Man in Orange.

Goldfinch60



I raised my head from my slumber,

Kissed my darling wife,

And got up.

I poked my head through the curtains

To see the outside world

When I saw him,

This man walking,

Walking down the middle of the road.

Orange coat,

Orange trousers,

Orange bag,

Black boots,

Balding head.

Not a sight I have seen before,

Not at six in the morning,

This man in orange.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 8th, 2017 01:41
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is true, quite a strange sight first thing in the morning.
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 58
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  • Michael Edwards

    Intriguing write and great to hear the Ying Tong Song again - what do our American friends make of it I wonder.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks Michael. It was a very strange sight first thing in the morning. Don't know how our American friends will react to the Ying Tong Song but it is all a bit of fun.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      DON'T YOU REALISE ANDY ~ THAT YOU HAVE BEEN TANGOED ! The future is ORANGE so get used to it ! It is the BRITISH capacity to ACT STUPID that is our greatest asset (We need Clown Boris) and that in the end wins us the most medals. Spike ~ Harry ~ Peter three Genii and everything the GOONS did proves the maxim ~ The whole is always greater than the sum of the parts ! Long after MO ZART (and His Rhythm Boys) are forgotten the YING TONG SONG will still play on ! Thanks for caring & sharing ANDY ~ Yours BRIAN

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Brian. The Iyng Tong Song may well be remembered but Wolfgang Amadeus much more so.

      • orchidee

        Oh lol, a fine write G/F.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thanks Orchi, quite a sight first thing in the morning!

          • orchidee

            Was you dazzled by the sight?! hehe.

          • WriteBeLight

            Maybe he should cut out all of that orange juice! Very citrusy write Goldfinch!

          • Goldfinch60

            I didn't know that eating oranges turned sight orange. Lol.

          • Louis Gibbs

            Not something one sees every day. However, if I were walking down the middle of a road, I would choose to wearing orange too. Enjoyed this cute poem, Goldie!

          • malubotelho

            Maybe he was dressed to check the road to find any damages before trafic begin. Let him know he is poetry now.

            • Goldfinch60

              He was on his way to work, he was a construction worker. Thanks M.

            • Edward Charles McDevitt

              I find the little jingle intriguing. Nicely done. I had to "Google" the song and Lo and Behold..

            • Tony36

              Great write

              • Goldfinch60

                Thanks Tony.

                • Tony36

                  Welcome

                • Christina8

                  Very nicely written. What a bright wake up call!

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you. It sure was!



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