pls we need more of yor awesome rhyming poetry here, pls don\'t leave...
    November 21st, 2016 23:17
  • Pressure Gauge (Augustus) Wow such a creatively awesome poem esp from the 2nd stanza onwards where...
    November 21st, 2016 23:14
  • Don\'t Do Drugs (Tony36) A very motivating poem and I love didactic topics. This is so true about...
    November 21st, 2016 10:42


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