WriteBeLight

I Feel Better

I feel better when,

I wake up refreshed.

Grateful for the day,

After blissful rest.

 

Knowing that I,

Didn’t waste time,

Trying to clean up,

The not-cleanable slime.

 

Grateful that I,

Learned a great lesson.

Friend poets like you here,

Are truly a blessing.

 

Happy to know,

That when some cry wolf,

Their true colors come thru,

As a result of the truth.

 

So, yes, I feel great!

For each bright, new day.

To write down in poetry,

What’s on my mind, to say.

 

Putting into words,

Good things and what bothers,

Dedicated to do so,

Without harm to others.

 

But, there are those,

Tried to trouble my mind.

I will defend myself,

In a few of my lines.

 

Feeling once again better,

The truth is just that,

Never making of myself,

Someone’s welcome mat.

Comments10

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    YES INDEED FRIEND ~ Friendship through Poetry is what MPS is all about. It is an innocent sharing & caring of HEARTS and MINDS. Because we communicate through the written word ONLY ~ none of the normal barriers exist ~ which is so so beautiful. So Gender ~ Age ~ Colour ~ Culture ~ Creed ~ Country ~ Class (things which often divide) are set to one side and we like each other and bond ~ through our mutual love and sharing and commenting on POETRY. Love the Structure and SUBJECT of your Poem ~ Your Poetic Friend as ever ~ BRIAN (UK)

    • WriteBeLight

      As always, like your take on things Brian! Thanks so much for such a lovely comment. You are so wise! Appreciate it!

    • Heather T

      No troubles, just peace of mind, because light finds its way through the darkness. 😊

      • WriteBeLight

        Very true Heather! Thanks.

      • Michael Edwards

        Thankfully there are many good poets and this site has them in plenty. Glad it's all worked out WBL

        • WriteBeLight

          Me too, Michael! The storm has passed.

        • FredPeyer

          WBL, I love your writing. Need to go into the archives to read some more!

          • WriteBeLight

            Appreciate that Fred. Love the bike!

          • Candlewitch

            a great wealth of kindly thoughts! thank you for this!

            *hugs, Cat

            • WriteBeLight

              You are very welcome Cat. Hugs back at you πŸ™‚

            • Fay Slimm.

              Ah - just to look at that great baby smiling with gratefulness for a new day made the poem mean ever more with its positive outlook despite those who try to trouble our minds - a really upbuilding read and thank you for sharing it .

              • WriteBeLight

                Thanks Fay! I, too, thought the picture of the baby was reflecting what I am feeling. I appreciate your take on the poem. πŸ™‚

              • Hopey_xx

                A great write Wbl, it's so nice to read your poetry again😊

                • WriteBeLight

                  Thanks so much Hopey. You make me feel better! πŸ™‚

                • Christina8

                  I agree with your poem totally. SO glad to see that you are back!

                  • WriteBeLight

                    I missed you Christina! Thanks for stopping by. Hope you are enjoying the Summer! Thanks for the comment πŸ™‚

                  • Goldfinch60

                    May your life always be filled with Love, joy and happiness. Good write.

                    • WriteBeLight

                      Yours as well Goldfinch! Thank you so very much!

                    • Quemis

                      Good to see your standing up for yourself, and glad to see you back.

                      : ) great piece! Such happy! Much wow! XD

                      • WriteBeLight

                        Thanks Psentinel! Glad to see your great face as well!



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