Christina8

A Happy Poem

I have so many notebooks of writes,

so many personal and dark

So much has changed in this past

year, like someone set off a spark

 

Although I have shared some sadness

and hurt with you all

I no longer feel that heavy burden

nor feel like I'm facing a brick wall

 

I was encouraged by someone to write

as often as I could--that eased my pain

Now I smile and laugh a lot more  

and I can easily see my gains

 

I'll look back to my dark poetry

to help me reflect and grow

Who knows? Someday I might go back there

But right now I'm happier than you know

 

Comments13

  • WL Schuett

    Love it ! Good writing happy writing I am glad for you !

    • Christina8

      Thanks Bill! Much appreciated!

    • Michael Edwards

      Great uplifting write - now how about writing a whimsical piece - say a limerick or something similar - what is life without a smile?

      • Christina8

        I will look into that! Thanks for the suggestion!

      • orchidee

        A fine write C. Go back to the dark readings if you wish, if it helps any time. I would probably prefer non-dark readings myself.

        • Christina8

          Nope, I'm gonna try happy poems for a while!

        • Laura

          I hope you’ll never go back to the dark ones...
          but, as you said,
          it’s a good reminder of what
          you have now!
          Looking back makes us appreciate
          what we have now!
          A great write!
          Thank you for sharing!
          ~Laura~

          • Christina8

            Thank you, I appreciate it!

          • myself and me

            A happy poem from a happy heart. Make me happy too.

            • Christina8

              I'm so glad m&m! I really do appreciate it!

            • Simple-Man87

              Maintain that happiness. We all deserve to be happy. It's your time now. Thank you for that uplifting write.

              • Christina8

                Thanks SM! I appreciate the positivity!!

              • Fay Slimm.

                A really good move forward and put so well in poetic terms it makes a great uplifting write dear Christina - keep going toward the light and dark will creep quietly away. xx

                • Christina8

                  Thanks Fay! I'm making the best effort I can to stay in the light! I appreciate your positive comment!

                • BRIAN & ANGELA

                  I AM H A P P Y ~ IAM H A P P Y ~ I know I am ~ I'm sure I am ~ I AM H A P P Y ! What a difference a few days make ! Love you ~ love your mood ~ thanks for caring ! Happy Hugs ~ Brother BRIAN

                  • Christina8

                    So glad a poem could spark that much happiness!! Thanks so much! Happy hugs back--Christina

                  • Dear--JaneDoe

                    Love it, amazing technique!

                    • Christina8

                      Thank you I appreciate it!!

                    • Av

                      Youre very good at reflective and self searching writes...hood stuff☺💛

                      • Christina8

                        Thanks so much Av!! It's appreciated and thanks for saving as a fav!

                      • FredPeyer

                        Me too I am happy for you, Christina! If writing makes you happy and helps ease your burden, that is so much better than what other people use, such as alcohol, uppers, etc.
                        I actually had a smile on my face when reading your poem! Which goes to show, you are not only making yourself happier, you are spreading that happiness around!

                        • Christina8

                          Fred, thank you so much, that in turn made ME smile! I really appreciate your kind words. More than you know! Thanks again!---Christina

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Good positive write, going back is always a bad idea, go forward the future is always bright.

                          • Christina8

                            Thanks Gold, I will keep that thought in mind! :-)

                          • Neville

                            in a world of predominant gray.. you provide a little ray of golden sunshine here.... Neville

                            • Christina8

                              Thank you so much for your kind feedback!!



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