BRIANSODES

MY BUNNY RABBITS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet

 

 

MY BUNNY RABBITS are so sweet

You should see them ~ in their run so neat 

 

Bunnies playing in the fresh green grass

Unfazed by all the things that pass      

No one considers a bunny is crass

NO ~ I will poke you in the eye ~ if

You're thinkin' ~ Yummy Rabbit Pie !

 

RABBITS are for fun ~ NOT Rabbit stew

A Rabbit is a very cute pet too

Black ones ~ White ones ~ Grey one for you

Big ones ~ small ones and some are BLUE !

I love to hold and stroke my Rabbits

They make me laugh ~ with their mating habits

So I have a DOE & BUCK ~ I'll get some babies with a bit of luck ! 

 

Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Cuddly Love ~ BRIAN

 

This poem is presented as a Rhyming ~ Acrostic ~ 2 5 7 Sonnet ~ OK 

Comments6

  • Goldfinch60

    My eye is going to be sore then Brian.

    Our daughter has two rabbits and the stewed rabbit joke does not go down well with her either.

    Good fun write.

    • BRIANSODES

      Thanks ANDY ~ Lot of MPS poems are very sombre and BUNNIES make everyone smile. Pleased you daughter has rabbits ~ great fun pets. The problem is we don't eat cats or dogs (except in a siege !) but we do eat rabbits ! If I serve it I always tell my guests it is chicken because those that won't eat LAMB won't eat BUNNIES either but (oddly) it is OK to eat CHICKENS ! Yours BRIAN

    • Michael Edwards

      I was raised on rabbit meat but regardless I enjoyed your poem and yes they don't need walkies unlike dogs and cats (sadly only a few cat owners take them for walks - most let them stray).

      • BRIANSODES

        Ahhhhhhhhhhh MICHAEL ~ that explains why your Poems an' Pictures jump all over the place ~ you surprise us every morning ~ and like all my BUNNIES you are up and lively very early ! I was raised on PORK (no comment !). Thank for your comment and I agree CATS are largely left ti their own (de)vices ~ Yours BRIAN

      • Fay Slimm

        Your bunny picture looks so cute Brian and I agree little bunnies make wonderful pets - - I have my Tessa dog though at the moment and take her for long walks which we both love.

        • BRIANSODES

          Thanks FAY I agree ~perhaps Bunnies are more for Babies. As we get older a Dog provides companionship and exercise and a Cat is wonderful companion especially for the housebound. In my extended Family there are many for whom their Dog or Cat is a lifeline 1 None of the 50+ have a RABBIT ~ except in a casserole ! Yours B. Pleased you liked the poem & the picture !

        • orchidee

          A fine write!

          • BRIANSODES

            Thanks STEPHEN ~ lased you liked it ~ BRIAN

          • Christina S

            Wonderful poem about bunnies! We go to the fair and look at all the different kinds every year. Very good rhyming acrostic, not easy to do! Hugs-Christina

            • BRIANSODES

              Well CHRIS you know I always like a challenge ! The meter needs a bit of tweaking ~ but I got the rhyme right ~ if not the rhythm ~ it's never a perfect World ! It is a pleasure to go to County Shows and Bird & Rabbit Shows ~ in the UK ~ to enjoy the cuteness of the different breeds ! Bunny Hugs for you ~ BRIAN !

            • WriteBeLight

              Bunnies are great. I had two when I was young. Very sad when we lost them to old age though. Love their noses :)

              • BRIANSODES

                YES HONEY ~ naselwise they are much cuter than Elephants ~ Bunny Hugs ~ BRIAN



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