ANGELA ~ CURRENT LOVE OF MY LIFE !
A N ELUSIVE DREAM ~ The Perfect Partner
N O ONE succeeds ~ but we all seek ~ in vain ?
E ACH GIRL I Woo ~ looks nice enough ~ and so
L OOKS RIGHT for me ~ "Falling in Love again !"
U NLESS some unseen factor spoils my chance
S HE COULD just lead me in a merry dance !
I SAY "It's better to have Loved & Lost"
V ENTURED INNOCENT ~ into Loves Honey pot
E XPECTED SOMETHING ~ and then nothing gained
D ON'T all romances have a hidden plot ?
R EMEMBER ALL ~ the Goods and Bads of past
E XPECTED LOVE'S SWEET DREAM ~ to last and last ?
A MAN can dream ~ a Lady makes provision
M AN'S DREAM ? Is Real Estate ~ LADY'S ? A DECISION !
Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN XOX
This Poem is presented as Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet ~ OK
The versification is 6 6 2 but this does not fit the word pattern !
Th Rhyme pattern is xaxabb xcxcdd ee ! Hope this helps to
understand the structure of the Poem. I could have split the
WORD PATTERN (2 7 5) into 6 6 2 but it is an Acrostic in
addition to it being a Sonnet ! What do you think ?
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
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Good write, your love is out there for you.
THANKS ANDY ~ Into every life a Little Love should come ! Yours BRIAN
Beautifully written Brian
Thanks AP ~ in all my Poems I strive for a symbiosis of FORM (structure) and FUNCTION (subject) ~ Yours BRIAN
Perfect form and structure to your appealing rhyme Brian - best of all wishes for your success with the lady.
Thanks FAY ~ I know yu appreciate Form & Function in a Poem ~ I always try to do my best ! I know I'm old enough to settle down ~ but is any man ever wise enough ? I do own my own Flat so that is the first rung in the Real Estate ladder ! Thanks for your encouragement ~ Yours as ever BRIAN.
Great structure as always Brian - works so well.
WELL MICHAEL ~ You know me well ~ two essentials in a POEM for reading and recitability ~ FORM & FUNCTION ! I am a Performance Poet and I walk (humbly) in the great snowprints of Noggin the Nog of the Norseland and memories of his great sagas round the camp fires ~ beyond the Arctic Circle ! Last time I visited (North of TROMSO) his Great-grandson said to me BRIYON ~ "If it cannot be recited it cannot be a POEM" Perhaps I should publish that on MPS with the risk of offending at least half of our MEMBERS ! Yours BRIAN
I remember Noggin well and - yes you might offend a good few but I won't say more or I will fall into that trap as well.
Thanks Brian. I'm a bit un-cultuerd poetically, re: structures, etc,. I don't have any structure when I'm on the sherries. I should write some rubbish when I've had three or four! lol.
ANDY ~ Seems like when you are filled with the right kind of Spirit ~ You write poems in perfect meter ~ Pleased you enjoyed it ~ BRIAN
Cooeee! Steven here (Orchidee), not Andy (Goldfinch). Well, maybe he does hymn-poems too! Erm, one way to tell the difference is that I'm a phantom whisky-waterer. Goldie is gonna shoot me for it - heretical it is! That TUI - Today's Useless Info. lol.
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Lovely poem full of love and explanation. After all thanks for the literature school. I even bought a poetry dictionary but it just arrived and had no time to read it yet. Still I keep writing without any knowledge of structure. Plan to learn one day.
HI MALU ~ LOVE YOUR NEW PICTURE YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL ! Thanks for your comment much appreciated ! Classical poetic structure is academic but rewarding ! A Poem must have Form & Function to be reciteable ! Every blessing with your dictionary ~ Love as always BRIAN XOX
Thank you Brian
Cleverly constructed poem, Brian! I enjoyed it, as well as the picture of your beautiful lady-friend! Congratulations!
Thanks LOUIS ~ pleased you liked the Poem and its structure ! Yes ANGELA is very beautiful visually ~ but her character is even more beautiful ~ I am twice Blessed ~ yours ~ BRIAN
Yes you are. If you ever get tired of her, let me know!
Now look, lol. I tell people they can call me what they like - within reason! Just that they don't me Janet! (name picked out by random, me being daft!). lol
Beautiful write
THANKS TONY ~ A Beautiful Girl ~ deserves a beautiful POEM ~ BRIAN Please check my DESSERTS FUSION ~ Thanks B.
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It is so wonderful to live in love. Poem, the food for love.
Nice writing.
YES INDEED FRIEND ~ POETRY (like Music) is the Food of Love. Take heart into every Life some Love must come. Thanks for your comment ~ BRIAN
I think your poem is beautiful the way it is! Angela is very lucky. I hope you have found your love as I have found mine. Again, great write! Hugs-Christina
Thanks CHRISTINA ~ Pleased you liked my Love Poem ! Love is illusive but we are exhorted to ASK and we will receive ~ SEEK and you will find ~ KNOCK and it shall be opened unto you. It's true in Love as well as Life ! Hugs ~ BRIAN
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